Kingdom Hearts: A new Journey

[Divine Light]

Chapter One: The Nightmare(also if some of you have trouble with the wordwallish format I am too lazy to change so read or dont lol)

Riku tossed and turned in his bed as his mind was racked by a nightmare."Nothing is....Eternal". he rolled over as the voice of the leader of Organization XIII bounced around inside his head. Riku...are you sure your not jeleous of Sora?. swet emerged on Riku's forehead and he gritted his teeth. Riku was standing on the beach of destiny islands looking out at the peaceful water that was swaying back and forth in the island breeze.he inhaled taking it in."ah it's nice to be back he said to himself.suddenly the blue sky darkened as if someone had spilled a glass of water across a table and it was rapidly spreading. darkness spread throughout the sky untill it was as if black blanket had been placed over the sky obscuring everything."oh no, it's happening agan cried Riku running to the water's edge."Yes Riku I have returned". his eye's narrowed remebering that awful voice. as if he materealized out of thin air Xehanort's Heartless appeared in front of him a wide grin across his face and the dark guardianing floating behind him."Ansem",breathed Riku."suprised to see me"? asked Ansem."how could you be here!? screamed Riku screamed."I killed you,your dead!."only dead in physical form Riku Ansem explained."but I can come to you within your sleep",even now I am walk inside of the dark realm searching for the door that will lead me out".Riku swung his arm angrilly summong the way to dawn."I want nothing to do with you he shouted.Ansem lifted a his hand in a seemly harmless fashion.before Riku could grasp what was happening the guardian had lunged forward wrapping it's sharp claw's around Riku's neck and lifting him high into the air."now Riku,give me your body".a darkness flowed from the guadrian and Ansem that began to envelop Riku."no Riku gasped as the darkness began at his feet and worked it's way up."my heart belong's to me". Riku spasmed in his bed knocking over various thing's. a voice that sounded female faintly entered his ear's."Riku,honey are you alright?. within the nightmare the darkness had reached Riku's waist and from there down had gone numb."Ungh.....Ughhhhh!Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh! Riku screamed.,Honey what's wrong the female voice asked the tone signified the person was very worried.the sound of foot step's running up the stares could be heard.

"Riku give me your heart Ansem cried.

"I wont give up Riku screamed as the darkness reached his chest.

"somone help me screamed Riku. his mother burst into his room and ran over to the spasming Riku."nghuuuuuuuuuuuuu!"."Riku honey what's wrong his mother screamed as tear's ran down her face.Riku rolled over the side of his bed and put hand over his mouth. seconds later blood poured through the space inbetween his finger's.his mouther screamed out with horror. Riku's body fell off his bed and hit his floor with a thud. in the nightmare the darkness was halfway up his face covering his mouth and nose."now your body is nearly mine Ansem cried a sadistic look in his crazed eyes. suddenly a figure in a white cloak that resembled Organization XIII clothes only completely white with OOL on the back. the voice that came from the hood said with a firm voice."began you Dark Demon and do not return to this boy". Ansem released Riku in horor and stepped back."no! your from the- before Ansem could finish the being held their hand up and a white orb enveloped Ansem. the being then raised their other hand that was wide open then made it a fist. the orb exploded into a burst of light. there was a faint pained howell then it was gone. the being turned to the nearly dead a Riku and said."now be healed my troubled one"the being put their hand on Riku's chest and Light spread all over his body. the being then uttered something that which Riku didn't understand." Lethra,Amoko,Oonerek,Sythrix,Light. Light exploded through Riku's nightmare enveloping everything. Riku's eyes opened slowly. he was lying in an unfamilar bed in a white room. there was a woman in an outift that looked like a nurse's uniform."where am I asked Riku with a hoarse voice. the nurse looked shocked that he was awake."your in the hospital the nurse told him."also you have two people in the waiting room the nurse continued."who're they? Riku asked." they said that their name's were Sora and Kairi.Riku's eye's widened and life returned to his eyes."send them in Riku told the nurse trying to sit up. the nurse nodded leaving the room.Riku glanced outside as a bird fly by his window and the sun came over horizon. he then turned and saw the clock said 6:00. the sun was just rising it seemed. at the sound of footstep's he turned to see his two bestfriends walk in the room. they both looked extreamly happy he was okay."Riku Sora said his sky blue eye's shining."your alright!". Sora walked over next to Riku's bed followed by Kairi."we were so worried Kairi said."dont worry guy's,i'm fine Riku said trying to put on a smile despite how shaken he was. Kairi didn't buy it but didn't pursue it."what happened to you? asked Sora wanting to know what had gotten his friend in this state."I dont want to talk about it Riku said not meeting ether of their eyes. he didn't want them to think Ansem had control of him again. he never wanted that to happen again and didn't want to hurt them."oh Sora sighed still concerned for his friend. Jimminy Cricket jumped up on Sora's shoulder eyeing Riku with as much concern as Sora and Kairi."are you sure your alright? he asked."yeah I told you guy's i'm fine Riku answered. Sora looked at Riku not believing it for one minute.just what had gotten his friend in this state."listen guy's Riku said,I am gonna get some sleep or atleast try to". but it was nice of you guy's to vist". " alright Kairi said as her ans Sora stepped towards the door."but if you need anythng just call."I think that's what the nurses are for Riku replied.Kairi looked kinda hurt at the comment.Sora glared at Riku."Let's go Kairi i'm sure he will be fine Sora said."ill think ill stay with Riku Jimminy said jumping off Sora's shouler and landing on Riku's bed softly." I think he could use the company".okay Sora said,he then took one last glance at Riku before him and Kairi left the two alone.Riku felt terrbile for what he had said to Kairi and now Sora was mad at him.what is happening to me? Riku thought.


