Twilit Road to Dawn

[Andillexe]

Originally Posted by Twilight_Path

LOLZ!!!! Omg you had me laughing the whole time Andillexe!

That was so awesome! And... there's more?!?! YAYAYZ!!

:D

What? Laughing? The end part was supposed to be full of drama and having you crying!! Or at least feeling some sympathy towards Riku. =P

Yes, more. I couldn't just leave it as "happily ever after," now could I? Such is my sadistic and sarcastic nature. >3 Now, onto having you read my suspenseful (at least, that's what my sister called it 0.o) prologue to Rebirthing Midnight (name might be changed later, so keep a lookout for my sig).

Prologue

I was running. I wasn’t sure what I was running from, but I was running like hell in the opposite direction of the creatures chasing me. The things behind me were very familiar, but I had no name for them. They were just these dark blobs that apparently had a strong urge to chase me. And there were a lot of the little buggers.

I had no idea where I was, but I didn’t care. All I really cared about was getting away from those creatures. The door was just ahead; I had to get through it. That door was the only way to get rid of the creatures. I didn’t know how, or why, I just knew. The creatures also knew this, thus they proceeded to run faster.

I was almost to the door when the one in front, the leader of this annoying band, tackled me through the door and into the dark oblivion. I struggled to get it off of me when I realized that it wasn’t there anymore. Something else had taken its place. This entity was darker, fouler.

Come. Join us.

I shuddered at the voice. A voice that was way too familiar for comfort. A voice that I despised. His voice.

Xemnas.

The scene changed completely. It went from a blanketing darkness to a blinding white light. I was in a room filled with thirteen cloaked beings sitting on different levels of chairs. I was lying on a sort of dais in the center of the room. It was too bright, so I closed my eyes.

Xemnas’ voice filled the room. “A new member. She was wandering around in the city below. I believe she could be of quite some use to us.”

The others murmured, and then someone spoke. “And how do you know that?” This voice was familiar, too, and he got my blood boiling every time I thought about him. He was the first person I met in Hollow Bastion. That man could rival my sarcasm and kick my ass. His name was Axel. I wanted to reply to his question, say something clever and sarcastic with a big smirk on my face, but my body wouldn’t move. I had just enough will power to slit my eyes open and look at everyone.

“She might have a special ability, like you, me, or Larxene.” This person looked younger than the rest, sounded younger, too. “Or maybe she could be like you, Roxas.” I looked over to Roxas. His face was emotionless as he looked down at me.

Another scene change. This time I was hanging over a great abyss. My hands were gripping at the top of the cliff, and they were slipping. Above me was the young man from before, Roxas, and Axel. Roxas and the other guy were trying to help me up; Axel was standing behind them with their arms crossed.

“Axel! Get your ass over here and help us!” the guy shouted.

“Why should I?” Axel asked boredly. “It’s not like I got her into this.” Why was he saying that like I just got stuck in a hole or something instead of hanging on for dear life?! Besides, it’s not my fault I fell off a cliff. I think. I… actually have no idea how I got into this situation.

“Axel, Xemnas will be really mad if she falls,” Roxas said. “And it’ll be your fault.”

“Oh, damn!” Axel exclaimed.

“Exactly.”

“Not you,” Axel replied tensely. “We’ve got company.”

“Heartless? Hang on, I’m coming.” Roxas turned to face me, apology in his eyes, and let me go. I fell a few inches. The guy was struggling to keep me up.

“I’m so sorry,” he whispered. “I love you.” And I fell into the abyss.

I woke up screaming. That was the first night I had that dream.
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There is the prologue. Yes, it is short. Yes, there can probably be more work done on it. Yes, it most likely will change by the time I finish writing the entire story. Yes, I talk too much. I probably won't post more of the story for a while... so... yeah. It's not as fun-loving and sarcastic as the first one, but it's still a work in progress. =3

[madammina]

WHAT? THAT'S WHERE YOU LEAVE IT!

Riku(?) letting Chrystal fall, Some Org stuff (why are they alive anyway?) and... ooh. You. (words fail in madammina's frustration)

[Andillexe]

Originally Posted by madammina

WHAT? THAT'S WHERE YOU LEAVE IT!

Riku(?) letting Chrystal fall, Some Org stuff (why are they alive anyway?) and... ooh. You. (words fail in madammina's frustration)

Uh... *points at the word "dream"* Tee hee. I'm cruel. XP

[Roxi-chan]

o_o Wow. Give me, give me, give me. More. lol I'll give you a virtual cookie!!!!
That was awesome. lol

[TwilightRiku_13]

Sweet Jesus Muffins of Holy Hell!!! What happens next? Who was the other person with Roxas and Axel? Was it Riku? Was it his NOBODY? Holy crap, please update soon; I so want to know what happens next. Oh yeah, almost forgot, great start to your sequel.

[Andillexe]

Originally Posted by TwilightRiku_13

Sweet Jesus Muffins of Holy Hell!!! What happens next? Who was the other person with Roxas and Axel? Was it Riku? Was it his NOBODY? Holy crap, please update soon; I so want to know what happens next. Oh yeah, almost forgot, great start to your sequel.

I'm creative, but I'm not so creative to have Riku's nobody show up out of the blue, or have Riku all of a sudden just in the organization. Besides, if it was Riku, Cyrstal would've just said "Riku." I feel a bit overestimated. And thank you.

Unfortunately, I really like waiting until the entire story's complete before I post it, and it's not done yet.
...
Please don't kill me. o.o

[Twilight_Path]

Originally Posted by madammina

WHAT? THAT'S WHERE YOU LEAVE IT!

Riku(?) letting Chrystal fall, Some Org stuff (why are they alive anyway?) and... ooh. You. (words fail in madammina's frustration)

LOL my reaction was sorta like this one...

... Fine. Be that way... XD

[Andillexe]

'Allo, everybody. The sequel, Rebirthing Midnight, is now up and ready for reading. Linkage-ness: Rebirthing Midnight.

Enjoy.

[Lanydx]

Just geart. I love it. but WHY is she in a cell?

[Andillexe]

Originally Posted by Lanydx

Just geart. I love it. but WHY is she in a cell?

*evil laughter* Find out next week. MUWAHAHAHAHAHAH.... *looks around* Did I just do that out loud? o.o

[HeartOfTheHero]

omg, i just finished reading this, and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm at a loss for words, which doesn't happen very often. great job and i can wait to start reading the sequel, which i'm going to start in about 2 seconds

[Andillexe]

Wow, thanks. I actually like the sequel a lot better than this one, so I hope you like it.

[khfreak17]

this is really awesome! good job Andillexe. i like Crystal's charecter. she cracks me up

[Andillexe]

Thanks. I really like her character, too. She's just so... outspoken.