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Old February 16th, 2008, 12:11 AM   #1
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(aka: What Four Swords SHOULD have been like!)

Prologue: Dark Designs.

In a secluded section of time a space, there is a void. A space shrouded in darkness so thick, anyone or anything that was unfortunate enough to find its way into this god forsaken place would have had any life squelched from them in a matter of hours, if they didn’t lose their mind first. It is a place where no light can illuminate it, and almost lo life could be born from it. The only being that was unfortunate enough to be born in such a hellish place realm had come and gone many times, never returning by choice, but always leaving in search of something more, to spread his brand of darkness into other realms, to strike at the light with all his fury, leaving his void as empty and as lifeless as it was prior to his birth, until a flash of darkness erupts from the nothingness, replicating the creature’s birth so many millennia ago, signaling his unwilling return to his own private hell hole of a realm.

“DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT!!” the being cursed to himself, having been freed from his material form that he had used in the other world, returning him to his original state as a shapeless energy being. He surges violently, emanating a dark aura as his form splurged about. “NOT AGAIN!!”

He grunts and yells for a while longer, cursing into the void with all of his might. After a while, he starts to calm down, his form becoming more and more stable, settling on a sphere like shape. However, he still angers, and begins to drone on.

“It always happens!” He grunts angrily, going over his situation in thought. “Every time I get close to claiming the power of the Triforce for my own, a gung ho little snot in a green tunic shows up and thinks they can be a hero!”

The dark aura surrounding the shapeless energy being intensified for a moment and four rings made of dark energy appeared, encircling the being, looking almost like windows.

“First was that little nothing of a blacksmith’s grandson. Lucky little punk.”

As soon as his words had been spoken, the window in front of him lit up, showing an image of a young man of fifteen living in the outskirts of a great kingdom, making a living as a blacksmith in his grandfather's old cabin workshop. He was clad in a green sleeveless tunic and was wearing a brown under shirt. He had a brown hair adorned by a green cap with a yellow brim.

“Then when I tried going back into the distant past, it was some stupid orphan. Thinks he’s so tough, traveling through time like that…”

The window to the right of the first one now sparked to life, showing a young boy of fourteen, reclining against his slumbering faithful steed in front of a burning fire, settling down for the night from a long day’s journey. He blew into a sweet potato shaped instrument, fingering the holes to create a melodious, enchanting sound that rings out into the wilderness, soothing his tired soul. He wore a green tunic with sleeves and a green cap as well.

“My third time out seemed to have gone well at first, but those Hylian gods had to screw with me and flood the entire world and scatter the Triforce pieces! By the time I was able to get them, another little shit from some back water island shows up! He was nothing, but then his royal pain in the butt intervened and ruined everything, giving that kid his chance!”

Again, the window to the right sparked up, showing an image from someplace else. This time it showed a ship sailing on an ocean, spanning as far as the eye could reach. On the furthermost point on the ship was a thirteen year old boy, watching as the ship sped along the ocean to parts unknown. Laughing with a big smile across face, eyes gleaming with excitement and anticipation on what lies ahead. He wore a green sleeveless tunic with a light green undershirt. He had a black belt with a white shell buckle strapped around his waist and a green cap flapping in the breeze on top of his blond hair. To protect from the chilling breeze, he wore white leggings.

“And last time, I even tried going to an alternate timeline, but those elders banished me to the twilight realm! I’ll admit, that was actually a plus, getting that idiot, Zant to do my dirty work. But almost as soon as I return back to the real world, who should show up but another one these idiots!”

Finally, the last window shows an image of a young man of seventeen, walking along a path towards his home, his village from a tireless journey, accompanied by a his childhood friend, who was riding side saddle on top of their beloved horse. Behind them, was a horse drawn wagon, filled with children who had been away from home for what seemed like forever. All of them had had a grand adventure, and were ready to return home. He wore a short sleeved green tunic with a long sleeved white undershirt. He had gauntlets on each arms and long white leggings covering his lower half. He had a long green cap which adorned his dirty blond hair like a crown.

