Heroes: Legends (Sign Ups)

[tdc456]

Thats fine.
I think keeping her a pyromancer would be cool.
Its up to you though.

[Ven1233]

i dont watch heroes so i dont no if it will go with it if it doesnt tell me and ill change it.
name: blackbullet (jordan alao)
age: 12
gender:male
appearance: sort of tall for his age around 5' 6'', he has black spikey hair. he wears a black football jersey and long white shorts. he's mixed (his moms white and his dads black) so he has caremal skin. he likes to sag but his boxers are covered by his jersey. he has a pure black katana that he holds in his belt loop. he has black eyes and size 13 white and black skateboeard shoes.

persnality: he's a laid back guy thats nice 2 anyone he meets. he is not afraid to jump in to save someones life. He is not only a middle shcool student but has a secret life as an assasian. Most of the time hes nice but when hes working he can be cold and ruthless. Being an assasian is the only way he can survive because hes an orphan and lives in his parents abandonded house. If he had his way he would protect people instead of killing them. he acts naive and stupid but hes actually one of the smartest kids in school.

occupation: middle school student, assasion

ability: superspeed, demon nature( pick whaterver one u want) he was born with a demon nature power, and developed his super speed over time. with his speed he can run and it will only look like a blur to the human eye. his demon nature comes out raandomly and when it does com out he is bloodthirsty and ruthless. peopel can tell hes in demon mode because he has monsturous eyes and strange markings on his face.
location: los angelas, California
history: His parents had speacial abilities just like him. when he was one both his parents got murdered by some uknown people. He was raised by his granpa until the age of five when he went berserk and accidentally killed his granpa. He has been tortured by nightmares of that day until this very day. even though he is pretty popular he often keeps himself distant from all people. he lives by himself in his old house and lived off of his inheritance. After a couple of years his inheritance started to run out so he had to find a way to support himself. He was pretty skilled with the family katana and was unbeleivibaly fast. with these skills he became a paid assasion.
he hates killing people but has to do it to survive. if he has 2 he will go against orders if he has to go aganst his beleifs

Quote: "how u doin!!!!!!"

[Chariot of Fire]

Sorry man, I'm going to have to decline. A 12 year old paid assassin? With 'demon powers?' Wrong kind of story man. Look at the other characters so maybe you can get a better idea

[Ven1233]

now that i look back a 12 year old assasian is kind of weird. what if i make him a little older like 15 or 16 and take out the demon powers. Tell me if changing it like that would make you accep it . if it still is wierd after i do that then ill change it completly

[Chariot of Fire]

Sorry, but kid assasins are not quite material for this. Try a totally new approach; be creative

[Ven1233]

name: blackbullet (jordan stephens)

age:14

gender:male

appearance:sort of tall 5' 9" uasually wears black jerseys and white shorts. carries around a his family katana(a pure black katana), has black spiky hair and has really black skin. sags alot and wears clothes that are to big for him so he can sag.

personality: loves to joke around and hang out with his freinds. he is the class clown and makes people laugh. he is nice to almost anybody he sees but when his freinds get threatened or hurt he isnt afraid to protect them at any cost. he is pretty smart even though he doesnt look like it

occupation: high school freshman

ability:super speed. do to his silly nature he usually hurts himself while running( like running into poles)

location: los angeles, california

history: jordan grew up living with a family that smothered him to much. his mom is way to overprotective but his dad always encourages him to do sports more. when his dad isnt working hes training people in his dojo. when his mom is in charge she makes him study and cook. even though he lives a pretty normal life he has a unatural obbsession to help people and make a difference. he was never into his dads dojo and was only into football and basketball. until he was about to get beat up by the entire rival football team. he new he wasnt goin to be able to take them all so he ran away. they started to chase him in the bus until he started running fast enough that he was a blur. he new that this was his ticket to make a differance so he joined his dads dojo and learned tae-kwan-do and became a master at using the katana. he recently just started to stop gang wars in LA. since he started crime in la has decreased 30%
quote: your mine foo

[Chariot of Fire]

Sorry man, I'm just not feeling it. Maybe next time? I need some more 'normal' characters though; not everyone's family or friends has to be murdered in a gang war

[Ven1233]

ya i was looking at the other ones and a lot of them had family killed ill redo it later of tommorrow

[Ven1233]

look at the last one i did. i edited it to make it more normal. i hope its normal enough. im determined to become the 10nth character

[Chariot of Fire]

Ugh... see, I feel bad since you are so determined. Thing is though, your character doesn't quite fit into the entire concept of Heroes. Crime decreased 30%? In Heroes, the special people are meant more to be anonymous, trying to 'deal with their powers' rather than instantly being capable of solving crime problems. Also, there is the issue of carrying a katana. Sure Hiro did it, but he didn't have it from the beginning. So unfortunately man, I'm going to have to say no.

[Ven1233]

aaaaaa mmmmman ill watch a couple watch of eisodes of heroes then try again

[Ven1233]

actually i give up. i mean 4 times is enough. cant wait to read it though

[Chariot of Fire]

Sorry man, maybe next time

[Honky Sam]

Oh man, I love Heroes.

Name: Notorious Black

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Appearance: Notorious Black has a swimmers build, he is a tall, neatly dressed individual. He has semi-pale skin with short, eye brow long black hair. He usually wears expensive, two button Gucci suit, showing off that he is very rich and powerful. Notorious has bright blue eyes and long eye lashes.

Personality: Notorious was a very social person. He has lots of friends and is normally a very happy person.

Occupation: Freelance Artist/ Student

Ability: Teleportation. Notorious has the ability to transport himself, or any object anywhere he wants.

Location: Duluth, Minnesota.

History: Notorious Black was raised in Duluth, Minnesota. He had great parents, a large house, and he got generally everything he wanted. He lived an easy childhood, with few problems. When he was 6 he showed the first signs of teleportation. You see, he was still and child, and very short, he couldn't reach the top of the counter, and that's where his mother had just put the freshly baked cookies. He jumped and jumped but still couldn't reach them. The next thing he knew he had a cookie in his hand. He had no idea how it got there, but it was there none the less. That was only the first time. As he grew older, he became more aware of the ability. He began training himself. At the age of 13 he was teleporting everywhere he went, he was careful not to let anyone see though. At the age of 14 both his parents were killed in a horrible car accident. A drunk drive was driving on the wrong side of the freeway and hit his parents dead on.

Notorious was forced to go live in a foster home, far away from lake Superior. To be exact, he moved all the way to a farm out in Oklahoma. The money, the cars, the house... his parents, they were all gone. He got to bring most of his material possessions with him. Here he had all the space in the world to practice his teleportation. During his trials, he discovered he could only teleport within ten miles of his location. Still, he could teleport anything he wanted, anywhere he wanted, as large as he wanted. When he was eighteen he got into the University of Minnesota Duluth. He could finally go back to his hometown. He was eighteen so all of his parents money was his. Since his parents house was so close to his school he could just live there. Just a few weeks after he moved back into the house, he began having these horrible nightmares. In the nightmare, there was this man standing in the rain on the top of this hill. You couldn't make out any of his features, because it was just a silhouette. The man begins to whisper something indecipherable. Soon after, he teleports right in front of Notorious. After that Notorious wakes up. To this day Notorious has that nightmare every night.
Quote: "Never fall asleep. You wont wake up."

[Chariot of Fire]

Accepted. That makes 10, but if anyone can come up with a character before I post the first chapter, I will still consider it.