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Old July 17th, 2008, 09:09 AM   #1
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Default KH fanfiction - Heartbeat (SoNami, implied SoKai)
Contains CoM spoilers


Summary : Post CoM. Drabble of a sort.
Spoilers – CoM/Re:CoM…
Namine thinks about her Existence as little by little she is wiped out of Sora's Memories.

SoNami, implied SoKai.
Kitchy, just felt like posting something up.


Heartbeat

It's beating.

Thump-thump, Thump-thump.

Repeatedly, continuously, eternally almost.

Thump-thump, Thump-thump.

The sound of Life, the sound of Existence.

The sound my own Body fails to emit.

The sweetest of sounds now so close and yet so far away as it's ringing in my ear.

Thump-thump, Thump-thump.

The sound of Reality, the sound of Being.

Inside that sound there is I, there is He.

There is She.

Thump-thump, Thump-thump.

Inside that rhythm, I exist. Appreciated, recognized… Remembered.

Thump-thump.

Loved.

Thump-thump.

How can heartbeats lie?

I was never there, never anywhere, and yet it's like it's calling my name.

Thump-thump.

Namine.

Thump-thump.

At the same time, it is also calling hers.

Thump-thump.

Kairi.

Thump-thump.

The one who was really there… the one who is.

The Princess, not the Witch.

Thump-thump.

He remembers her slowly, piece by piece. Forgets me, the way it was supposed to be. Letting me sink back into nothingness, into the void.

Into Oblivion, where our Memories together are a mere child's scribbles, scattered pages on the floor.

No Light, no Love, no Hope.

Not anymore.

Thump-thump, Thump-thump.

I'm sorry. Looks like I'll have to break our promise.

Thump-thump.

But it's ok, isn't it?

Thump-thump.

It's not like I'd have let you remember it anyway.

Thump-thump.

Even though I loved you…

Thump-thump.

Because I loved you.

Thump-thump.

Goodbye.

Thump-
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Old July 17th, 2008, 10:29 AM   #2
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That was beautiful. Very sad. : )
Love it~ ^^
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Old July 17th, 2008, 03:34 PM   #3
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Wow...nice, it's like you really reflected Namine in a sense that she should be more important Kairi, wow, that's good! :)
Keep it up!
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Old August 16th, 2008, 10:35 PM   #4
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<3
Poor Naminé D:
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Old August 16th, 2008, 11:44 PM   #5
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That was great. Keep up the good fan-fics!
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Old August 17th, 2008, 01:30 AM   #6
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Aw, that was very sad, but a very good story. I hope you continue with your short stories; I really enjoy reading them.
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Old February 5th, 2009, 12:16 AM   #7
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that was really good (although i'm sure you've heard that a lot).
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Old February 5th, 2009, 05:25 AM   #8
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Wow, it's a poem that I actually liked! Nice job, that was sad!
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