The Last Story

[Zipporahss]

Originally Posted by varsha

CHAPTER 10

DESTINY ISLAND

"Hey Sora, I’ve been wondering about Rainer" answered Riku. "What do you mean?" asked Sora. "What if she didn't die in the shipwreck, what if she was shot away to a different world?" asked Riku. "That's impossible, there is no access to the other worlds" answered Sora. "But Sora, remember the war was on before, there still is a chance" answered Riku getting a little excited. "Riku your speaking nonsense, I went to nearly all the worlds and not a single one had a sighting of Rainer" answered Sora. "THAT’S BECAUSE YOU WERN'T LOOKING FOR HER!! SORA SHE WAS YOUR TRUE FREIND, ONE THAT STUCK UP FOR YOU AND YOU RETERNED THE FAVOUR BY REPLACING HER WITH KIARI!!" yelled Riku. Sora fell of the tree terrified. "Sorry I just wish I did something rather than waste the time I had to look for her ” answered Riku after calming down. ”It’s ok, hey if king Mickey calls us on another adventure we’ll go look for her” cheered Sora. “There’s one in a million chance of that happening” mumbled Riku. As soon as he finish he looked around and found out Sora wasn’t on the tree, then he heard him calling out and telling him to come down to the beach.

SEA SHORE

As he got closer he notice something or some one was washed up on the beach right next to Sora. When he arrived he saw it was a girl with brown hair as brown as chocolate, she was wearing an Organization uniform just without the shoes and hood and her pants and coat were ripped. “Is this the girl from the capsule?” thought Riku. “Riku are you awake?” yelled Sora as he stared at the girl. “What… of course I am… she looks familiar” answered Riku after coming out of his trance. “OH CRAP!!!! SHE’S STOPPED BREATHING!!!” yelled Sora. “Well do CPR” answered Riku while trying to find his phone. “But” wined Sora. “No buts, your learning at school so this is the best opportunity” answered Riku after giving up looking for his phone. “Bet you did it with lots of GIRLS!” smirked Sora. He bent down and started doing CPR. Suddenly she opened her eyes while Sora was doing the mouth to mouth part and punched him to the side. “Cough chough, eeeew I get knocked out and find myself kissing a boy with brunette hair” yelled Eva. “Rainer…. Is it truly you?” asked Riku. “Ummm…. who are you?” asked Eva. “It’s us, Riku and Sora” answered Riku. She looked down at Sora and saw the necklace, then every thing came rushing back from her really young childhood, the friendship, the happiness, Kairi the new girl and…. the shipwreck. Tears started rolling down her cheeks as she remembered the fun they had. As soon as Sora stood up she ran towards him and hugged him, Riku came along and joined the hugging. “Who’s this?” asked Kairi as she appeared out of nowhere. They stopped hugging and turned around, there was Kairi with everyone else behind her. “Ya who is this ya” answered Wakka. “common tell us” answered Tudus with wide eyes and panting tongue. “Put your tongue in your mouth Tudus” yelled Selphie. “Don’t you guys notice, it’s Rainer” shouted Sora. “RAINER!!” everyone shouted. “Hi, but my new name is Eva” she answered Eva. “Wait… you’re a nobody” asked Riku a little bit worried. “No, the only thing chanced about me is that I have different hair and eyes, oh and name” answered Eva. “Oh, well me, Tudus and Wakka have to go see ya” answered Selphie. Kairi didn’t show it but she was really mad. “Hey it’s a gummy ship” yelled Eva. They turned around and saw the gummy ship land on the other side of the beach. “What, It must be the King, come on” yelled Sora.

OTHER SIDE OF THE BEACH

“Hey it’s Sora” yelled Donald. “Hey, Riku look it’s Donald and Goffy” yelled Sora. They met at the corner of the shore and the King was with them. “Oh good Eva’s with you” answered King Mickey. “You were looking for me…why?” asked Eva. “Well you know you’re the ultimate Keyblade wielder, so I need you to help me find the other organization members and defeat maleficent, luckly you took over one world which she can’t touch” explained the King. “So she separated us” answered Eva. “Wait a second, what is an ultimate Keyblade wielder?” asked Sora. “I’ll show you” answered Eva. She summoned her Keyblades, all fourteen of them and all Sora did was stare. “We’ll have to leave immediately so grab your supplies and lets leave” answered Mickey . “The usual routine” answered Riku. “I’m going to buy some clothes” answered Eva. “Ok, we’ll leave at night” answered Sora.

