The Exiled

[NobodyImportant]

I'm too lazy to clean out all the crap in the keyblader fight. XD

And comic relief, huh? Heh.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

I'm too lazy to clean out all the crap in the keyblader fight. XD

And comic relief, huh? Heh.

>< i still don't remember what it was...


*Final Salix I Chapter Update*
in the final chapter of Salix I everything
is explained as to what happened with
Xatsuin, Zaverxi, Rextanse, Zixan and DrBanxon.
*prepare to laugh XD*
Also Zixan will visit a member of the Exiled Order
to speak with
and the story of Salix I will come to a close.
i hope everyone enjoys the last chapter ^^
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...rm-key-12.html

due to the fact that it's gonna take up a lot of space i'll post the others tomorrow here's the first new person that will be an ally of Salix's. oh and also if any element sort of moves into some one elses element don't worry none of these characters mentioned today or tomorrow have much to do with the Exiled Order so there's no reason to worry.




Exiled Order #: None (Technically not a member)
Alliance: Exiled Order/Salix’s secret internal alliance.
Original Name: Riot
Exiled Name: Xirot
Dominant Hand:
Age: 18
Height: 5’11”
Weight: 124Lb
Eyes: Green
Hair: The back of his black hair is combed backwards leaving the tips of the front to hang down curving in towards his face.
Sex: Male
Alias: The Concealed Shell
Weapon: Armor (no connection to the knights of BBS)
Clothing: Deep sky-blue cloak and the mask of drama revealing half a smiling face and half a sad face.
Hometown: Has yet to be revealed. (The name is currently only secretly known only to Xirot and Salix.)
Location: Salix’s Stronghold/The New Exiled Home World
Transportation Method: The Corridors of Darkness
Theme Song: Moon Dance
Artist: Nightwish
Fighting style: Xirot normally dislikes getting into close range confrontation. This is because not only are his attacks for the majority long range, he is also not much of a hand-to-hand combatant. The only time in which he would ever use hand-to-hand combat would be if he was wearing his armor as it protects himself from injury and allows him to be far more proficient in hand-to-hand combat. However his technique is so powerful more specifically at far range combat and has grown so used to mainly dodging the enemy’s attacks that he sometimes refuses to block the enemies attacks.
Attacks: N/A
Abilities: N/A
Quote: “Judgment is passed upon those who have broken the respected laws. Those who break them must be judged. Whether guilty or innocent, the final verdict is always the truth.”
Personality: A polite individual, Xirot shows his respect for those who are above him. Though he clearly has not yet developed a warrior’s attitude he could not be exactly called a naïve person. He is fully aware of what Salix has done and although may feel that his ignorance and rejection of the created Nobodies is wrong he feels that it is not his business to make judgment due to the fact that he has very little connections to it. Judgment is a key item in his attitude/personality.
Nobody Name: Twisted Replicas
Nobody Description: A Nobody that wields a small fan in each hand. Its arms stretch and can close up the fans for physical hits. Though mainly it just gathers up the wind beneath its fans and fires it across like a shockwave. It is shaped like a child though it’s hands and feet are more like claws. Its mouth is sown shut by visible thread and on each fan and on the upper left side of its chest is the symbol for twilight.
Element: Unit Disruption
Element Description: A form of shockwave. Unit Disruption is a shockwave that can disrupt nearly anything it comes into contact with. There are eight levels to how Unit Disruption can be used. The lowest level of Unit Disruption would allow it to create an indent in weaker objects of solidity such as wood or glass. The highest level of Unit Disruption would allow for it to literally tear an object of strong solidity to microscopic shreds. There are objects that the element of Unit Disruption cannot destroy or indent. For instance Unit Disruption would not be able to instantly shred a being existent or not existent to pieces even at the highest level of Unit Disruption’s power. This ability however requires high levels of concentration for most of the higher levels of Unit Disruption. It also acts like a shotgun would in producing large amounts of recoil that must be contained and stopped by the user. If not it can seriously injure the user in return. Thus proper techniques and positions/stances must be made and held in order to insure that zero recoil damage is taken. The lower levels of this element do move at slower rates then the mid and higher levels and act more as if the user is firing a cannon. An element like this cannot be consecutively fired off like a machinegun but rather more like a cannon or a shotgun. Firing quickly but takes time to reload and fire again while positioning and taking the correct stance to insure that zero recoil damage is received.



The 8 Levels of the Element Unit Disruption
1. Creates indents in minor objects (EX: wood and glass.)

2. Creates indents in a good portion of objects (EX: stone and most forms of metal.)

3. Creates indents in almost anything (EX: most forms of higher materials such as diamond and even the hardest layers of extremely durable metals.)

