The Last Story

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, I'm a bit confused, what just happened? I take it Eva went into another dark state. Man, the whole dark state thing is just really weird. What exactly happens when Eva goes into these dark states? How come it effects her the worst of all the nobodies? I mean, I know you explained it before, but I'm still confused about the whole process. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

your answers shall be answered soon..... just hold on with mystery :D

[varsha]

CHAPTER 45

GUMMY SHIP : RECOVERY ROOM

Saix sat on a chair while explaining why Eva and nearly all the other members they had found went into a killing frenzy. "I don't get? How come every time we leave a place it starts to kick in?" asked Sora. "If a key blade master is going to leave the heartless kick in since they fear the keyblade and want to hunt it down before they lose the chance" explained Saix. "Oh, one more thing, why did it affect Eva so much? is it because she's a keyblade master?" asked Sora. "Yes, but, she is the keyblades ultimate master so her powers will affect her recovery since the heartless drain her power. "How did you know about this?" asked Riku. "I studied it one time but I don't remeber where" explained Saix. "Really? Isn't this a new thing?" asked Xemnas. "That's right! that's also why I can't remember where I learnt it" answered Saix. "This stuff is starting hurt my brain" answered Sora looking dizzy. "What affect does it have on Eva?" asked Marlaux. "I don't know" sighed Saix shaking his head. "Lets leave and make sure Eva gets some rest" answered Axel. "Thats new! when the hell did you start to care for Eva?" asked Riku. "AHHHH, DESIES IS REAL!!" yelled Demyx after run int the hallway. "Hey! Eva's in a bad state, more bad than I thought she would ever go in" answered Axel. "Oh" aswered Demyx after popping his head back in. "I think it will be better if some one stayed here to observe her conditon" answered Xigbar. "I'll stay" answered The king. "Ok, lets all get some rest" answered Xemnas. Everyone left for their rooms while the king stayed behind. "Good, your all aloe with her" answered a distance voice.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Wow, where have you been, varsha? I almost forgot about this fanfic, but I'm glad to see you back and updating. Okay, that was short, but at least it explained the dark state thing. Question, did Demyx go into a dark state? Or Marluxia either? I know Axel and Saix did, but I don't remember the others. And how does Saix know all about this? Man, I can't wait to see the rest of this chapter; let me know when you post it.

[varsha]

Alright I updated the chapter.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Hooray, you finished the chapter, at least I think you did. So, Saix studied this phenomenon, but he doesn't know where or when. It seems kind of weird to me that he would forget something like that after such a short time, seeing that this thing is fairly new. Well, I guess all will be revealed in time. Also, who was the mysterious vioce, and what is their connection with King Mickey? Does this have to do with him drinking darkness before? Man, this whole situation is just really weird. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

CHAPTER 46

GUMMY SHIP : INDOOR SWIMMING POOL

Demyx popped his head in through the door to make sure his 'disovery' wasn't already discovered. "Whew, no one's here" sighed Demyx. "CANNON BALL!!" yelled Sora. Sora jumped from the top of the highest plank followed by Donald and Goofy. "AWW MAN!!" yelled Demyx in fustration. "You guys got water all over my drawing!" screamed Namine. "Aw come on, this is a swimming pool and all you think about is drawing!" yelled Sora. "Not any more!" yelled Roxas while lifting Namine from her chair. "Roxas!" yelled Namine before they both plunged into the pool. "Haha" laughed Kairi before jumping in. "Why didn't anyone tell me about the pool!" screamed Demyx. The entire are went silent when they notice Demyx looking cross. "Uh.. well we kinda found out about this place during the tour" answered Sora. "But why didn't you tell me?" asked Demyx. "Well... because your freinds with Axel...sorta if you call it freindship and whenever you find out some thing, Axel finds out" explained Sora. "But he hates water!" yelled Demyx. "Yeah, thats why" answered Kairi. "If he found out about this place he would try and get rid of it" answered Roxas. "Oh" answered Demyx finally understanding. "You can't tell him about this place, it's the only place where we can swim without him flirting with all the girls" answered Namine. "True, fine" answered Demyx. "Now let swim!" yelled Sora. The organization members came in with their trunks and jumped in. "Hey where's Riku?" asked Kairi. "He's in the recovery room with Xemnas and the king" answered Sora.

