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| Araliya, Crimson & Gildragon's Xion Registered: Jan 2008 Location: 12 to go Age: 23 Posts: 14,373
Reputation: 22 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth; Rayman 1 for the PC Level: 57 EXP: | "I'm a genius." Were the first words to leave Aqua, Terra and Ven's Master's mouth as he looked upon his three apprentices. Truly a masterpiece to be acknowledged and even fear, he reckoned and reached to scratch his chin thoughtfully as he studied the three young people in front of him. He loved his apprentices beyond words, more than had he children of his own to tend to... and what better way to show such affection than to prepare new clothes for them to wear, to keep them warm and clean and ever aware of his presence by their side? The design was his; the work - his, and he had the bandaged fingers to prove it (well, he had to be honest - Ven helped too, a bit...); the satisfaction... his alone, apparently. He had to frown. The three seemed displeased, and a moment later he himself saw why. Terra was having a hard time closing the buttons on his sleeves. Ven was having a hard time correctly buttoning up his shirt. And Aqua...? Aqua was shifting uneasily yet he couldn't for the life of him fathom why. The sleeves were done nicely, the shirt buttoned correctly, the skirt, not too low... was it? "Aqua?" He asked, making the girl half jump out of her skin. "Is something the matter?" A frown caressed his features at the furious blush that rose to her cheeks. "We, well, sir... you, see, I... it's just... it's a bit too tight-" And no sooner did she finish the sentence did a button give way right from above her chest, flying to land firmly in the middle of her Master's forehead. Terra had to frown as one from his own shirt soon followed suit. Ven was still struggling with his. Their Master sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. "...Ven." "...sir?" "To the workshop." "I told you it should've been zippers, sir..." "I'll just wrap you all up with straps and be done with it." "...he had better make mine pink." Aqua hissed before ducking right in time to avoid losing an eye by a stray button; Terra's shirt was coming undone faster than her own. ---------------------------------------------------- Hurray for five minute writing XD Last edited by Smile; August 11th, 2008 at 06:37 PM. |
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| Member | that was a pretty entertaining way of explaining their clothes :) good job. |
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| Someday ♥ will find me in the rough Registered: Apr 2005 Location: In a secluded village where the lights sparkle on a cold blistery night. Posts: 3,558
Reputation: 9 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts: RE:COM (finishing Sora's Story), FFVII: Crisis Core, and Final Fantasy X Level: 41 EXP: | OMG. I ROFL at this. Hahahahaa.....wow. Totally funny. I love how Aqua just says that at the end...good five minute story. XD |
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| I'm....h...a....p...p...y | Lofl. Thats pretty funny. xD |
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| Organization Member Registered: Jul 2008 Location: *Poot* Posts: 418
Reputation: 2 ![]() Level: EXP: | I enjoyed that, good job! Very interesting! VAT was a little harsh.. |
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| Banned | :O <3 |
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| Enigmatic Soldier Registered: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 875
Reputation: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Oh my god, that story was really funny; I laughed the whole time reading it. I really like your stories, I hope you write more. |
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| Xehanort hates Braig's guts. | That was funny. Short but sweet and to the point! |
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| JuStIcE Registered: Jun 2008 Location: The bagel Age: 13 Posts: 4,048
Reputation: 7 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: nothing really Level: 20 EXP: | Nice, that was hilarious! |
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| It's my birthday (12/02)! Registered: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,331
Reputation: 3 ![]() Level: 27 EXP: | Very awsome story. Lol, it really brightned my day *looks outside* even though there is a hurricane... |
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| Notorious White Mage Captainess Registered: Feb 2008 Location: Halliwell Manor Age: 20 Posts: 7,688
Reputation: 10 ![]() ![]() Level: 36 EXP: | great job. That is one of the funniest things I've read. |
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| 3 5 8 days & two | Ven is always right. >:\ It should ALWAYS be zippers! [strike]buttons suck anyways; zippers pwn allllllllll[/strike] That was hilarious! One of the funniest KH fanfics I've read before. |
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| God's no friend of mine. Registered: Aug 2008 Posts: 2,666
Reputation: 4 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | It should always be zippers! ALWAYS. <3 |
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| Captain L.O. Shadow | I loved this story! It was just so randomly good. X3 |
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| Swear I was blind before I met you Registered: Nov 2007 Age: 18 Posts: 3,072
Reputation: 7 ![]() ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | I love you :3.. I love it! I love Aqua! |
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