The Exiled

[Flower]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

that's just cause i recently picked up the manga.

*high fives*

[quiteMAD]

.....sreriously you guys? Two or three of the posts in this past week had some sort of relevance to this thread. Kinda wish I hadn't bothered to catch up now. =l Anyway I very close to finishing that God forsaken second page, but I just can't bring myself to take those final steps. Because honestly, it doesn't feel worth the time spent on it. I just got 8 volumes of Hellboy graphic novels in the mail today, so they'll provide me with plenty of time to rest. Weather I continue working on the Exiled, work on the Disturbia project with PA, or start this one shot story I've been wanting to do is unknown. So we'll see where I(and the Exiled manga) stand in about a week.

[Flower]

Originally Posted by quiteMAD

.....sreriously you guys? Two or three of the posts in this past week had some sort of relevance to this thread. Kinda wish I hadn't bothered to catch up now. =l Anyway I very close to finishing that God forsaken second page, but I just can't bring myself to take those final steps. Because honestly, it doesn't feel worth the time spent on it. I just got 8 volumes of Hellboy graphic novels in the mail today, so they'll provide me with plenty of time to rest. Weather I continue working on the Exiled, work on the Disturbia project with PA, or start this one shot story I've been wanting to do is unknown. So we'll see where I(and the Exiled manga) stand in about a week.

What did you expect after the past few years? :/

...those owls still creep me out.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by rpgangel

What did you expect after the past few years? :/

...those owls still creep me out.

>.>

and that's the problem. Matt, I'm going to be working on my recruitment this weekend, if that gives you any inspiration.

[Brexen]

A Portal of Darkness appeared near the Outskirts of Radiant Gardens, two hooded figures stepped out. One removed his hood to reveal his fine black and red hair. it has been 10 days since Xiendal joined the Exiled Order and he had been given his First Assignment, he along with Daxic, had to Infiltrate Radiant Gardens' supplies and collect the Pieces of Orichalcum. Xiendal looked over at Daxic, who gave the heads up for them to continue. They followed the Path Leading into the Market Street, continuing to the North-East of Radiant Gardens. They passed through the Crystal Fissure, where all the Crystals sparkled in the Sun’s light. Daxic continued, passing through the caves over run by giant crystals. Xiendal looked around the cave “I wouldn’t mind living here”. Daxic looked back at him “just focus on the Mission”. They finally reached the Marketplace; it was completely empty with no-one around. “This is going to be easier than expected” Xiendal joked as he walked beside Daxic. Daxic ignored him, continuing forward. Xiendal followed him, keeping lookout for anyone who could be watching them. Daxic stopped. Xiendal turned around, Cloud and Leon were In front of Radiant Gardens' Warehouse, keeping lookout. This was unusual as the Warehouse was usually unguarded. Daxic looked at Xiendal, "Someone must’ve told them we’re coming". Xiendal nodded and followed Daxic, as they took a detour. Daxic looked around to see if they were followed and turned towards Xiendal "I’ll distract them, you get the Orichalcums". Xiendal nodded and stayed behind while Daxic ran towards Cloud and Leon with his Chain Scythe summoned. Xiendal waited for a bit longer, before continuing with his assignment. Cloud and Leon were distracted, so Xiendal sneaked into the Warehouse. It was small, but full of Crystals of all types. Xiendal took most of the Orichalcums and a few of the others he fancied, including Bright, Energy and Serenity Crystals. He continued looting all the Crystals but stopped halfway through picking up a Blazing crystal. In front of him was an Orichalcum+, the rarest crystal in the Realm. He grabbed it, put it in his last pocket and left the Warehouse. After finally leaving the Warehouse and completing his assignment, he created a Portal and jumped through it back to the World that Never Was. Daxic seen Xiendal leave the Warehouse, and created his own way out.Daxic finally caught up with Xiendal back at the World that Never Was. Xiendal showed Daxic the Goods, including the Orichalcum+ he got. Daxic looked at him “no need to Show-off,” Xiendal smiled at him, "thanks for helping me out back there, couldn't have done it without you". Daxic looked back at him and smiled "Give me the Orichalcum+, and we're even". Xiendal looked at him puzzled, "What? No Way! I'll give you a Dense Crystal but that's it". Daxic looked back at him and laughed "I was joking, but if you Insist", he then takes the crystal from Xiendal. Xiendal gets up and walks in the direction of the Exiled headquarters. Daxic follows him, staring at his Dense Crystal for most of the way. Xiendal finally makes it to the Exiled Headquarters, where he hands over the Orichalcums and Orichalcum+.