GUMMY SHIP : RECOVERY ROOM

"I'll go and get some rest, you two make sure she's in a good state, I need to uh drink some uh.. black medicine" explained The king before leaving. "He's on medication?" asked Xemnas. "I didn't even know" shrugged Riku. "...What dance are you going to do at the ball?" asked Xemnas. "I don't know, maybe casual or if it's maybe the ta-" explained Riku before getting cut off. "NO CASUAL!! no tango, no salsa, no fox tot, no chachacha or what ever you call it, CO CONTACT!!" yelled Xemnas. "But then how are we supposed to dance?" aske Riku. "Thats the point, NO DANCING" screamed Xemnas. "Uggg... what happened?" moaned Eva. "My baby!" yelled Xemnas before running over and hugging her. "I...cuont beath" mumbled Eva. "Are you hurt? hows your back? do feel sick? are you bleeding? you look like you are" asked Xemnas panicky. "I'm fine uncle, know what where you talking about dancing? all I heard was you scream DANCING" yelled Eva. "Don't worry, you'll find out when we go to the ball" answered Xemnas. "Ok, can you get me drink?" asked Eva. "Ok" answered Xemnas before speeding off to the kitchen. "Hi Riku, hope I didn't hurt you much" answered Eva. "I'll be fine" answered Riku. "So what dance you do you want to do?" asked Eva. "Wa...uh...um... how about we don't dance?" asked Riku nervously. "It's a ball, your supposed to dance" answered Eva. "Well, Uhh, you choose" answered Riku. "Never mind, I heard the whole thing so don't worry but, the whole casual thing sounds like you wanted it to be romatic" answered Eva. "WHAT! no no not at all, I didn't mean casual casual, just casual" answered Riku hesitantly. Eva smiled at him looked at her hands. "Whats wrong?" asked Riku. "I was just rembering, that time when the boat crashed" answered Eva. "Really?" answered Riku suprised. "Come sit here" answered Eva pating the seat next to her. Riku sat next to her worried. "What did they say when the news reached town?" asked Eva. "Well, they just said the crash happened and there were no survivers" answered Riku. "How did Sora feel?" asked Eva. "Sora....Sora felt... to tell you the truth.... Sora was to busy listening to Kairi and...... he never really.... cared" answred Riku with his head down. "Oh.... how did you feel?" asked Eva. "Wha, well, um, I was a, I was just, sad" answered Riku moving his head. "Do you know what happened to my charm?" asked Eva. "Kairi, I think she found it, I never said any thing so she didn't go upset, she gave it to Sora" answered Riku. "Well, it feels better to be here" answered Eva before hugging Riku. "Uh.. yeah, it feels better" answered Riku before hugging her back.

[Bellaisima358]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww.....that was cute....
Xemnas is annoying.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Man, Xemnas is really driving me crazy with his overprotectivness of Eva. Seriously, someone needs to give him a sedative or lock him in a closet during this ball. Aw, I really liked the scene with Riku and Eva; they are just so cute. So, when are they going to find out about the King and his darkness? I hope they find out soon. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[JustCallMeShadow]

A nice Heartless, preferably a Shadow or Crescendo, should be introduced. Just a suggestion.

[varsha]

ok
did you just start reading from the beggining?
Impressive. ^^

[varsha]

