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Old March 2nd, 2009, 04:59 AM   #1
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POV: Kairi
A/N: Yes it's SoKai and if you're not a fan then I hope you'll like it anyway, regardless. Yeah I know it's on the "short" side, I like to consider it fun sized! So what are you waiting for, read and review!

It's been a while now since I've seen his face last.

Hm, that glowing smile that was always sprawled across his face made the world seem so much more better at times. His bright blue eyes would capture my heart as soon as they met my own. Once my heart was captured there was no way to escape, and it felt good. Every aspect about him was, wonderful...

I would always get this feeling in my stomach, like butterflies were flying about, whenever he called my name. And the way he said my name was pure bliss, a sweet song to my ears.

A song I haven't heard in a while.

Honestly, I don't know what I'd do without him, he's my everything.
Life without him would be lack-luster. Flowers would lose their color. The skies would lose their beautiful azure. All the riches in the world would lose their value. Even the Sun would lose it's light.

At least in my eyes...

It's hard to know that he could be out there somewhere injured, lying on the floor in front of his foe, defenseless, vulnerable, open to attack or even death. I try to shake that feeling off whenever I can thinking that he's succeeding at whatever he's doing. Still, that sole thought creeps up in the back of my mind.

This is what I get for waiting for him to come back. Every sunrise and sunset is another moment lost when I could be with him, where he could be safe with me. As every second ticks by the clock it could of been another moment with him.
That little speck of fear for his safety soon consumes most of my thoughts, and I think of the reality of it. I want to know he's okay, that he's doing fine, but I won't know, especially if I wait.

Thus I've decided to quit waiting, I'm going to chase after him. I'll find him eventually, I'm sure of it. I'll find him no matter what the cost.

And when I do it'll be extraordinary. Reunions are always sweet. When my eyes meet his everything will feel in place again. And when he says my name once more, my ears will be treated by that blissful song it had longed to hear. His warmth would wash over me as his arms wrap themselves around me and mine around him. It sounds almost fairytale-like but I don't care.
As long as I'm with him once more it all won't matter.

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Old March 2nd, 2009, 05:46 AM   #2
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Aww that was lovely. :3
Very sweet, and pretty much everything SoKai is meant to be. Great job characterizing them!
One small typo -- "As every second ticks by the clock it could of been another second with him" replace with "could have been" lol
It was great regardless! Thanks for sharing~
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Old March 5th, 2009, 03:31 PM   #3
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That was wonderful! Kairi was very well-characterized; I could picture those thoughts going through her head. It's nice to be reading some SoKai here, particularly after I just finished playing Kingdom Hearts 1 again, and you did a very good job! I'm impressed.
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Old April 12th, 2009, 12:31 AM   #4
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That was wonderful! Kairi was very well-characterized; I could picture those thoughts going through her head. It's nice to be reading some SoKai here, particularly after I just finished playing Kingdom Hearts 1 again, and you did a very good job! I'm impressed.
Thank you very much Org_42!
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Old April 12th, 2009, 01:20 AM   #5
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I agree with Org 42. The characterization of Kairi is excellent. Really feels like your peering into her head.
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Old April 27th, 2009, 01:48 AM   #6
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I agree with Org 42. The characterization of Kairi is excellent. Really feels like your peering into her head.
Thank you so very much
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