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| Araliya, Crimson & Gildragon's Xion Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In a dark corner, playing Days again and writing site content Age: 23 Posts: 13,723
Rep Power: 19 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Youkoso! Hitori Bouchi Level: 53 EXP: | "I'm a genius." Were the first words to leave Aqua, Terra and Ven's Master's mouth as he looked upon his three apprentices. Truly a masterpiece to be acknowledged and even fear, he reckoned and reached to scratch his chin thoughtfully as he studied the three young people in front of him. He loved his apprentices beyond words, more than had he children of his own to tend to... and what better way to show such affection than to prepare new clothes for them to wear, to keep them warm and clean and ever aware of his presence by their side? The design was his; the work - his, and he had the bandaged fingers to prove it (well, he had to be honest - Ven helped too, a bit...); the satisfaction... his alone, apparently. He had to frown. The three seemed displeased, and a moment later he himself saw why. Terra was having a hard time closing the buttons on his sleeves. Ven was having a hard time correctly buttoning up his shirt. And Aqua...? Aqua was shifting uneasily yet he couldn't for the life of him fathom why. The sleeves were done nicely, the shirt buttoned correctly, the skirt, not too low... was it? "Aqua?" He asked, making the girl half jump out of her skin. "Is something the matter?" A frown caressed his features at the furious blush that rose to her cheeks. "We, well, sir... you, see, I... it's just... it's a bit too tight-" And no sooner did she finish the sentence did a button give way right from above her chest, flying to land firmly in the middle of her Master's forehead. Terra had to frown as one from his own shirt soon followed suit. Ven was still struggling with his. Their Master sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. "...Ven." "...sir?" "To the workshop." "I told you it should've been zippers, sir..." "I'll just wrap you all up with straps and be done with it." "...he had better make mine pink." Aqua hissed before ducking right in time to avoid losing an eye by a stray button; Terra's shirt was coming undone faster than her own. ---------------------------------------------------- Hurray for five minute writing XD Last edited by Smile; August 11th, 2008 at 06:37 PM. |
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| Member | that was a pretty entertaining way of explaining their clothes :) good job. |
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| Remember December Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: In a palace, determining numbers and words into a journal Posts: 3,486
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Final Fantasy X (yes, late gamer here) Level: 40 EXP: | OMG. I ROFL at this. Hahahahaa.....wow. Totally funny. I love how Aqua just says that at the end...good five minute story. XD |
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| NEWFAGS CAN'T TRIFORCE | Lofl. Thats pretty funny. xD |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: *Poot* Posts: 418
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: EXP: | I enjoyed that, good job! Very interesting! VAT was a little harsh.. |
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| -HAPPY FUN TIME- | :O <3 |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Oh my god, that story was really funny; I laughed the whole time reading it. I really like your stories, I hope you write more. |
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| A FAWKING KEY-TRIKE? STOOPID IDEA!! | That was funny. Short but sweet and to the point! |
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| Featured on the KHI RP wikia hehe Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: A distant planet, skyline of red plateaus. Strange air and vegetation. Posts: 3,849
Rep Power: 6 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days Level: 19 EXP: | Nice, that was hilarious! |
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| broken Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,323
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 27 EXP: | Very awsome story. Lol, it really brightned my day *looks outside* even though there is a hurricane... |
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| Notorious White Mage Captainess Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Haunted Mansion Age: 20 Posts: 7,347
Rep Power: 10 ![]() ![]() Level: 35 EXP: | great job. That is one of the funniest things I've read. |
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| 3 5 8 days & two | Ven is always right. >:\ It should ALWAYS be zippers! [strike]buttons suck anyways; zippers pwn allllllllll[/strike] That was hilarious! One of the funniest KH fanfics I've read before. |
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| God's no friend of mine. Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 2,710
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | It should always be zippers! ALWAYS. <3 |
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| Captain L.O. Shadow | I loved this story! It was just so randomly good. X3 |
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| February, pick up your pen and weep Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2,811
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | I love you :3.. I love it! I love Aqua! |
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