CHAPTER 47

GUMMY SHIP: FOYER

"STAY AWAY FROM MY NEICE!" yelled Xemnas before tackling Riku. "Hey! get off of me!" yelled Riku. "NEVER!!!" yelled Xemnas. Sora and Roxas stood next to the fight with their eye's wide open. "This is the first time Xemnas was this angry at Riku" whispered Sora. "Yeah but... what Xemnas last said sounded a little wrong" whispered Roxas. "AHHH!!! XEMNAS IS GOING TO RAPE RIKU!!" yelled Xigbar. Xigbar jumped into the fight and stopped it. "Xemnas you sick minded idiot!" yelled Xigbar. "WHAT!!! YOUR THE ONE THATS MENT TO BE SICKMINDED YOU LITTLE PERV" yelled Xemnas. "Hey! only on the girls" answered Xigbar. "Why were you trying to kill Riku this time?" asked Sora. "BECAUSE HE KISSED MY DAUGHTER!!!" yelled Xemnas. "WHAT!!" yelled Sora. "Are yuo deaf, he said Riku kissed Eva" answered Roxas. Sora started to make a few fists. "Why are you mad?" asked Kairi. "Me? Mad?" asked Sora sarcasticly. "Hi guys" answered Eva walking through the door. The whole rooms attention turned to Eva. "Uhhhhhhhh, whats wrong?" asked Eva freaked out. "Did you kiss Riku?" asked Marlaux. "What? oh that, Uncle I told you we were hugging!" yelled Eva. "NO!! I KNOW A KISS WHEN I SEE ONE!!!" yelled Xemnas. Eva sighed and smacked Xemnas. "Oww, what was that for?" asked Xemnas. "For not trusting me" smiled Eva. "Xemnas saw us hugging in a differnt angle other than the door" answered Riku. "No, then what was all that goo goo talk about "I'm glad your here too" huh? What do you have to say about that" yelled Xemnas. "You spyed on us?" asked Eva. "Well.... yeah but I had to, besides I heard all that talk about your charm and news and all that talk, I think Riku like you and Kairi!" yelled Xemnas. "What? as if, no offence Kairi but you kinda ugly" answered Riku. "UGLY??!!" yelled Kairi. "whew" sighed Sora. "Why are you releaved? I can't beleive you didn't even care about my neaices charm or her death! you didn't even remember it was her's!" yelled Xemnas. "What charm?" asked Sora. Everyone but Sora and Kairi gasped. "I can't beleive it! you don't remember the charm!" yelled Riku. "What?" asked Sora. "The oath keeper charm! you didn't really think it was the oath you made to Kairi that brought you together did you?" asked Riku. "You mean, this charm?" asked Sora while holding out the charm. "Yes, you are so heartless" yelled Demyx. "How do you know about it?" asked Sora. "We read all of Eva's memories, exept for the far off ones" answered Malraux. "Well, I-I- I better give this back to Eva" answered Sora before turning to Eva. "Eva!" yelled Xemnas. Eva wasn't there. "I'm going to look for her" yelled Riku before running off.

GUMMY SHIP: HALLWAYS

"Eva!" yelled Riku. Everyone on the ship, including the servants, were looking for Eva. The looked in the Bedroom, the bathrooms and an other place they could think of. "Where could she be?" asked Riku. "There's one place to look, the boiler room" answered Axel. "Why would she be looking for hot water?" asked Riku. "It's only called the boiler room, thats where most of the prisoners that the king finds dangrouse than normal dangerouse are put" answered Demyx. "Well I'm going" answered Riku. "You can't!" yelled Sora. Riku ran off into the boiler room without listening to Sora and shut the door behind him.

GUMMY SHIP: BOILER ROOM

Al, the criminals were in their cells moaning for food an yelleing at Riku as he walked by. "EVA!" yelled Riku. "You looking for a brunett girl?" asked a quiet criminal. "Yeah" answered Riku. The criminal pointed at a lader that went up to the out side of the ship. "You sure?" asked Riku. "Yeah, she was really upset" answered the criminal. Riku ran towards the ladder and opened the top door and saw the silky sky. Riku climbed up and then saw Eva sitting on the top of the ship looking up at the sky. "Eva! are you ok?" asked Riku. Eva jeerked and then nodded. Riku sat down next to her to comfort her. "I can't beleive he looked so blank" answered Eva. "Hey don't worry, He just forgets" answered Riku. "Yeah" sighed Eva. Riku looked at Eva and then nooded. Eva looked at Riku and rested her head on him. "Riku looked at her and got interupted with a kiss form Eva.

[Bellaisima358]

GASP! Yay they finally kissed!!!!!!!!!! WOO!!!!!!

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, Xemnas is really starting to get on my nerves. The next world these guys go to better have cars and trucks so that someone can push Xemnas in front of moving one. Oh man, poor Eva!!! Sora completely forgot about her charm. I can see why Riku is angry with him; his stupidity and absentmindedness is rather frustrating. But, on a lighter note, I really liked the kissing scene at the end between Eva and Riku. Now, just don't let Xemnas catch them and ruin the moment, just have him get his head stuck in the trash compactor during all of this. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

[Zipporahss]

Ah, I like what I read so far! I read up to chapter 4, I'll read it later and I gotta catch up with the other fanfics I was suppose to read >>;

I like it so far, I wanna learn more about this Eva ^^