Star Wars plotting (madammina, Xziled and AntiSora92)

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by madammina

ach. you're making me feel guilty. Here's another go at Kelsie as I would write.

Riku walked through the underwater world, following the Jedi master Obi Wan Kenobi. He watched the fish swim by, then did a double take. A girl was swimming underwater. Not just any girl, it was Kelsie. He tapped the glass, alerting the Droid and Obi Wan Kenobi to the girl outside. Kelsie heard the tap, and glanced over at Riku. SHe quickly swam to the edge and shouted "Riku! There you are! I had a dream the other night, about someone's hand being taking off and betrayal, alot of betrayal." But all that could be heard through the glass was, nothing. The trio inside the building watched her mouth move.

"Do you have a lock?" Riku asked the droid. The droid nodded and led the way to the lock. Riiku motioned for Kelsie to follow him. "can you fill the bottom with water? Just a few inches." The droid made the calculations on the computer and a few inches of water filled the chamber floor. Kelsie saw Riku's actions, and nodded. Obi Wan Kenobi looked in astonishment as the girl dissapeared before his very eyes. The water at the bottom of the lock now acted strangely. It began to rise as if pulled up by a mysterious force and something shaped the water into the shape of the girl previously outside in the sea. Obi Wan Kenobi realized then that she had stayed under for a long time, and infact seemed to be breathing underwater. Riku watched patiently as the form solidified and then took color. Kelsie Nielson appeared in the lock and wasn't wet.

I am your angel of music. Come to me angel of music reverberated in the lock. Water quickly swirled up to create a ball in Kelsie's palm. She looked over at the door. THe droid opened it for her.

"Do you have anyplace for me to put this?" She said. The droid motioned to a bucked. The melody and song reversed, so that the water flew out of her hand, and into the bucket.

"how did you get here?" Riku asked, but he grinned. He couldn't help it.

"I dreamt of this place, and it was a Tia Dolma dream, not a normal one. Everything" Riku cleared his throat.

"I should probably introduce you, this is Obi Wan Kenobi. He's a Jedi."

"May the force be with you." Obi Wan Kenobi said. Kelsie resisted the urge to say "and also with you."

"thank you."

"how did you get that tattoo?" Kenobi asked, referring to the small sun tattooed on her upper left arm. In truth it marked her as an elemental, but the less said about that, the better.

"Family tradition." Was the answer. A droid tapped her on the shoulder. In a blink of an eye, Kelsie punched the droid, not realizing it was a robot.

"The recent batched has just hatched." The droid said, ignoring the recent hit. Kelsie reflected on the first time someone had snuck up on her after returning to East High from Port Royal. It was Ryan, and she had broken his nose.

"Follow me. We will continue our tour." Riku followed along with Kelsie by his side.

"What did you see?" he whispered.

"A lot of betrayal." She looked around the halls. "I checked in with the restoration committee before I came. Cid's working on replicating your journey. It has something to do with fusing warp gummis right at black holes. But I'm a composer so I don't bother with it too much."

"Here we are." the Droid said, showing the clones. "Your Clone Army." Riku didn't say anything, he looked at the millions of clones in the room. "They are ready for duty." Kelsie muttered something under her breath that sounded like a Russian curse.

"An Army of CLONES!" she practically yelled at Obi Wan Kenobi.

That's as far as I got.


Edit: Kelsie is on good terms with the trio so anywhere is fine. Kairi and Kelsie kind of have a bond because Kelsie taught Kairi how to use a computer and shared a room with her too.

In Coruscant, footsteps were being heard belonging to two silver haired men. One was younger than the other and the supposed older of the two had a white, angelic wing sprouting from his back as well as a polearm that served as the man's weapon. It was none other than Ziz and Riku walking towards the Chancellor's office, one of the tallest buildings in the Republic capital. Two ARC Clone troopers stood guard over the main entrance and raised their weapons upon seeing the two.

Ziz said to the ARC troopers, "We've come under orders of a Chancellor within this building since we have an appointment with him personally." The ARC troopers just looked at one another talking amongst themselves.

Riku said adding to Ziz's statement, "We need to see him, a friend of mines told us that we should see this Chancellor..."

"Who is your friend?" The ARC trooper asked Riku.

"Obi-wan of the Jedi Order," answered Riku, "General of the clone armies at the Outer Core."

"Very well, you have permission Sir Riku," answered the ARC trooper. Riku and Ziz were about to go into the building when the clones raised their rifles at Ziz, "Riku can go, but you stay. From the looks of that mug of yours, I say you're a Sith!"

