dive into darkness.

sorry i havent finished posting the chapter yet. if u want the rest im adding it on to the end now.

[King Of The Dark]

awesome! Really can't wait to read more.

woooohhoooooooo the forums are back up im busy with chores today cause were selling the house so we gotta make it look good. ill post a new chapter tomorrow.

i think ull all be pleased with the chapters ive written while the forums weredown they're really good and im using a whole lot more detail in them(chapters 15, 16, 17, 18, 19)

if you have any questions or suggestions pm me thx

yo king of the dark ur fan fic still rules man good job

[King Of The Dark]

Haven't checked this place out in a while, but anyway can't wait for the new chapter and thx again for the compliments. The next few chapters sound awesome. I really can't wait ^_^!

hey guys sorry its been so long since my last chapter, thx for bearing with me. this is just a short one where I introduce Sora into my story.


Sora stood on a beach. The wind blew gently in his face and sand sifted trough his toes, making them feel raw and gritty. He took the fishbone from his mouth and ran to the translucent emerald-blue water. It felt cool against his skin as the sun bead down on his back. There were any fishs swimming under the water as if there were no cares or worries. As Sora came up from the water he saw Kairi watching him and giggling while Tidus, Wakka, and Selphie were playing catch on the beach with Riku.
Kairi waved Sora over to her an he began to paddle in. He had not realized actually how far he had gone out. When Sora had reached the beach and the water was up to his ankles he stoped and rested for a second. He began to run to were Kairi was. All of the sudden he began to fall backwards into the water as if the one foot of water had just turned into a bottomless pit of ocean.
Slower and slower he sank, strugling the whole way down. He grabbed at his throat as if ot of air but found that he could breath normally. The light faded away peice by peice until there was nothing left but darkness.

Sora emerged from his dreaded slumber panting and sweating. He looked around to find that Goofy and Donald were still asleep. He sarted to take a short walk around waiting for the first rays of the sun to peek out of the horizon.

[DaRkNeSs2LiGhT]

this rox my sox!~ write more!

lol heres the next 1
I apologize in advance for these being short chapters but theyll get longer again after this 1

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CHAPTER 7

Riku stood against the wall surprised and confused. Sweat and thought lined his furrowed brow. Could Sora truly be the keyblade master, he thought? Riku kicked at a small rock and watched it bouce off the dark alley wall.
Riku looked around but saw no one. Where had the cloaked unknown gone? He drew his Soul Eater, for he had an uneasy felling in his gut. Riku spun around as he heard footsteps coming toward him from around the corner. Was it the unknown... was it a heartless? Those thoughts would be awnsered soon enough. The footsteps grew louder now, Riku began to shake, his breath grew heavy as each thump echoed near him, sending a shiver down his spine. A shadow formed around the corner, growing in size as the object moved closer to Riku.
Just then the figure came around the corner. Riku was still unable to determine if it was friend or foe in the dark night. Riku couldn't take the chance of it coming closer if it was an enemy. Riku hurled his sword at the figure, but his efforts were futile. The keyblade struck into the wall beside the figure. It looked puzzled. It pulled out the sword and continued toward Riku.
Riku was terrified as the figure came ever closer to him. His feet were frozen to the floor, and sweat fell down his forehead. Riku took a breath only to find out that he had been holding it the whole time. He was now without a weapon and frozen with fear. He feared this mistake would cost him his life.

[DaRkNeSs2LiGhT]

ooo, awesome! ^^;

[King Of The Dark]

I liked your chapter alot, keep writing, im wondering what it is that's coming towards him.

lol thx ill post the next 2 chapters tomorrow


SPOILER ALERT!!!SPOILER ALERT!!!-the next two chapters have cool fight scenes in them...but u didnt hear it from me lololololololol

[DaRkNeSs2LiGhT]

HAHAHAHA!!! *its peanut butter jelly time. peanut butter jelly time. and they spill the spoils!!* LOL~ sry...little hyper...^^;

its ok just dont forget to take your riddaline tomorrow lolol

[King Of The Dark]

lol, too hyper. Next chapter gonna be awesome! Next 2 chapters that is.

[Super Sonic]

Well I promised I'd read it and I did and it was crap


Joking


No it was really good,I like the way it was written too,keep it up

lol thx and it wasnt a hint to read it but thx anyway.

thank you person who put 1 for being honest. that tells me i can do better somehow.