10.00 PM AT THE GUMMY SHIP

“Hey nice threads” answered Tudus who was the only one seeing him off. “In your dreams” answered Eva. She was wearing a white t-shirt with a black feather on it, gray gloves and white jeans. “Lets go” answered Riku.

So far, this is the funniest fanfic I've ever read, not that the other parts don't interest me but you can really write a comedy! LOL. Axel afraid of water? I should have thought of that! LOL

I will read more shortly! Keep up the good work!

[varsha]

Originally Posted by Zipporahss

So far, this is the funniest fanfic I've ever read, not that the other parts don't interest me but you can really write a comedy! LOL. Axel afraid of water? I should have thought of that! LOL

I will read more shortly! Keep up the good work!

Thanks zip ^^
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[varsha]

CHAPTER 48

GUMMY SHIP: SORA’S ROOM

“Dude you gotta tell what gnarly business happened up in da zero gravity” yelled Sora preaching like a surfer. “Sora, you sound like an idiot” grinned Riku. “What? I need to practice if I want to hang out at the surf club” whined Sora. Riku rolled his eyes and looked out the window. “Come! Tell me!” yelled Sora. “Nothing happened!” yelled Riku. “Doesn’t sound like that to me, you were in there for a long time” answered Sora. “It’s a big place” answered Riku. “Come on sour puss!” yelled Sora. “I’m leaving” answered Riku. “Wait! Riku!” yelled Sora. Riku exited the room calm like nothing happened.

GUMMY SHIP: KAIRI’S ROOM

“Tell us!” yelled Kairi while pulling Eva’s right arm. “Come on!” yelled Namine while pulling on Eva’s left arm. “Stop it! Your gonna rip me apart soon!” yelled Eva in frustration. “Just tell us!” yelled Kairi before letting her arm go. Eva got pulled towards Namine and fell on fher. “Sorry” answered Eva before helping Namine up. “It’s ok, but tell us why you were away with Riku for so long?” asked Namine. “It was a big place” shrugged Eva. “Oh poo” whined Namine. Eva left the room cradling her head after the fall.

GUMMY SHIP: MAIN DECK

Eva and Riku sat next to each other while whispering about what happened with the interrogation treatment they had gotten. “It’s so annoying” whispered Eva in frustration. “I know, but your uncle will go crazy if he found out and I’m not looking forward to an upgrade in the bashing he gives me every time I come near you” whispered Riku. “I guess” whispered Eva. “Everyone, we are landing at Halloween town in five minutes, be prepared” announced the King. Eva and Riku headed off towards their torrents incase they were attacked while descending.

HALLOWEEN TOWN: TOWN SQUARE

Everyone looked around confused with the decorations hanging around the town square. “I thought you said Halloween town, not love town!” yelled Xemnas. “I guess Jack has gone and thought of trying a new thing....again” sighed Sora. “Oh, then I guess I didn’t have to bring Eva’s teddy bear along since she won’t be scared” cheered Xemnas. Eva rolled her eyes and decided to take a look around. Then a shadow heartless came out of nowhere. “Yay, we get to fight!” yelled Eva. Everyone looked at Eva strangely and then got ready to fight. After fighting countless heartless, they finally stopped coming. “Finally!” yelled Kairi in relief. “Hello friends and friend’s friends” answered a tall skeleton. “Hi Jack” answered Sora. “What’s the big idea this time?” asked Donald. “Well, I found a new and interesting door where it takes you to the Valentine world” answered Jack excited. “Isn’t Valentines day just a day you show your love for someone?” asked Namine. “Why yes, I know that I can’t do anything for this type of day but I think it would be nice to celebrate it here since lots of people love here to” explained Jack. “True” answered Sora. “Would you like to come with me to this world?” asked Jack. “Sure, it should help us find more organization members” answered Eva. “Great! But you might want to not scare the locals so wear some thing a bit more lovey” answered Jack. “What about you?” asked Sora. “Don’t worry, the professor managed to make a potion that made me look less... bony” answered Jack. “Good, well lets go get some clothes” answered Eva. Everyone went back to the ship to get some clothes that Jack had said was more appropriate for the world.

