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Old November 9th, 2008, 08:23 AM   #16
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they should have kissed! but u kno me! :)

and fav part was when riku tried to kill himself--great adding to character
You know you can't kiss a ghost, right? ;) and sometimes, the solidifying of relationships is by them NOT kissing. If they kissed, it would add a different feel to it.

Um, Total rip from Princess Bride. It's too bad I couldn't use Wesley's line. It wouldn't work.
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Old November 9th, 2008, 09:17 PM   #17
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You know you can't kiss a ghost, right? ;) and sometimes, the solidifying of relationships is by them NOT kissing. If they kissed, it would add a different feel to it.

um yeah i know but in your story xion wrestles with riku and knocks a knife out of his hand...i think they would be able too...and ur right sometimes not having them kiss is the best way to go...but then ould have diissapointed fans...and im not talking about ur story lol *cough* sora kairi *cough*
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Old November 10th, 2008, 05:16 AM   #18
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You have NO IDEA how much I wanted to put Constance in there..... Too bad it didn't work.
Oooh Constance! :D

Maybe you can make another story with the Haunted Mansion as a world and have Constance chasing around one of the characters with her axe! >:]
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Old November 10th, 2008, 05:36 AM   #19
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I kind of Did. Check out Larxene and 14. I did a 20 page homage to the mansion as one of my chapters. It had Constance, Phantom Manor, Grim Grinning Ghosts.... it's page two or three. The next page has a reference page of all my homages.

I could do another HM one shot. But I'll need an idea...

Wait! I'm not crazy and there are other Constance lovers out there! No idea why I like her. SHe's just interesting.
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Old April 7th, 2009, 04:22 AM   #20
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Lovely Madammina.
I knew you would do something involving HM
But you made it work and intertwine very well!
Loved it!
Only thing you could work on is your spacing 'cause I would find myself lost by whose talking and who isn't
But something minor, nothing major.
Love =DDD
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Old April 7th, 2009, 04:32 AM   #21
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Lovely Madammina.
I knew you would do something involving HM
But you made it work and intertwine very well!
Loved it!
Only thing you could work on is your spacing 'cause I would find myself lost by whose talking and who isn't
But something minor, nothing major.
Love =DDD
Aw, thank you!

It's an old work, so I should really have improved (check out HCTB for example, if you haven't already ;) )

But, thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.
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Old April 12th, 2009, 12:28 AM   #22
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Aw, thank you!

It's an old work, so I should really have improved (check out HCTB for example, if you haven't already ;) )

But, thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.
Oh but I have seen HCTB
Lol
And I like that one a lot as well =)
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Old April 13th, 2009, 12:44 AM   #23
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Oh my, that was beautiful.
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Old April 13th, 2009, 02:20 AM   #24
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Oh but I have seen HCTB
Lol
And I like that one a lot as well =)
THank you, comment if you like~

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Oh my, that was beautiful.
THank you, what did you like, not like, and how can I improve?
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Old April 14th, 2009, 02:07 AM   #25
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THank you, what did you like, not like, and how can I improve?
Well, I liked the emotion that you portrayed, as well as the fact that it's about Rion(>:D). However, things happened too quickly. You need to build it up. And yes, you over emoed Riku. Other than that, it's wonderful!
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Old April 14th, 2009, 02:09 AM   #26
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thanks. I'll keep that in mind.
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