4. Creates specified holes in the before stated materials via high levels of concentration in objects.

5. Creates specified indents during movements before using Unit Disruption via high levels of concentration.

6. Creates specified holes/indents in objects at a much faster rate nearly instantaneously via high levels of concentration.

7. Creates a specified area around the fists using Unit Disruption in order to make a sort of boxing glove that increases the power of the blow by harnessing the power of Unit Disruption and the user’s own strength. This however requires high levels of concentration.

8. Literally shreds almost any object of solidity as specified in the first three levels into microscopic shreds. (This excludes people and some weapons.)



The first five levels of Unit Disruption are entirely usable without his armor with little but the obvious recoil damage which can easily be averted. However the sixth stage due to the fact that Unit Disruption moves at such a high rate of speed is entirely capable of being used without his armor as self-protection. But over long periods of time while using this technique without the use of his armor injuries can start to be inflicted due to the high speeds of Unit Disruption being created so close to his own body. The seventh stage because it stays in contact with Xirot’s body for long periods of time is not possible to be used without the armor to reject the power of Unit Disruption. The eighth stage of Unit Disruption is very dangerous due to the power it inflicts on it’s target. Without the use of the armor during this level of the technique it would easily destroy whatever part of Xirot’s body came into contact with it’s creation.
Background: A bit of a man of mystery Xirot keeps himself hidden constantly behind his hooded cloak. Even when respectfully removing his hood he always keeps on his mask that bears a smile on one half and a sad face on the other. The only two reasons he wears this that are known are the facts that he believes so heavily in judgment and impartiality and also the fact that he does not want anyone to see his face. Though for what reasons he has not yet revealed. Xirot’s past is shrouded in mystery only himself and Salix are aware of it. However his feelings towards judgment and impartiality may mean that he has had a run in with unfair treatment or the emotions of hatred and anger. Although clearly Salix was not forced to become a traitor, Xirot considers him to be a man who has cleared his name and is innocent. When Xirot was first turned into a Nobody he was found by Salix. Seeing as how Xirot’s original name was forgotten he proclaimed the first word that popped into his mind to be his new name Riot. Why this word popped into his head is unknown but it does have a connection to his past. Upon creating his new name and receiving his Exiled name of Xirot, he began to work along side Salix as an Exiled Order member. For some reason Xirot seems to very much enjoy working with Salix and like Xishn is a very loyal follower though if Salix were attempt a betrayal again it is clear that Xirot would disagree. However whether or not he would join is unknown. Since learning about the created Nobodies he has been arguing with him as to whether or not they are innocent or guilty as well. In his mind though not physically apparent, he is still in turmoil about whether they and their actions are truly punishable and wrong.

[NobodyImportant]

Hahaha. I see what you meant by comical relief. XD

Man...that Lonex. I hope Zaverxi can be the one to kill him!!

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Hahaha. I see what you meant by comical relief. XD

Man...that Lonex. I hope Zaverxi can be the one to kill him!!

yeah i'm glad you enjoyed it. as for Lonex he's a bit of an insanity case can't hate him for that =D and also Lonex is a traitor along with Xishn and Salix. so Zaverxi wouldn't be able to or would he? ^^;;;

[The Lionheart]

did anyone see my last post =[
anyways, i changed the site up a little. instead of an exiled 2 tab, there is now and "exiled related characters" tab, to where i will post all exiled 2 and side-story characters.
with that said, drB, is there any characters from The Calx that you would like to post? i thought that i would ask, considering i am posting salix characters on the site.
and DT, i added Xirot's page, but jw, did you mean to leave his dominant hand blank? and also, i really hope i can get around to reading salix, with school and end of semester coming up, i doubt i will have time, but i've been looking for a good read, and think that Salix I will surpass my expectations.
And in a side note, i started writing charxai's story again, i think i have triumphed over the stubborness of my writer's block, and will also start to write Charxai's "after becoming a nobody" story (outlined in my last post) in a short while.

lol i had more to say than usual, but aside from contemplating making pages for the keybladers/reverse order/mystic order, there is really nothing else to say.

edit: and did anyone see this? i might have missed it, but ojike drew it, and i thought it was AMAZING!!!

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

yeah i'm glad you enjoyed it. as for Lonex he's a bit of an insanity case can't hate him for that =D and also Lonex is a traitor along with Xishn and Salix. so Zaverxi wouldn't be able to or would he? ^^;;;

Pfft. Details! *eyeshift* It's not like Zaverxi has any loyalty to the group of traitors. He hates everyone. He just respects Daxic.


Or maybe Zaverxi just wants to kill him for having longer hair than him. I think it's longer, anyway?

