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Old August 11th, 2008, 06:24 PM   #1
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"I'm a genius." Were the first words to leave Aqua, Terra and Ven's Master's mouth as he looked upon his three apprentices. Truly a masterpiece to be acknowledged and even fear, he reckoned and reached to scratch his chin thoughtfully as he studied the three young people in front of him.

He loved his apprentices beyond words, more than had he children of his own to tend to... and what better way to show such affection than to prepare new clothes for them to wear, to keep them warm and clean and ever aware of his presence by their side? The design was his; the work - his, and he had the bandaged fingers to prove it (well, he had to be honest - Ven helped too, a bit...); the satisfaction... his alone, apparently.

He had to frown. The three seemed displeased, and a moment later he himself saw why.

Terra was having a hard time closing the buttons on his sleeves.

Ven was having a hard time correctly buttoning up his shirt.

And Aqua...?

Aqua was shifting uneasily yet he couldn't for the life of him fathom why. The sleeves were done nicely, the shirt buttoned correctly, the skirt, not too low... was it?

"Aqua?" He asked, making the girl half jump out of her skin. "Is something the matter?"

A frown caressed his features at the furious blush that rose to her cheeks. "We, well, sir... you, see, I... it's just... it's a bit too tight-"

And no sooner did she finish the sentence did a button give way right from above her chest, flying to land firmly in the middle of her Master's forehead.

Terra had to frown as one from his own shirt soon followed suit.

Ven was still struggling with his.

Their Master sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose.

"...Ven."

"...sir?"

"To the workshop."

"I told you it should've been zippers, sir..."

"I'll just wrap you all up with straps and be done with it."



"...he had better make mine pink." Aqua hissed before ducking right in time to avoid losing an eye by a stray button; Terra's shirt was coming undone faster than her own.

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Hurray for five minute writing XD

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Old August 11th, 2008, 06:30 PM   #2
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that was a pretty entertaining way of explaining their clothes :) good job.
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Old August 11th, 2008, 07:17 PM   #3
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OMG. I ROFL at this. Hahahahaa.....wow. Totally funny. I love how Aqua just says that at the end...good five minute story. XD
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Old August 11th, 2008, 07:21 PM   #4
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Lofl. Thats pretty funny. xD
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Old August 11th, 2008, 07:25 PM   #5
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I enjoyed that, good job! Very interesting! VAT was a little harsh..
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Old August 11th, 2008, 09:13 PM   #6
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:O
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Old August 11th, 2008, 11:05 PM   #7
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Oh my god, that story was really funny; I laughed the whole time reading it. I really like your stories, I hope you write more.
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That was funny. Short but sweet and to the point!
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Old August 12th, 2008, 09:36 AM   #9
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Nice, that was hilarious!
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Very awsome story. Lol, it really brightned my day *looks outside* even though there is a hurricane...
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Old September 1st, 2008, 05:59 AM   #11
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great job. That is one of the funniest things I've read.
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Old September 3rd, 2008, 01:33 AM   #12
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Default Re: The reason Aqua wears the pink straps...

Ven is always right. >:\ It should ALWAYS be zippers! [strike]buttons suck anyways; zippers pwn allllllllll[/strike]

That was hilarious! One of the funniest KH fanfics I've read before.
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It should always be zippers! ALWAYS.

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Old September 6th, 2008, 10:54 AM   #14
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I loved this story! It was just so randomly good. X3
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Old September 22nd, 2008, 10:21 PM   #15
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I love you :3.. I love it! I love Aqua!
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