Secret Mission: High School

[MM125]

Wow, I just found it, you should update that.

Anyway, that was great, I've literally spent days trying to make the perfect comment on the final chapter, but I've given up on that.

Originally Posted by Horizon's Knight

It had a very interesting ending. There are some suggestions for the sequel though.

1. Have the Demon Sisters and Sephiroth try to take over DI.
2. Have people discover Org. XIII
3. Put some magic between Sora & Namine.
4. Have Roxas compete for Xion's affection.
5. Have Sora use the Keyblade already.
6. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, I suggest have Zexion change either Axel or Roxas into a girl for humor, and to not scare away the guys who read this fanifc.
7. Explain why so many Heartless are appearing on DI (Ex: Some sort of Villan)
8. Although this is supposed to be a comedy, can you add a little more fighting in the next fic. After all, they are there because of the Heartless.

That is all I have to say.

I'd like to add one thing to this.

9. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, put in a yuri pairing, so as not to discourage guys (not like me, I'll read it regardless of how much yaoi you throw in) from reading it.

[Mikoto-Cat]

nah I decided not to put yaoi in summer vacation sorry yaoi fans :(

[MM125]

I figured when you said you'd have Axel/Larxene.

[I *heart* Axel]

i love the story so much!!!! i have a suggestion. i think axel and demyx should fall in love with a pretty girl, but they both dont know that the like the same girl, and they get in a huge argument. yeah, and HOLD THE LANGUAGE, SHEESH! I CAN REPORT YOU AND HAVE YOU BANNED OFF THE SITE!!!!! but i'm 2 nice 2 do tht. so please, hold the language!

[Lanydx reborn]

Your story is great. I hope for more.