Kingdom Hearts: Another Tale, Another Adventure

[fireflame]

This is my first ever Fanfic, but i do have some writing experience and i will try and make this story as good as possible.

This is not Sora's tale. He will be mentioned in the story, but this is another boy's story. This is years after Kingdom Hearts 3. Crin is a 16 year old boy living on Destiny Islands and longs to leave, and of course he is a Keyblade wielder. But there is a new evil force besides the Heartless and Nobodies(who have now reappeared) that is really strong and evil

Rating: PG- PG13

Summary: this takes place years after the events of Kingdom Hearts 3 and Sora married Kairi and they had a son named Zern. Rku dissappeared about a year after Zern was born. The Heartless have returned because they feed off the darkness in people's hearts, and if the Heartless returned, then so have the Nobodies. But a new evil has appeared.

[twohearts]

i dont know if im supposed to give ideas or not but,

1.(thinking in mind)"Where am I,ithink im dreaming ,b.b..but i can`t move w...whats going on whats that light over there?"Crin starts drifting away from the light. "Whats happenin! he shouted. Sora,Riku,Kiari,HELP!AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!" He wakes up dripping with sweat with the three gathered round him.

(i post more when i have the time)

[Mars]

Originally Posted by fireflame

This is my first ever Fanfic, but i do have some writing experience and i will try and make this story as good as possible.

This is not Sora's tale. He will be mentioned in the story, but this is another boy's story. This is years after Kingdom Hearts 3. Crin is a 16 year old boy living on Destiny Islands and longs to leave, and of course he is a Keyblade wielder. But there is a new evil force besides the Heartless and Nobodies(who have now reappeared) that is really strong and evil

sounds sexy. what are the new bad guys like. reappeared are they unbirths?

so i guess seeing twohearts gave idea's i should too.

sora (or riku) should go to fight this evil which is on the island not the main land. crin tags along behind without sora or riku knowing. sora (or riku, or hell even both) is beaten. crin comes rushing out of hiding. sora no dont die.... sob*. (that was actually me crying, but crin should also.) sora pass's keyblade onto crin.

[fireflame]

These are both really good ideas, but i was thinking of not incuding Sora, Riku and Kairi that much. They will be in there and Crin will fight alongside some of them at one point but I'm focusing on Crin's tale.

[twohearts]

Since i havnt finished it yet there problably gonna be talked about at the BeGGings and the END and maby in dreams or flashbacks but not very often.I am also currently working on another story so i have to do 2 at once.But i was working up to where hes leaves the island and he may be realated to sora.And the way he got off the is island was like there was like a door in his room.(like at destiny islands)

[fireflame]

Intro:

Crin was walking along a street when he saw a someone with a mask on. The person looked at him and vanished. Crin looked down and saw that there was an orange puddle under him. He struggled and tried to get out of it but he was sucked under.

The next thing he knew he was lying on a cold ground. Crin stood up. He looked down at the floor and saw that he was on a glass floor with pictures of Riku, Kairi, and Diz. He had never seen these people before and was confused and curious. But before he could question and further, three gold tables appeared.

The tables each had something different. A long dagger, a staff and a shield. A voice spoke out of nowhere. "choose wisely, you have greatness in you. There is an adventure waiting for you, but there's nothing to fear."

Crin walked to the dagger and the voice spoke again

"The power of the Warrior
A weapon of devistating strength.
Able to attack and destroy.
Is this the power you desire?" Crin nodded.

"you have chosen your destiny" the voice said. The sword changed into a Key

The tables dissappeared and the floor dropped out from Crin. He fell through the air and suddenly landed softly on another glass floor with pictures of Mickey, a masked figure and a girl with a friendly face. Crin was confused again but the voice spoke again. "your enemies will come out of nowhere but you will know what to do." Some strange silver creatures appeared and Crin swung the Keyblade and they all dissappeared. A stairway appeared with a white light at the top, and Crin proceded. He stepped into the white light at the top and then he saw his town, Twilight Town.

"Soon it will dissappear" said the voice and Twilight Town started crumbling. " It will be no more and it will be difficult to restore" Twilight Town looked ruined and it was swarming with silver creatures. Crin walked forward and then a demonic gold creature appeared. Crin backed away frightened. The Keyblade appeared in his hand and Crin felt brave. He jumped at the demon's head and started slashing at its head. He dropped to the ground and it's hand started slamming onto the ground, trying to hit him. Crin jumped up and ran up its hand and slashed strongly at its head. The creature dissappeared and Crin once again dropped to the ground. The orange portal appeared under his feet and sucked him in.

[twohearts]

A GREAT starts but piking the sword and leave the shield is to originll it could be like he picked up the STAFF and LEFT the SHIEILD or SWORD.

(Just so you know ,dont flame their just SUGGESTINOS you dont have to do any of them.)

[fireflame]

I didn't flame, i respect their ideas, they're really good.

[twohearts]

Originally Posted by fireflame

I didn't flame, i respect their ideas, they're really good.

i know just sayin for future reference

[Mars]

good start.

[fireflame]

Had to start somewhere. i'm currently working on the first chapter

[Mars]

Originally Posted by fireflame

Had to start somewhere. i'm currently working on the first chapter

keep going man its a great concept.

and feel free to read and possibly flame mine

[Aliahya]

Your a great writer, its really intriging (sp?) is there a love story in it? if not there should be

[fireflame]

@ Aquavenkeyblade- i wouldn't flame your hard work, that's just evil.
@Aliahya- thank you, that means a lot, there will be some romance in there
Rep woulld be appreciated

[twohearts]

do a good job and i may just give u a rep.