"A Sith!!" Ziz shouts angrily and pulls out his polearm, "I show you not to mess with a Son of Gaia!"

"Ziz wait!" Riku shouted at him immediately stopping Ziz who dismissed his weapon, "Stay calm Ziz, we don't want to be marked men again by the clones. They're on our side."

Ziz rolled his eyes, "Fine then, I'll stay here with the Jango clones, go have fun with the Chancellor.

"I won't, this Chancellor from what I heard sounds more boring that guy I worked for, Ansem the Wise..." He enters the building while Ziz thinks to himself.

These clones can't be trusted with aiding us, I can feel darkness increasing..."

[Xziled]

Originally Posted by madammina

I kind of have to. She's based off of HSM's Kelsie Nielson. Her title is Tia Dolma Kelsie. I could have her take up an alias there though.

Oh, and I'm probably going to need your help. I know what about 12 songs do. I need a song that would defend her. Right now all I can think of is Sanctuary but that would kind of break the 4th wall and I don't want that.

And I'm fine with a Kelsie/Kairi team.

why 12 songs and thats a nice entry Anti

[madammina]

Cause that's all I can think of right now. Here's the list.
Attack
Phantom’s Overture: A wave of water crashes in the direction she’s facing (water must be behind her)
Before he cheats: varies according to lyric (opponent must be standing in water)
Stronger: Verses causes water to whip where she’s pointing. Refrain creates pillars of water that push out. (Must be standing in water)

Defense
Sanctuary: wall of water absorbs attack

Special
Zelda’s Lullaby: Music box effect
Sharp flute and violin: Freezes water
What I’ve Done: a wave of water that she surfs on
Umbrella: Keeps water from hitting someone (like an umbrella)
Lord of the Ring singing: a pillar of water that she stands on.
New Shoes: Changes her Tia shoes.
Snow (hey oh): causes it to snow. The only one that does not require water.
Cleaning Wizard of Oz song: Cleans stuff
Hold On: No use yet, uses it as distraction and taunt in final battle.
How to Save a Life: Plays it when she is really depressed. (no one knows about her...)

Person
Move Along: Axel
Far Away: Sora
You are the Music in Me: Troy and Gabriella
Make your own kind of Music: Desmond
Everday: Her and Riku
Lost Highway: Ale?

Place
I Know You Know: Santa Barbra
Hips Don’t Lie: Tortuga
It Ends Tonight: Nobody world
Lost Theme: The Island
Home: Home (wherever she considers it to be. Usually her house)
Boston: Boston
New York State of Mind: NY City
Fame: Julliard

okay, more than 12, but I need more attack and defensive songs. And she has a bro named Brad who covers for her.

and agree with Xziled. Good entry.

[Xziled]

numb by linkin park-freezes the water trapping enemies
rods & cones by blue man group-turns a part of battle field into water(sadly no lyrics)
my heart will go on by celine dion-heals party members in a bubble

[madammina]

Interesting. can you get me clips or lyrics?

And I hate to bother you, but now we need a concept video for X. If you need a name, I recomend surfing a baby named website on the "Male Greek" area.

edit: Here's a link if you want it. Search Baby Names - Search Results | BabyNames.com

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by madammina

Cause that's all I can think of right now. Here's the list.
Attack
Phantom’s Overture: A wave of water crashes in the direction she’s facing (water must be behind her)
Before he cheats: varies according to lyric (opponent must be standing in water)
Stronger: Verses causes water to whip where she’s pointing. Refrain creates pillars of water that push out. (Must be standing in water)

Defense
Sanctuary: wall of water absorbs attack

Special
Zelda’s Lullaby: Music box effect
Sharp flute and violin: Freezes water
What I’ve Done: a wave of water that she surfs on
Umbrella: Keeps water from hitting someone (like an umbrella)
Lord of the Ring singing: a pillar of water that she stands on.
New Shoes: Changes her Tia shoes.
Snow (hey oh): causes it to snow. The only one that does not require water.
Cleaning Wizard of Oz song: Cleans stuff
Hold On: No use yet, uses it as distraction and taunt in final battle.
How to Save a Life: Plays it when she is really depressed. (no one knows about her...)

Person
Move Along: Axel
Far Away: Sora
You are the Music in Me: Troy and Gabriella
Make your own kind of Music: Desmond
Everday: Her and Riku
Lost Highway: Ale?