HALLOWEEN TOWN: MOONLIGHT HILL

“Get of me Riku!” mumbled Sora. “But your the perfect seat for me” smirked Riku. Sora pushed Riku off to take a better look around. “I’m glad I’m not throwing up” groaned Eva while cradling her mouth. Riku limbed to her aid since he felt sick to. “I wonder how Jack looks?” asked Goofy. Everyone turned around only to find a handsome, tall, posh man standing next to the gate to the world. “Talk about a show off” mumbled Axel. “But your a show off too” smirked Demyx. “Enough talk, I want you to met a new friend” answered Jack. Everyone nodded and followed Jack through the town.

[TwilightRiku_13]

So, Jack is trying out a Valentine's Day theme for Halloween Town now? That seems very strange to me; Halloween and Valentine's Day really don't mix well. Okay, so the gang is off to Valentine World or something like that, I wonder what will happen. Will Riku ans Eva fall in love with one another even more? Will any of the others find love? I guess only time will tell. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Who the hell did what the hell were you thinking woman on the poll?

CHAPTER 49

HALLOWEEN TOWN: SPRING GARDEN

"Isn't it beautiful?" asked Jack in a trance. "Uh.. yeah, exept for the naked angels" answered Xemnas blocking Eva's eyes. "Come on Jack, who did you want us to meet?" asked Sora. "Her name is Ashline, the most beutiful woman you would have ever seen" answered Jack. "Really" smirked Axel. "Don't get your hopes up Axel" smirked Eva. Axel crossed his arms and started mumbling to himself. "How much further?" asked Xigbar. "We here" answered Jack. Ahead stood a giant castle with angels hovering over the top. "Wow, that is big!" yelled Demyx. "It's not bigger than the nobody castle" shruged Xemnas. "Yes it is!" yelled Demyx. "Lets just go in!" yelled Axel panting at the door. "Does he always do that?" whispered Jack at Eva. "Only when there's cute woman invloved" whispered Eva. They opened the door and headed inside to pink, marbled hallway.

HALLOWEEN TOWN: ANGELS PARADISE

"Why isn't it red!" yelled Axel. "Because that more threatning" smirked Eva. They headed through the hallway and then walked up some stairs while looking at the decorated walls. "I like this place, it's got good areas to draw" answered Namine. They finally approached a door with wing patterns all around it, they entered the room to find a woman sitting on a chair. "H-h-h-h" drolled Axel. Eva rolled her eyes and slapped him. "Pull your self together dumb brain" whispered Eva. "Ok-ok" whined Axel rubbing his face. "Hello Ashline" cheered Jack. "Hi Jack" answered Ashline. She had a soft sounding voice, yellow eyes, blue lipstick, small eye glasses, gloden blonde hair and slightly blue wings. "She's cute" whispered Demyx to Eva. "Do I need to know!" whispered Eva fustrated at Riku staring at her. "Looks like someones steamed up" whispered Xigbar. Demyx and Xigbar started cracking up but stopped as they approached her. "Ashline, these are my freinds from the other worlds" answered Jack. "Yes I know" smiled Ashline. "I like the arcitecture in the castle" answered Namine. "Thank you" answered Ashline. "They're looking for one other freind wearing a black coat, have seen one like that around here?" asked Jack. "Sorry Jack, we havn't seen anyone like that near the castle but, there has been some sighingd around town" answered Ashline. "Oh, well we'll find her" cheered Jack. "I'm glad your enthosiastic, would you like to look at the list that tells you who your soulmates are?" asked Ashline. "I don't think we will have time" answered Eva. "Ok then, it would be no use since it isn't accurate all the time" answered Ashline. "Then we're off" yelled Jack. They all headed out the door exept for Eva who stayed hidden near a pot plant. Ashline sighed when the door closed and looked like she was in love. "Um Ashline, why did you want to see me?" asked Eva. "Oh, you got the message! Good" sighed Ashline. "So whats wrong?" asked Eva. "Demyx" sighed Ashline. Eva raised an eyebrow then noticed why she sighed his name. "You like Demy don't you?" asked Eva. "Well, yes, I thought it would be good to ask you how he could start to like me" answered Ashline. "Ok, but I can't right now, how about tonight I come over" answered Eva. "Oh yes, you and Riku probably have lots of time to spend together, ahh, young love" sighed Ashline. Eva got a shade of red on her cheeks and then headed out side.