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end of the first chapter I hope you enjoyed.

[bizness86]

This truly is kind of hard to read dude, even to someone who has some actual interest in reading it. Though you said you were 'too lazy' to edit, I'd suggest using better paragraph format and cleaning up a few errors. This would make this a lot easier on the eyes.

And to show that I did at least start to read:
Riku's had a dream about his final battle with Xemnas; then he's somehow on the beach when 'Ansem' re-emerged. I couldn't help be stop afterwards.

I wish you good luck in continuing this fic.

EDIT:

Originally Posted by Divine Light

Chapter One: The Nightmare(also if some of you have trouble with the wordwallish format I am too lazy to change so read or dont lol)

Riku tossed and turned in his bed as his mind was racked by a nightmare.

Nothing is...Eternal...

He rolled over as the voice of the leader of Organization XIII bounced around inside his head.

Riku...are you sure your not jealous of Sora?

Sweat emerged on Riku's forehead and he gritted his teeth.

Riku was standing on the beach of destiny islands looking out at the peaceful water that was swaying back and forth in the island breeze. He inhaled taking it in.

"Ah it's nice to be back," he said to himself. Suddenly the blue sky darkened as if someone had spilled a glass of water across a table and it was rapidly spreading. Darkness spread throughout the sky untill it was as if black blanket had been placed over the sky obscuring everything.

"Oh no, it's happening again!" cried Riku running to the water's edge.

Yes Riku I have returned...

His (Riku's) eyes narrowed remembering that awful voice. As if he materealized out of thin air, Xehanort's Heartless appeared in front of him a wide grin across his face and the dark Guardian floating behind him.

"Ansem..." breathed Riku.

"Surprised to see me?" asked Ansem.

"How could you be here!?" screamed Riku screamed.

"I killed you! You're dead!"

"Only dead in physical form," Riku-Ansem explained, "but I can come to you within your sleep. Even now I am walk inside of the dark realm searching for the door that will lead me out."

Riku swung his arm angrily summoning the way to dawn.

"I want nothing to do with you!" he shouted. Ansem lifted his hand in a seemly harmless fashion. Before Riku could grasp what was happening, the Guardian had lunged forward wrapping its sharp claws around Riku's neck and (had lifted) him high into the air.

"Now Riku, give me your body!" A darkness flowed from the Guardian and Ansem that began to envelop Riku.

"No!" Riku gasped as the darkness began at his feet and worked its way up, "my heart belongs to me!" Riku spasmed in his bed knocking over various things. A voice that sounded female faintly entered his ears.

"Riku, honey are you alright?"

Within the nightmare, the darkness had reached Riku's waist and from there down had gone numb.

"Ungh.....Ughhhhh!Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh!" Riku screamed.