Place
I Know You Know: Santa Barbra
Hips Don’t Lie: Tortuga
It Ends Tonight: Nobody world
Lost Theme: The Island
Home: Home (wherever she considers it to be. Usually her house)
Boston: Boston
New York State of Mind: NY City
Fame: Julliard

okay, more than 12, but I need more attack and defensive songs. And she has a bro named Brad who covers for her.

and agree with Xziled. Good entry.

Attacks
Divine Wind: Ziz creates a tornado out of the wind he collects while traveling out of thin air which ravages the battlefield stunning or destroying all enemies within his vicinity of ten meters.

Blades of Ziz: Breaks his polearm Gaia's Divine Blades into two individual blade-like polearms and goes into a beserk state of being (like Saix) for thirty seconds which obliterates anyone in tha battlefield

Strike Raid: Throws his polearm around like a boomerang hitting all off his enemies in the battlefield in a circular motion.

Defense
Gaia's Shield: Transforms into a green shining orb which takes all enemy attacks without damage and restores half of HP

Special
Alpha Gaia's Ragnorak: A stream of thunder is summoned to destroys all characters on the battlefield.
Omega Meteor Blast: Sends a storm of meteors to strike Ziz's foes on the battlefield
Beta's Final Gift: Upon closeness of dying, gives Max Potions to everyone upon death

[madammina]

Oh, I don't know if you guys want it but I gave Sora a pet raven (I sent him to Haunted Mansion, alright) which is currently named Munin. Do you want to put him in? When Sora's turned into a Vamp he can understand Munin.

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by madammina

Oh, I don't know if you guys want it but I gave Sora a pet raven (I sent him to Haunted Mansion, alright) which is currently named Munin. Do you want to put him in? When Sora's turned into a Vamp he can understand Munin.

Mhmmmmm, I'll tolerate it lol I love it if it's a sort of comic relief

[Xziled]

Originally Posted by madammina

Oh, I don't know if you guys want it but I gave Sora a pet raven (I sent him to Haunted Mansion, alright) which is currently named Munin. Do you want to put him in? When Sora's turned into a Vamp he can understand Munin.

when will sora turn into a vampire
numb-http://youtube.com/watch?v=d7VvkZY3VVk
rods and cones-http://youtube.com/watch?v=mGiX9qTrfnE
my heart will go on-http://youtube.com/watch?v=uO_vFuzPJvc
dont know how to put links still
and im still thinkin on the concept video for my character

[madammina]

Kind of. Munin is good, but insults everyone. When they arrive at the mansion SRK change shape. Sora turns more into a true vamp. Kairi becomes HM ghost. Riku becomes an albino werewolf (I couldn't resist alright). When Munin refers to Riku, he calls him a mongrel and an idiot.

Edit: Xziled: Sorry, this goes way into my own fanfic but

The trio goes to HM and in the final battle Riku kills a nobody named Nadaxu (anagram of Xanadu or heaven) with Souleater. Now if Riku does the finishing blow in a battle Souleater absorbs the abilities of the opponent. Nadaxu's ability was the ability to create an absence of light and by combining his powers with H___ he cursed the Mansion. Now Riku can 'curse' the trio into taking their slightly goth forms.

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by madammina

Kind of. Munin is good, but insults everyone. When they arrive at the mansion SRK change shape. Sora turns more into a true vamp. Kairi becomes HM ghost. Riku becomes an albino werewolf (I couldn't resist alright). When Munin refers to Riku, he calls him a mongrel and an idiot.

Edit: Xziled: Sorry, this goes way into my own fanfic but

The trio goes to HM and in the final battle Riku kills a nobody named Nadaxu (anagram of Xanadu or heaven) with Souleater. Now if Riku does the finishing blow in a battle Souleater absorbs the abilities of the opponent. Nadaxu's ability was the ability to create an absence of light and by combining his powers with H___ he cursed the Mansion. Now Riku can 'curse' the trio into taking their slightly goth forms.

Will these be part of the story?

[madammina]

Only if you want it to be. I've been working my stuff for about a year. But I can cut them out.

[Xziled]

im getting a little confused now

EDIT:so then after the final battle DRK & MGD gets sucked into the portal?

[madammina]

1) nice avatar
2) who's DRK and MGD?

[Azrael]

I wonder too, maybe Munin in our best interest should be cut out, I just want this fan fic to turn out good. Hey we don't need to do this if you don't want to, I'm dedicated as long as you two are.

Kelsie-Riku Coruscant
Kairi Endor
S,D,G,M-Ziz Tatoonine

agreed?