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Old March 9th, 2005, 05:29 PM   #16
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lol if you get onto the subject of rikku with him...(i did once) its crazy just to say the least. try messaging him...get onto the subject of rikku (i got bored and decided to search for pictures of her lol) and he goes crazy over them. he is the #1 fanboy of her there is no getting around it.
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Old March 9th, 2005, 08:58 PM   #17
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lol, how long do we have to wait 4 u to post more? You said later 3 times. If your like, taking your time or somethin then take your time but it's taking a while. (Im nuts)
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Old March 10th, 2005, 02:55 AM   #18
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Well, I post a poem I'm finishing up soon. My inspiration is a sad pic of Rikku Tidus22340 sent me. He knows which one.
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Old March 10th, 2005, 02:57 AM   #19
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i iwhs i could hold rikku T_T
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Old March 10th, 2005, 04:41 AM   #20
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Don't you dare touch her. I'll literally rip your balls off with my bare hands. MY BARE HANDS.
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Old March 10th, 2005, 05:08 AM   #21
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Aww.. It really cute. Really loving. x.x Your good!

You should right those cards with romance poems in hem. XD
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Old March 10th, 2005, 08:25 AM   #22
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It’s very nice. I saw you argueing over this dude about who Rikku belonged to…it went on for a long time so I got bored and went off. I can’t remember the other dude’s name. But its cool.
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Old March 10th, 2005, 10:17 PM   #23
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Don't you dare touch her. I'll literally rip your balls off with my bare hands. MY BARE HANDS.
0_o um...scary....hey this is off topic but what the hell happened to Rikku's Last Mission (i think that was the topic). It was good i liked it. Now on-topic, i can't wait for your next poem, i bet it's gonna be awesome.
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Old March 11th, 2005, 01:30 AM   #24
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OMG! You remeber! Well, before the forums screwed up and some of the topics got lost it was up. But, now it's erased and I can't restore it because I forgot to save it. T_T.

Anyway here's the next poem.

Sadness

Sadness, why do you hurt her so?
She's been through so much; I want to know.
Why do you torment her with feelings of regret?
She wasn't like this when we met.
She'd smile, dance, and laugh in glee.
Now she cries and from my care she'd flee.

Please, leave her alone. She can't take anymore.
Just go outside, and shut the door.
Golden tears fall from her face.
An angel's tear in her case.
She'll break down and run out of hope.
She'll lose all faith and she would mope.

I'd be willing to take your punishment.
Make me cry, make her smile.
Give me the sorrow that consumes her so.
Hand me the ball and chain, I'd walk for a mile.
Make me cry and break down.
Crush me with the weight of the world.
If she's with me, you'd never make me frown.

This poem might not seem to be related to Rikku in anyway but if you see this pic, you'll understand why I wrote this.

http://metoyou.canalblog.com/rikku.jpg
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Old March 11th, 2005, 02:06 AM   #25
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very good...you used my picture ^_^ go sensei! (lol i told you id call you that when the forums got screwed up...but you didnt get it because they did get screwed up)
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Old March 11th, 2005, 02:48 AM   #26
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rikku's so hot and i want to hold her so tight!
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Old March 11th, 2005, 03:18 AM   #27
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Don't you dare! She's with me!!! Or... The One He Fears. He's somewhere in the Islands of Something or other and I have to save her!!

Don't make me get my hammers. I swear I will get them.
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Old March 11th, 2005, 03:28 AM   #28
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dude lixel dont mess with him...it gets ugly if you try to make a move on rikku...just trust me...it gets ugly. *saying very slowly* just dont say anything else like that ok?
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Old March 11th, 2005, 09:57 AM   #29
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Yeah, dude. It got really... well, almost scary with those two (Cloud_Unchained and The One He Fears) fighting over Rikku... you really don't want to test him.
Although, it would be kinda amusing for the rest of us... lol.

About your second poem, it's really sweet. But I'm really starting to wonder about your obsession with her, it's too... hmm... I can't think of the word at the moment, but it's really deep at the very least.
Oh, and maybe chance the title. It's kinda sad compared to what follows.
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Old March 12th, 2005, 03:38 AM   #30
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I missed alot! Anyway nice poem, i liked it alot. Don't mess with cloud_unchained on the old fourms his sig said:

I am the official Rikku #1 Fanboy touch her and i'll beat your head in.

In other words just don't try.
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