[TwilightRiku_13]

How the hell is there a giant castle in Halloween Town now? And how many people are homeless as a result of it? Seriously, Halloween Town is not that big; you would probably have had to destroy a few homes to build it, especially if it's bigger than the Castle that Never Was. So, who exactly is this Ashline character? Is she good or bad? To be honest, I really don't know waht to make of her. Well, I guess only time will tell. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[Zipporahss]

Omg! You have to update! I love this story! Lol, it's one of the funniest things I've ever read! On top of that for a twelve year old you write romances well! I'm just surpised you use cursing comfortably, anyway all I can say is that other than a few grammar and spelling mistakes this story is amazing!

Hm... But I do have a question, where did you get the idea to have Xemnas as an overprotective uncle? That's rich, and for a tweleve year old you have a pervy mind. Lol.

Hm... I think my favorite chapter right now is the chapter where Riku and Eva were sleeping together in the culisum. That was funny. Keep up the good work, and also the chapter where Riku and Eva kissed was awesome! So let me guess Eva and Riku are going to keep the relationship a secret for as long az they can right? I can't wait to read the rest of your story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

[varsha]

Thanks for all the feedback. I'm not much of the "normal" types in my class, consider me as a nerd but not a ugly one and not much of a mature one so I make up stuff from what I see form movies, and the what the IDIOT boys do in my class. Pervy mind? mayde a little to make it like comedy but nothing that goes into a creepy form aye. The lovey thing come form what I think, it's nice to see people in love.
That was a bit like a behinde the sences thing but hey, might as well answere a few Q's. Oh and the overprotective uncle part was because Xemnas loves hearts. Get it? yes it was dry but oh well.

Updated chapter 49.

Here's the new chapter! (clicky the egg)

CHAPTER 50

HALLOWEEN TOWN: VALENTINE'S WORLD TOWN

"Saw the lady in black coat run that a way" answered an ugly, rough looking angel. "Thanks" answered Eva covering her eyes. "That was the most hair I have seen on any part of a man before!" yelled Riku freaked out. "Don't worry you big baby" teased Eva before kissing Riku. "Guese the mood is fine for a romantic kiss" smirked Riku. "EVA!!!" yelled Demyx with a chinese face pointing at Eva and Riku hugging. "UH OH!" yelled Eva and Riku. "I'M SOO TELLING!!!" yelled Demyx before running off. "Don't you dare Demyx sporty ass!" yelled Eva before running after him. "His last name is ass?" asked Riku confused before catching up to Eva. "Couldn't be just smooth on the eye's" answered Eva. They ran around the town managing to miss everyone else. "SUPERIOR!!" yelled Demyx. "Noooooo!" yelled Eva in slow motion before takling Demyx. "Wha- AHHHHH!!!" yelled Xemnas before being pushed in to a giant shredder. "DON'T YOU DARE TELL ANYONE!!!!" yelled Eva before punching Demyx multiple times. "DEMYX!!!' yelled Xemnas before climing out only wearing heart dotted boxers. "Uh oh" groaned Demyx. "Would you like me to beat him up superior?" asked Laraxene jumping out of nowhere. "LARAXENE!" yelled Eva before giving her a big hug. "Hiya Eva" answered Laraxene hugging her back.

[Zipporahss]

Lol! Demyx would be stupid wouldn't he? Lol.

Oh, I see, he loves hearts. Good one. It makes sense but you'd think he'd be nicer to people Eva hangs with though but it adds to the comedy, so I like it.

You're a nerd too! As am I! Except for when I'm depressed I can't like a baby cry every chance I get. And failing at every thing.

Poo, anyway great update!