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

did anyone see my last post =[
anyways, i changed the site up a little. instead of an exiled 2 tab, there is now and "exiled related characters" tab, to where i will post all exiled 2 and side-story characters.
with that said, drB, is there any characters from The Calx that you would like to post? i thought that i would ask, considering i am posting salix characters on the site.
and DT, i added Xirot's page, but jw, did you mean to leave his dominant hand blank? and also, i really hope i can get around to reading salix, with school and end of semester coming up, i doubt i will have time, but i've been looking for a good read, and think that Salix I will surpass my expectations.
And in a side note, i started writing charxai's story again, i think i have triumphed over the stubborness of my writer's block, and will also start to write Charxai's "after becoming a nobody" story (outlined in my last post) in a short while.

lol i had more to say than usual, but aside from contemplating making pages for the keybladers/reverse order/mystic order, there is really nothing else to say.

edit: and did anyone see this? i might have missed it, but ojike drew it, and i thought it was AMAZING!!!

i missed one. yes Xirot is a right handed person. i hope you enjoy Salix I then when you get the time. oh and also i started writing the chapters with Charxai in it for Salix II i hope it is to satisfaction. that is in the next two weeks when i post it. ^^ and yeah i remember that image it actually wasn't from too far back. oh and also i'm gonna post up the profiles for the seven enemies of Salix II as well i'll make sure they're completed for the site. =D

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Pfft. Details! *eyeshift* It's not like Zaverxi has any loyalty to the group of traitors. He hates everyone. He just respects Daxic.


Or maybe Zaverxi just wants to kill him for having longer hair than him. I think it's longer, anyway?

well actually you see i already talked with Zixan a while ago and had him be the one to kill Lonex. ^^;;;

[DrBanxon]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

did anyone see my last post =[
anyways, i changed the site up a little. instead of an exiled 2 tab, there is now and "exiled related characters" tab, to where i will post all exiled 2 and side-story characters.
with that said, drB, is there any characters from The Calx that you would like to post? i thought that i would ask, considering i am posting salix characters on the site.

:-?
Hmm, sounds liek a gud idea to me 8D
Only thing is, there'll be a lot of spoilers in the bios....
I'll see what I can do :D

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

well actually you see i already talked with Zixan a while ago and had him be the one to kill Lonex. ^^;;;

Foiled again. Bah. *shakes a fist at MM* XD

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

edit: and did anyone see this? i might have missed it, but ojike drew it, and i thought it was AMAZING!!!

Actually AP drew that and Ojike just colored it via photoshop.


AND DT are YOU ARE MOD NOW?

cause your name is silver D:

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Foiled again. Bah. *shakes a fist at MM* XD

lol And you would have gotten away with it too, if not for those meddling kids and their dumb dog. xD

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Actually AP drew that and Ojike just colored it via photoshop.


AND DT are YOU ARE MOD NOW?

cause your name is silver D:

oh really. i forgot. sorry AP. i don't know i checked the listings and no it doesn't list me as a mod. besides i think they'd tell me that. lol i'm gonna find out though ^^

AO- thanks for adding my own little section for Salix II characters =D i feel very special now. ^_^

[DrBanxon]

Come on guys, it's right there on the front page.
DT's PLATINUM now.
Platinum > Premium
3,000 posts
DT's a god :[[

I thought getting 1,000 posts was hard, now I need 2,000 more >.<

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by DrBanxon

Come on guys, it's right there on the front page.
DT's PLATINUM now.
Platinum > Premium
3,000 posts
DT's a god :[[

I thought getting 1,000 posts was hard, now I need 2,000 more >.<

sorry DrB i don't normally read that section T_T but now DT has ascended to God ranking. i feel more special than before ^^ thanks for the info though DrB *stops spamming*

[DrBanxon]

:0
You're going to just throw away perfectly good cliffhangers and twists by handing out spoilers?!
Tsk tsk.
At least I'm going to lie about stuff in Bonus' and Daen's profiles :]

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by DrBanxon

:0
You're going to just throw away perfectly good cliffhangers and twists by handing out spoilers?!
Tsk tsk.
At least I'm going to lie about stuff in Bonus' and Daen's profiles :]

i tried putting them in spoilers but that didn't work out very well so i decided to with draw them and i'll just post up their names instead. tsk tsk you're letting them know you're going to lie DrB you hippocrate xD jk


Irshox: the Altered Origin

Colxin: the Defiant Power

Arxon: the Torn Blaze

Xirka: the Frail Shield

Xevets: the Angelic Butcher

Xenots: the Steely Dispassionate

Xahpios: the Sacrificed Monster




AO - i'm going to PM you their profiles so you can put them up on the site. please label spoilers above them if you don't mind. it's also so i don't have to post them up here. ^^




*First Chapter Update*
i almost forgot to post here. well i got the first chapter of Salix II up and it's really short. but i hope it will be enjoyable to all =D