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Old 03/27/08, 12:43 AM   #1
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So, let's start getting our ideas down. What I think we have right now is:

1) Trio + Disney 3 somehow get sent to alternate Starwars dimension
2) a) Sora, Donald, Goofy, Mickey end up on Tattoine ( I think)
b)Riku's on Coruscant
c)Kari's on the moon of Endor
d) Roxas and Namine are on Naboo
3)Our original characters will be added.
4)This takes place either just at the end of Phantom Menace or early Attack of the Clones and continues until
Episode 3.
5) Only KH mythology stuff is stuff they take with them (i.e. RIku manipulates Darkness. Roxas is a Nobody,
etc)
6) They are looking for a way back

I think I'm missing a little so feel free to add.


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Old 03/27/08, 12:47 AM   #2
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AntiSora mentioned since they're in a new dimension they should become weaker
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Old 03/27/08, 12:48 AM   #3
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Good idea. Like how they can't glide and stuff. Namine and Roxas' abilities should stay.
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Old 03/27/08, 12:57 AM   #4
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hm where is AntiSora at?
maybe you should PM him the link here
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Old 03/27/08, 01:09 AM   #5
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I'm here. name's Luis, got it memorized? lol I agree on the weakening of the character's abilties
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Old 03/27/08, 01:11 AM   #6
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Palpatine is interested in the stories of Sora, Kairi and Riku of fighting the Heartless and Nobodies but is especially interested in Riku, wishing to learn as much as he can about the embodiments of darkness known as the Heartless
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Old 03/27/08, 01:12 AM   #7
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i was wondering where you went man
also now that we got the characters down how are we gona present this script format or in paragraphs
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Old 03/27/08, 01:13 AM   #8
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i was wondering where you went man
also now that we got the characters down how are we gona present this script format or in paragraphs
Prefer it to be in paragraphs but it's you and Madammina's decision, sorry...taking a shower xD
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i hope madammina has sweet dreams
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Old 03/27/08, 01:32 AM   #10
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Under topic, Riku reveals to Palpatine of the names Ansem and the Heartless along with the power of darkness which took over his heart yet he learnt to master him, Palpatine puts this information into memory and occasionally brings Riku over eventually leading him to meet Anakin who is acquainted of darkness and its comparison to the Force.

Riku grows extremely wary of the Palpatine's wishes to learn more about the darkness and begins to avoid him and confront Sora and Kairi about it who are trusting of palpatine at the moment while at the Temple. Ansem meanwhiles increases the strength of his presence within Riku's heart due to the Clone Wars beginning to start.
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Old 03/27/08, 01:42 AM   #11
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i hope madammina has sweet dreams
And why wouldn't I? I have to eat you know.

Anti, good idea. This has to be after the three are reunited though.

And I checked out fanfic rules, all fanfics must be (or at least extremely encouraged) in paragraph mode. I probably would have done Paragraphs anway.

Can we post a list of planets and their attributes. I haven't seen the movies in a few years.
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Old 03/27/08, 01:55 AM   #12
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that depends how many worlds are we gonna use also how close are we following the films and as a side note wat are our original characters gonna be and wat should their motives be
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Old 03/27/08, 02:04 AM   #13
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I say fairly closely, as our characters tag along with the main rather than make their own separate adventures.

as for Characters:

Kelsie, the new Tia Dolma. She manipulates water by thinking of music (and changing the music changes the effects) she can also eavesdrop on people near water by submerging herself in water. She can also walk on water and dissolve herself. She creates portals by thinking of music that best personifies a place when near water. She fights with 3 pairs of metal knives (that will be replaced for laser ones here). 1 pair are ornate knives with hooked edges, hard to wield but vicious if they make contact. Another are more like Dirks and are the easiest in hand to hand combat. The third are throwing knives which she is very accurate with. Something summoned her to PoTC for DMC and AWE. After being forced to stay at RG when everything was over she started to suffer from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder relating to the Battle of Singapore. She is also instantly healed when submerged in water.

As the lead elemental, she has dreams of where her job needs to take her. having a Dream of Starwars (with the accompanying music) she uses the music to take her there.

She is currently dating Riku, but they don't see much of eachother because they are always busy. She also speaks fluent Russian and sometimes slips into it when astonished or frustrated.

She will not start a battle on her own, but if attacked she will strike back with a vengance. Her motive is for light to win.

edit: I forgot, she's one of 9 elementals. (not all are disney, forgive me) and these are mostly random

Shawn Spencer (Psych) Grass
Maleficent: Lightning
Warren Peace (Sky High) Fire
_________________: rock based earth (No idea)
Launchpad: Air
Desmond (Lost): Steel
Namine: Darkness (not awakened and more of a last chance.)
Roxas: Light (same here)

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Old 03/27/08, 02:16 AM   #14
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I say fairly closely, as our characters tag along with the main rather than make their own separate adventures.

as for Characters:

Kelsie, the new Tia Dolma. She manipulates water by thinking of music (and changing the music changes the effects) she can also eavesdrop on people near water by submerging herself in water. She can also walk on water and dissolve herself. She creates portals by thinking of music that best personifies a place when near water. She fights with 3 pairs of metal knives (that will be replaced for laser ones here). 1 pair are ornate knives with hooked edges, hard to wield but vicious if they make contact. Another are more like Dirks and are the easiest in hand to hand combat. The third are throwing knives which she is very accurate with. Something summoned her to PoTC for DMC and AWE. After being forced to stay at RG when everything was over she started to suffer from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder relating to the Battle of Singapore. She is also instantly healed when submerged in water.

As the lead elemental, she has dreams of where her job needs to take her. having a Dream of Starwars (with the accompanying music) she uses the music to take her there.

She is currently dating Riku, but they don't see much of eachother because they are always busy. She also speaks fluent Russian and sometimes slips into it when astonished or frustrated.

She will not start a battle on her own, but if attacked she will strike back with a vengance. Her motive is for light to win.
Kairi when she is on Endor meets up with a man named Leviathan Ravencroft, a wandering traveler of the Star Wars universe. His power speciality is that of the ocean and teaches Kairi of the ways of the water to implement them with her weakened Keyblade powers as a mentor. He uses a double bladed polearm that shoots out magic water attacks. He is of a different universe seperate from KH and SW and wishes to aid Kairi find her friends as he himself is searching for the missing Remnants. He is around his mid 30s yet claims to be thousands of years old. He wears plain clothing made of materials from Endor and is allied with the wookies
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Old 03/27/08, 02:23 AM   #15
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Riku lands in Coruscant yet is under attack by Republic security forces who mistake him as a spy of the CIS and is running since he is not able to use his Keyblade or dark powers. He is trapped within an alley with the troopers ready to fire on him until the grounds begins to rumble and the troopers are encased in a earthly prison by a unknown warrior in a white cloak. He introduces himself as Behemoth Knight (a man resembling a older Riku) and wields a Keyblade-like tomahawk weapon which implements earth. A black wing is sprouting from the man's back, about to be 21 years old in appearance. He reveals himself to be a servant of Mother Gaia and everything went blank. He is seeking his fellow friends. Unlike Leviathan who is quite open to everyone , Behemoth keeps to himself preferring the solitude
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