[Dawning Twilight]

space your writing out please into paragraphs and quotes. it's difficult to read it when it's all clumped together like that.

[Brexen]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

space your writing out please into paragraphs and quotes. it's difficult to read it when it's all clumped together like that.

It won't let me, when i submit it all clumps together.

[Dawning Twilight]

try writing it in word first and spacing it. then put it in and post it. it should work.

[Brexen]

A Portal of Darkness appeared near the Outskirts of Radiant Gardens, two hooded figures stepped out. One removed his hood to reveal his fine black and red hair. it has been 10 days since Xiendal joined the Exiled Order and he had been given his First Assignment, he along with Daxic, had to Infiltrate Radiant Gardens' supplies and collect the Pieces of Orichalcum. Xiendal looked over at Daxic, who gave the heads up for them to continue. They followed the Path Leading into the Market Street, continuing to the North-East of Radiant Gardens. They passed through the Crystal Fissure, where all the Crystals sparkled in the Sun?s light. Daxic continued, passing through the caves over run by giant crystals. Xiendal looked around the cave ?I wouldn?t mind living here?. Daxic looked back at him ?just focus on the Mission?.

[Brexen]

They finally reached the Marketplace; it was completely empty with no-one around. ?This is going to be easier than expected? Xiendal joked as he walked beside Daxic. Daxic ignored him, continuing forward. Xiendal followed him, keeping lookout for anyone who could be watching them. Daxic stopped. Xiendal turned around, Cloud and Leon were In front of Radiant Gardens' Warehouse, keeping lookout. This was unusual as the Warehouse was usually unguarded. Daxic looked at Xiendal, "Someone must?ve told them we?re coming". Xiendal nodded and followed Daxic, as they took a detour. Daxic looked around to see if they were followed and turned towards Xiendal "I?ll distract them, you get the Orichalcums". Xiendal nodded and stayed behind while Daxic ran towards Cloud and Leon with his Chain Scythe summoned.

[Brexen]

Xiendal waited for a bit longer, before continuing with his assignment. Cloud and Leon were distracted, so Xiendal sneaked into the Warehouse. It was small, but full of Crystals of all types. Xiendal took most of the Orichalcums and a few of the others he fancied, including Bright, Energy and Serenity Crystals. He continued looting all the Crystals but stopped halfway through picking up a Blazing crystal. In front of him was an Orichalcum+, the rarest crystal in the Realm. He grabbed it, put it in his last pocket and left the Warehouse. After finally leaving the Warehouse and completing his assignment, he created a Portal and jumped through it back to the World that Never Was. Daxic seen Xiendal leave the Warehouse, and created his own way out.

[Flower]

Originally Posted by rpgangel

Let's just go with the trial thing. I wanna slam a hammar onto a desk. >:D Ultimately, it'll be up to us, the members, on whether or not the noob joins.

Now for rpg's 'test'--trials always have tests. This'll be the way of getting MY approval, and mine only--this si to prove yourself to me.

My test: Write a short story on this situation:

In the dawn of morn, and at this moment the Castle is empty. You have been given a mission and have the choice of three members; the ones unavailible are the first three, Kaarix, Charxai, Jynx, Zhymarx, and Daxic. The mission is simple; infiltrate Radiant Garden's supplies and collect pieces of Orichalcum. The problem is that the Restoration Committee is aware of your actions. Fighting is a last resort.

There's my test, Brexen. Go.

:/

[Brexen]

Daxic finally caught up with Xiendal back at the World that Never Was. Xiendal showed Daxic the Goods, including the Orichalcum+ he got. Daxic looked at him ?no need to Show-off,? Xiendal smiled at him, "thanks for helping me out back there, couldn't have done it without you". Daxic looked back at him and smiled "Give me the Orichalcum+, and we're even". Xiendal looked at him puzzled, "What? No Way! I'll give you a Dense Crystal but that's it". Daxic looked back at him and laughed "I was joking, but if you Insist", he then takes the crystal from Xiendal. Xiendal gets up and walks in the direction of the Exiled headquarters. Daxic follows him, staring at his Dense Crystal for most of the way. Xiendal finally makes it to the Exiled Headquarters, where he hands over the Orichalcums and Orichalcum+.

[Flower]

Read what I posted. :[

[Brexen]

I did what you asked, btw the ?'s are punctuation, khi don't pick it up for some reason.