[varsha]

I see.
I wouldn't call it being a nerd though, more like a............ SUPERSPEICALSMARTANTISOICALPERSON.
Well, antisocial is sorta like me.
My best best freind went back to korea and now I'm all alone, the best thing is is that my freind had the same personality as me^^

CHAPTER 51

HALLOWEEN TOWN: ANGELS PARADICE

"Laraxene, keep quite!" snapped Axel. "Why?" whispered Laraxene. "Because, I want to see why Eva ran off at this hour of night" whispered Axel. "Ok, but did you have to come in your pj's?" asked Laraxene pointing at Axel in his pj's. "I didn't have timt to change! no keep quiet" snapped Axel. Axel peeped over the trash can they hid behind and saw Eva with Ashline. "What are they saying?" asked Laraxene. "I don't know, I wish Zexion was here instead of you!" snapped Axel. "Shut up! I have a stupid electro magnatic thingy and I think it will help your baby ears hear better" answered Laraxene. "Ok" answered Axel before snatching it off Laraxene. "Ok, what type of plan do you have?" answered Eva's voice through the electro magnatic thingy. "I don't know, I can't think of any thing" shrugged Ashline. "But aren't you supposed to be the match maker?" asked Eva. "It's hard when your involved" answered Ashline. "Ok, lets go through town and see what we can pick up" answered Eva bfore heading off. "I can't beleive it, she likes me" sighed Axel. "Hello, dumb brain, she might be talking about someone else" answered Laraxene before knocking Axel's head. "Ow, ok we'll follow them more, now how do I take this electro thingy majigy off?" asked Axel. "Uhhh....you can't" answered Laraxene. "What! oh man" yelled Axel in fustration.

HALLOWEEN TOWN: VALENTINE'S WORLD TOWN

"Nah, too fake" answered Eva throwing a plastic bottel saying "love potion". "Too much fungus" answered Eva throwing a mushroom. "How about this contraption?' asked Ashline holding a blue print. "That might just work, good thinking" answered Eva taking the blue print. "Great, Demyx will love me and we'll all be happy, but I hope he does like me" answered Ashline. "I have a feeling he does" answered Eva heading towards the counter. "D-d-d-d-- Demyx?" sobbed Axel. "Uh oh, here comes the water works" groaned Laraxene. "Waaaahhhhh!!" cried Axel hugging Laraxene. "You shouldn't have done that" hesitated Laraxene. Axel looked like a over shocked heartless on the ground after he stopped crying.

GUMMY SHIP: DEMYX'S AND AXEL'S ROOM

"Hmm, ah this song should be good enough" answered Demyx after wriing on a peice of paper. "Demyx, can I come in?" asked Riku knocking on the door. "Sure" answered Demyx. Riku walked in worried playing with his thumbs. "What wrong?' asked Demyx. "Did you tell any one?" asked Riku closing the door. "No, why?" asked Demyx. "Because if anyone finds out we are gonna be dead" answered Riku. "Oh, why?" asked Demyx. "Because Xemnas will try and murder me!" yelled Riku. "Calm down old man! Don't worry I won't tell, Eva's my freind too" answered Demyx. "I guese so, what are you writing?" asked Riku. "Love song" answered Demyx. "Why are you writing a love song?" asked Riku. "For the ball, why else?' answered Demyx. "Oh, well, see ya" answered Riku. Riku left the room and Demyx started giggling and jumped down to the floor and got a boy and a girl doll form Axel's draw. "It is a romantic mood" mocked Demyx making the dolls kiss. "I am so gonna bust them at the ball" smirked Demyx.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Great updates, varsha. I especially liked it when Xemnas fell into the giant shredder and when Eva beat the living hell out of him for trying to tattle on them; Demyx is such an idiot, and, not only that, he will probably end up in a coma if he tries that crap at the ball. Also, I liked it when Axel found out that Ashline likes Cemyx and not him; seriously, he is such a big baby. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[Zipporahss]

Lol, Axel sneaking around in pjs? How nosey can he be?

