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Old March 22nd, 2005, 10:18 PM   #1
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Chapter 1

"Get off me, you great big oaf!" A dwarf shouted stumbling back as his hands wrestled with the large dog infront of him. People stared, a few laughed as the dwarf took hold of the dog's front, left paw before it hit him, "If you don't I'll have to tie you to a bloody tree!". His googles slid all over the place before tumbling over his eyes blinding him causing him to trip over his feet and hit the ground, "Damn!"

The dog barked, leaping over the struggling body of the dwarf it ran towards a narrow alleyway, disappearing into the darkness. The dwarf then managed to leap up onto his feet and straighten his goggles. His eyes searched the area for the dog and he whistles, "Ah, come on! I'll give ya a bone if you come back, ya hear!"

"Damn it!" A voice wept, running away from the dog. His body features was hidden in darkness. But, it was defiantly not alive, "Why the hell do I have to smell like this! I smell like crap!" The voice moaned before pulling out a small dagger from his belt. He finally made into light. Pitch black blood fell towards the floor creating miniature puddle on the cold, hard floor. His bones which showed itself to the world looked as if it could create music as the air whistled through it. Long, black hair covered most of his face. But, if you looked closely you would be able to a bit of his jaw missing. Yes, very disgusting. Suddenly, his feet tripped over a lose slab on the floor sending him flying. Soon enough, the greedy dog found and attempted to eat him. The rotting man just lay there as if lifeless, without a care in the world.

The dwarf slowly crawled through the alleyway calling for the dog, "Benny! Benny! Where are ya!" Soon enough, he found Benny towering over a dead body, "Agh! Beny, what the hell have you done! Am I drunk!" He shouted, grabbing Benny by the coller. The dwarf then slowly reached in to poke the body, "Hello?"

"Don't you dare touch me, you laxy old fool!" The rotting man screamed grabbing the dwarf by the arm. The dwarf fell silent, fear took over his body, "My name is Murkghost, and yours is?" Murkghost asked tightening his grip on the dwarf's arm.

"My n-n-name is.. Er.. Larak Bloodhunter" He mumbled, finally letting go from Murkghost's grip, "So.. Er.. How are you?" He said. His mind completely empty from the fright.

"I'm fine, thank you.. Anyways, you look like a tough, beer loving dwarf. Why don't you help me with something, yes?" Murkghost's whispered once again grabbing Larak by the arm and dragging him off down the alleyway.

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Somewhere in Disney Castle a celebration is in session..

"Sora! Sora! Sora! Sora! Sora! Sora! Sora!"

"For crying out loud... What!" Sora shouted as Goofy shouted at him across the room. Sora now looked much, much older. Roughly about 25. Goofy, hadn't changed at all. Same with all of the happy Disney characters. Kairi was also there, and had grown much taller. Riku, was not there. He had gone to a different world. Well, he was a journalist, now.

"We recieved a letter from Riku, ya? I don't know what it means!" Goofy said, tripping over his won feet.

"Yeah? Let me read it" Goofy handed the letter to Sora and he immediately started to read it.


Dear Sora
While I was interviewing someone in Atlantis today. I cam across something strange. Very strange. I caught a glimpse of some strange black creature scurrying across the sea bed. It was obviously searching for something. Something important. Not sure what though. But, this creature reminded me of the heartless. And, I had a strange feeling that it was. Do you think that the Heartless are back. If so, meet me here in Atlantis; and bring along your friends.

Riku


"Oh, crap.. Come on, lets go there!"
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Old March 22nd, 2005, 10:45 PM   #2
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Wow, there's a lot of new and good writers around here lately!!

So far so good. I'll have to remember to check in on this one! One or two slight spelling errors, but it's interesting, especially with incorporating a new character. :D
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Old March 22nd, 2005, 11:17 PM   #3
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YaY! this is so kewlio~ write more wen u get the chance! ^^;
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Old March 27th, 2005, 02:52 PM   #4
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i like ti alot
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