Star Wars plotting (madammina, Xziled and AntiSora92)

[madammina]

Okay, but for two things:
1) Behemoth sounds like a Lexaeus/Ansem mix
2) Riku could have escaped using a Corridor of Darkness (unless he's not using darkness here)

maybe I shouldn't be talking. I did just take a 1 dimensional HSM character and make her and Riku going steady and the ability to manipulate water.

[Xziled]

hm fair enough
X the commander of the spartan army accidentally stumbles upon a portal and inspects it whicj unknowing to him activates it and sucks him into the future. with his lack of knowledge for technology he starts a ruckus which leads him to be arrested by police in the 26th century. he is later released to a scientist who's studying space-time dilation and finds traces of it on X. since the scientist doesnt understand the spartans language he uses a machine to teach him the dominant language of the future also he uses the machine to teach him about technology. X the spartan later asks for a elemental gauntlet and a spear that also acts as a space-time tracker.
this is all i got on my character

EDIT i think my character could meet up with sora as he lands on tatooine

[Azrael]

Sora is on Tatoonine when he is attacked by the Sandpeople, he pulls out the Keyblade yet is weakened to the point (due to wormhole) so he can't use his magic abilities and is about to be killed. Mickey, Donald and Goofy along with a unknown warrior fight off the Sand people. The warrior introduces himself as ZiZ Nightingale, Knight of the Sky and wields a lance. He wears Arabesque-style clothing and has long, black hair (a mix of Demyx and Saix as well as having yellow glowing eyes. A white wing sprouts from his back and wishes to go back to his own world

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by madammina

Okay, but for two things:
1) Behemoth sounds like a Lexaeus/Ansem mix
2) Riku could have escaped using a Corridor of Darkness (unless he's not using darkness here)

maybe I shouldn't be talking. I did just take a 1 dimensional HSM character and make her and Riku going steady and the ability to manipulate water.

It's okay, I based Behemoth off Lexaeus and Ansem, and madammina, Riku at first is unable to use the Keyblade or the dark powers in Coruscant so he couldn't escape. Behemoth is a master of the darkness( the good darkness) and offers to teach Riku at the Jedi Temple..

[Azrael]

By the way Genosis is a desert planet where the Clone Wars start and the base of the CIS (Seperatist) and Kamino is mostly ocean where they produced the Clone armies

[Xziled]

so where does this leave mine and madamminas characters also i think we should just keep it to one character per person

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by Xziled

so where does this leave mine and madamminas characters also i think we should just keep it to one character per person

lol sorry....okay Behemoth and Leviathan go, and Ziz stays as a traveling partner of Sora, alright?

[Azrael]

So how are you and Madammina's characters going to meet and interact with the characters? My character Ziz Nightingale travels with Sora, mickey, along with Donald and Goofy sorry....ummm Ziz travels with Riku on Coruscant since X is with Sora, Mickey, Donald and goofy.

I think Madammina;s character should be with Kairi in Endor

[madammina]

ach. you're making me feel guilty. Here's another go at Kelsie as I would write.

Riku walked through the underwater world, following the Jedi master Obi Wan Kenobi. He watched the fish swim by, then did a double take. A girl was swimming underwater. Not just any girl, it was Kelsie. He tapped the glass, alerting the Droid and Obi Wan Kenobi to the girl outside. Kelsie heard the tap, and glanced over at Riku. SHe quickly swam to the edge and shouted "Riku! There you are! I had a dream the other night, about someone's hand being taking off and betrayal, alot of betrayal." But all that could be heard through the glass was, nothing. The trio inside the building watched her mouth move.

"Do you have a lock?" Riku asked the droid. The droid nodded and led the way to the lock. Riiku motioned for Kelsie to follow him. "can you fill the bottom with water? Just a few inches." The droid made the calculations on the computer and a few inches of water filled the chamber floor. Kelsie saw Riku's actions, and nodded. Obi Wan Kenobi looked in astonishment as the girl dissapeared before his very eyes. The water at the bottom of the lock now acted strangely. It began to rise as if pulled up by a mysterious force and something shaped the water into the shape of the girl previously outside in the sea. Obi Wan Kenobi realized then that she had stayed under for a long time, and infact seemed to be breathing underwater. Riku watched patiently as the form solidified and then took color. Kelsie Nielson appeared in the lock and wasn't wet.

I am your angel of music. Come to me angel of music reverberated in the lock. Water quickly swirled up to create a ball in Kelsie's palm. She looked over at the door. THe droid opened it for her.

"Do you have anyplace for me to put this?" She said. The droid motioned to a bucked. The melody and song reversed, so that the water flew out of her hand, and into the bucket.

"how did you get here?" Riku asked, but he grinned. He couldn't help it.

"I dreamt of this place, and it was a Tia Dolma dream, not a normal one. Everything" Riku cleared his throat.

"I should probably introduce you, this is Obi Wan Kenobi. He's a Jedi."

"May the force be with you." Obi Wan Kenobi said. Kelsie resisted the urge to say "and also with you."

"thank you."

"how did you get that tattoo?" Kenobi asked, referring to the small sun tattooed on her upper left arm. In truth it marked her as an elemental, but the less said about that, the better.

"Family tradition." Was the answer. A droid tapped her on the shoulder. In a blink of an eye, Kelsie punched the droid, not realizing it was a robot.

"The recent batched has just hatched." The droid said, ignoring the recent hit. Kelsie reflected on the first time someone had snuck up on her after returning to East High from Port Royal. It was Ryan, and she had broken his nose.

"Follow me. We will continue our tour." Riku followed along with Kelsie by his side.

"What did you see?" he whispered.

"A lot of betrayal." She looked around the halls. "I checked in with the restoration committee before I came. Cid's working on replicating your journey. It has something to do with fusing warp gummis right at black holes. But I'm a composer so I don't bother with it too much."

"Here we are." the Droid said, showing the clones. "Your Clone Army." Riku didn't say anything, he looked at the millions of clones in the room. "They are ready for duty." Kelsie muttered something under her breath that sounded like a Russian curse.

"An Army of CLONES!" she practically yelled at Obi Wan Kenobi.

That's as far as I got.


Edit: Kelsie is on good terms with the trio so anywhere is fine. Kairi and Kelsie kind of have a bond because Kelsie taught Kairi how to use a computer and shared a room with her too.

[Xziled]

if you read my post for my character then i guess while walking around coruscant hi spear goes off alerting him to a dimensional rip which leads him to an extremely weakened riku now its madamminas turn

[madammina]

Um, Kelsie can't show up in a desert place because she needs a body of water to travel to and from, so Kairi can find Kelsie at a glade or something.

[Xziled]

dont go too far into the story since technically we havent started yet

[madammina]

I just felt bad cause I felt you guys were doing a better job expaining your characters in world. This was just a test run to show how she would react. Consider it a concept video.

[Xziled]

ah i see so as i see it right now:
Ziz nightingale-sora and co.
X-riku
kelsie-???
you sure you want her name to be that

[madammina]

I kind of have to. She's based off of HSM's Kelsie Nielson. Her title is Tia Dolma Kelsie. I could have her take up an alias there though.

Oh, and I'm probably going to need your help. I know what about 12 songs do. I need a song that would defend her. Right now all I can think of is Sanctuary but that would kind of break the 4th wall and I don't want that.

And I'm fine with a Kelsie/Kairi team.