Anywho, great update. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

[varsha]

CHAPTER 52

HALLOWEEN TOWN: MOONLIGHT HILL

Eva sat on top of one of the many oak trees behind a bench. "Whats wrong Eva?" asked Marlaux. "I don't know, some thing doesn't feel right, we gotta get that heartless out of Laraxene like Saix told us but" Answered Eva staring towards the moon. "But what?" asked Marlaux. "It's like some one is watching us all the time" sighed Eva. "How could they? we're always changing positions so how could they keep track of us?" asked Marlaux. "I don't know, mayde a spy?" asked Eva looking towards Marlaux. "Know your talking rubish, that can't be true I mean, who would spy on us?" asked Marlaux. "I don't know, Aw forget I ever mentioned it, I just thought of it after seeing a movie" chuckled Eva. Marlaux closed his eyes and shook his head. "Silly girl" thought Marlaux. "Come on, get out of here, I need some alone time" sighed Eva laying back on her branch. "Yeah yeah whatever, I'm not gonna ask why" shrugged Marlaux. Eva shook her head smiling. "I bet he never paid attention during puberty lessons" thought Eva. "I'm outta here, see ya back at the ship" answered Marlaux. Eva waved at him as he left and then closed her eyes for a short snooze. "Is he gone?" asked Ashline coming out from behind the tree. "Yep, know lets make that contraption" answered Eva jumping from the branch eager to work. "Yes" nodded Ashline. They pulled out the blue prints and took out the hidden tools to work with. After a few minutes they finished the contraption and took their positions. "I'll go get Demyx!" yelled Eva. "Ok" answered Eva.

GUMMY SHIP: FOYER

Eva ran into the foyer and found Demyx sitting next to the tv listening to music and joting down a few words. "Hey Demyx!" yelled Eva. Demyx turned around and saw Eva signaling him to come over. "What's wrong?" asked Demyx. "Ashline wants to talk to you" answered Eva. "Me? w-w-why?" hesitated Demyx. "Just come over" answered Eva running off. "Hey wait up!" yelled Demyx.

HALLOWEEN TOWN: MOONLIGHT HILL

"Hi Ashline, have you seen Eva?" asked Riku. "What are you doing here?" asked Ashline. "Uh, why are you acting all nervus?" asked Riku. "I can't tell you" hesitated Ashline. "Ohh, your gonna met up with Demyx" answered Riku nodding. "What! no I uh just" hetitated Ashline twiddling her thumbs. "Why don't you just talk to him?" asked Riku. "Huh, why would I?" asked Ashline. "Because you love him and he loves you, you don't have to worry, and I think he does" smiled Riku. "What! how-how do you know?" asked Ashline. "The first time we all met, I saw how you and Demyx were blushing and exchanging looks" smirked Riku. "Wha- Uh, well, I guess some one would have noticed" sighed Ashline. "Aw well, hey look there's Eva and Demyx" answered Riku before heading over to her. Suddenly a strange noise came from under the contraption they made, a peice of rope broke and Eva had run right onto the peice that moved place. "What the!" yelled Eva being pulled from under neath and flung into the sky. "Eva!" yelled Riku. Riku ran onto the other part of the contraption and got flung towards her. "Uh oh, the contraption's broken" whispered Ashline to her self. Riku was waving his arms underneath him in the sky before crashing into Eva and shot somewhere else. "Woah, I hope they are ok" answered Demyx with his eyes wide open. "Oh dear, another screw up" sighed Ashline. "Oh, hi Ashline" answered Demyx. "Hi demyx" answered Ashline. I'm gonna go get some ice cream, I have a feeling they will be ok, want to come?" asked Demyx. "O-ok" answered Ashline taking Demyx's hand.

HALLOWEEN TOWN: VALENTINES WORLD TOWN

"AHHHH!" yelled Riku before landing on one of the giant heart shaped mushrooms growing on the roof tops. Eva landed right on top of him with a nice bounce at the end. "Well, that was fun" answered Eva rubbing her head. "What was that thing?" asked Riku. "Nothing you need to worry about, why were you there?" asked Eva. "Just looking for you" smirked Riku cuddling Eva. "Nice to know your still worried about me" smiled Eva resting her head on Riku's chest.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Aw, that was very cute, especially the ending. I really liked it when Eva and Riku went flying through the air; that really did look like a lot of fun. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[Zipporahss]

*squeal* that was so cute! Please update soon! Please!