"Honey, what's wrong?" the female voice asked the tone signified the person was very worried. The sound of footsteps running up the stairs could be heard.

"Riku give me your heart!" Ansem cried.

"I wont give up!" Riku screamed as the darkness reached his chest.

"Someone, help me!" screamed Riku. His mother bursted into his room, and ran over to the spasming Riku

"Nghuuuuuuuuuuuuu!"

"Riku! Honey, what's wrong?!" his mother screamed as tears ran down her face. Riku rolled over the side of his bed and put hand over his mouth. Seconds later blood poured through the space inbetween his fingers. His mother screamed out with horror. Riku's body fell off his bed and hit his floor with a thud. In the nightmare, the darkness was halfway up his face covering his mouth and nose.

"Now your body is nearly mine!" Ansem cried a sadistic look in his crazed eyes. Suddenly, a figure in a white cloak that resembled Organization XIII clothes only completely white with OOL on the back.

The voice that came from the hood said with a firm voice, "Be gone you dark demon, and do not return to this boy." Ansem released Riku in horor and stepped back.

"No! Your from the--" before Ansem could finish, the being held its hand up, and a white orb enveloped Ansem. The being then raised its other hand that was wide open then made it a fist. The orb exploded into a burst of light. There was a faint pained howell (sp?), then it was gone.

The being turned to the nearly dead a Riku and said, "now be healed, my troubled one." The being put their hand on Riku's chest, and Light spread all over his body.

The being then uttered something which Riku didn't understand, "Lethra, Amoko, Oonerek, Sythrix, Light." Light exploded through Riku's nightmare, enveloping everything. Riku's eyes opened slowly. He was lying in an unfamilar bed in a white room. There was a woman in an outift that looked like a nurse's uniform.

"Where am I?" asked Riku with a hoarse voice. The nurse looked shocked that he was awake.

"Your in the hospital." the nurse told him. "Also you have two people in the waiting room."

"Who're they?" Riku asked.

"They said that their names were Sora and Kairi."

Riku's eyes widened, filled with renewed life. "Send them in." Riku told the nurse while trying to sit up. The nurse nodded and left the room. Riku glanced outside as a bird fly by his window and the sun came over horizon. He then turned and saw the clock said 6:00. The sun was just rising it seemed. At the sound of footsteps, he turned to see his two best friends walk in the room. They both looked extremely happy he was okay.

"Riku!" Sora said, his sky blue eye's shining, "You're alright!". Sora walked over next to Riku's bed, followed by Kairi.

"We were so worried!" Kairi said.

"Don't worry guys; I'm fine..." Riku said, trying to put on a smile despite how shaken he was. Kairi didn't buy it, but didn't pursue it.

"What happened to you?" asked Sora, wanting to know what had gotten his friend in this state.

"I don't want to talk about it..." Riku said not meeting ether of their eyes. He didn't want them to think Ansem had control of him again. He never wanted that to happen again, and didn't want to hurt them.

"Oh," Sora sighed still concerned for his friend. Jiminy Cricket jumped up on Sora's shoulder, eyeing Riku with as much concern as Sora and Kairi.

"Are you sure you're alright?" he asked.

"Yeah. I told you guys, I'm fine," Riku answered. Sora looked at Riku, not believing it for one minute. Just what had gotten his friend in this state.

"Listen guys," Riku said, "I am gonna get some sleep, or at least try to. It was nice of you guys to visit."

"Alright," Kairi said as her and Sora stepped towards the door, "but if you need anything just call."

"I think that's what the nurses are for." Riku replied. Kairi looked kinda hurt at the comment.

Sora glared at Riku,"Let's go Kairi. I'm sure he will be fine," Sora said.

"I think I'll stay with Riku," Jiminy said, jumping off Sora's shoulder and landing on Riku's bed softly.

"I think he could use the company."

"Okay." Sora said. He then took one last glance at Riku before he and Kairi left the two alone. Riku felt terrible for what he had said to Kairi, and now Sora was mad at him.

What is happening to me? Riku thought.


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end of the first chapter I hope you enjoyed.

I did minimal editing to your chapter as requested. Seperation of the paragraphs, capitalization of the words, and the correction of most misspelled words were done. I highly suggest you look over what has been edited.