He looked upon these images for a while, thinking about how in all of existence that four different warriors, all of them not even old enough to drink with at a bar, could respectively bring about his defeat four different times.

“Unbelievable.” He says to himself, trying to plan his next move, dismissing the window, them evaporating into darkness. He grew tired of being handed defeat after defeat by boys who weren’t even a fraction of his true age. “Every time I try to conquer that back water realm, somebody shows up to act against me! It’s almost as if—“

But he stops in abrupt silence. If he had a face, it would have an expression of amazed realization. Then he started to chuckle, which grew into an evil, sinister laughter as a plan unfolds in his innermost workings.

“Of course!” He chided to himself with a tone of malicious intent and evil desires, abruptly stopping his laughter. “The empirical rule! It was right in front of me this whole time! It's So obvious!”

He started glowing even darker than before, preparing to leave this desolate world to implement his latest scheme.

“Yes, a ‘proactive’ approach, as it were…” He drawled to himself happily. “This will work quite well.. But first, I need to do a little Recruiting…”

And once again, his laughter rings out, as explodes, launching his energy form in all directions, exiting his dark realm, eager to start what he believes is his plan of final conquest.

Prologue: Dark Designs: End
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So here it is, the first part of my Legend of Zelda fan fic! I hope I made it obvious as to who the villain is. It's also fairly obvious who the links are.

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Old February 16th, 2008, 12:29 AM   #2
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My, my! I'm the first post! WHOOOT!

Okay, on topic, now. That prologue was great. The darkness being is kind of arrogant, and you really show that good, Matt. I like it. More please? ^.^
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Old February 16th, 2008, 12:32 AM   #3
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There'll be more. No doubt about it.
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Old February 16th, 2008, 01:09 AM   #4
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Well, I'm not a fan of LoZ series, but I liked the prologue.
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Old February 16th, 2008, 01:45 AM   #5
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I thought it was a wonderful start of what's yet to come on down the line in the many chapters that have yet to come out.
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Old February 16th, 2008, 01:49 AM   #6
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Thank you very much! I'm glad that I have much more experience now then when I started BoD.

I'll be trying to trade off my updates, meaning that I'll update in a battern. since I started LoL, I'll update BoD next. But it'll also depend on what I feel like.
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Old February 16th, 2008, 05:20 AM   #7
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Good start, allstar. i like how you're depicting Gannondorf (or just Gannon, it seems to verry). i also like how you have connected the story together, something (to the best of my knowledge) that Nintendo has never done (with exceptions of OoT and Wind waker and the Minish cap and two Four Swords ones).

by four swords do you mean Four Swords Adventures for the Gamecube or the origional Four swords for the GBA?

anyway good job, and i hope to see more soon.

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Old February 16th, 2008, 05:27 AM   #8
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Either of them. This story will include multiple links with out the sword clonint the main character and technicoler outfits.
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Old February 16th, 2008, 05:40 AM   #9
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Great stuff allstar i really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next part ^^
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Old February 16th, 2008, 02:49 PM   #10
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yo. i liked that, liked that a lot. good job matt.
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Old February 23rd, 2008, 03:34 AM   #11
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I have a copy of 4 swords on my purple lunch box I call a Game Cube. It was fun. Well I hope to read more.
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Old February 23rd, 2008, 04:08 AM   #12
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Sorry, I didn't have time to check on your story, but I promsie I'll read it next time. Today's a big war. That is if you play RPG Inferno.
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Old March 18th, 2008, 01:17 AM   #13
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Not an actual update guys. Just popping in to say that I'll have the next chapter done soon(ish) I'm trying to get it done in the next week/two weeks.
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Old March 18th, 2008, 01:27 AM   #14
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oooh damn i was sure it was an update cz you said you were workin on it.
no worries man, take your time. we know its gonna be great. :thumbup:
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Old March 18th, 2008, 10:51 AM   #15
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It should be, after all its from the fanfic competition organiser!
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