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| Story of the Year | |
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| Princess Exiled | Traitors-------- World/Item-------- Exiled Salix -------- Disney Castle/Minnie’s heart -------- Rextanse Zaverxi -------- Pride Lands/Rafiki’s Staff -------- Kaarix Lonex, Xishn -------- Halloween Town/Dr. Finklestein’s Brain -------- Xalatine Zallex -------- Port Royal/Davy Jones’ Heart -------- Jynx Jixah, Skyx -------- Neverland/Clock -------- Zhymarx Toxit -------- Beast’s Castle/Belle’s Mirror -------- Xodyc Xishn -------- Olympus Coliseum/Herc’s Shield -------- Charxai DrBanxon -------- Camelot/Excalibur -------- Delacroix Temallox and Ajax-------- Agrabah/Genie’s Lamp -------- Sabixel,Lexinoth Salix -------- Space Paranoids/Program Jixah -------- Castle of Dreams/ Cinderella’s Slipper Zaverxi -------- Toon Town/ Will to Toon Town Toxit -------- Nottingham/The King’s Crown Daxic -------- Enchanted Dominion/Spindle -------- Mickey ![]() side notes: Nottingham is Robin Hood Enchanted Dominion is Sleeping Beauty Toon Town is Roger Rabbit Castle of Dreams is Cinderella Camelot is The Sword in the Stone |
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| | #3873 | ||
| The Truth | Quote:
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The Exiled find out where to go to find the traitors through Yen Sid, who has been observing the sittuation, and finally feels the need to intervene. Mickey finds out about the situation through Rextnase. DrBanxon vs Delacroix=OMG DRAMA The ones with empty spaces where there should be an Exiled member were done before the actual betrayal. You see, Daxic found out about these worlds/items through the super computer in Radient Garden via Xemnas, when he was in Org. XIII. Since then he's been working with Salix to get all these items. Salix and Daxic met before Org. XIII was brought back. Also for those that don't remember, Temallox and Ajax are older characters that me and PA made and decided to bring back as workers for Daxic. Temallox controls metal, while Ajax controls magma. Temallox uses a war hammer, and Ajax uses a giant tomahawk. I think that's it. >.> MM- we also need a reason from you why Zixan won't be going to any of these worlds. OH. THERE WAS ALSO A MOTION TO DO AWAY WITH THE MYTHIC ORDER. They pretty much have no purpose in the overall plot, and it would allow the story move straight from the keybladers to the Reverse Order, into the betrayal/Disney Worlds. I've already aproved of this, as has rpg. We're curious if it's ok with everyone else. Last edited by quiteMAD; February 13th, 2009 at 03:38 AM. | ||
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| | #3874 |
| Remember Me | Good news- I just finished my first Chem. Exam. Bad news- I haven't figured out a reason for Zixan's absence, but I'll sleep on it. |
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| | #3875 |
| November Blue | I kinda like the mystic order. Even though they were supposedly the most powerful nobodies we face, yet hardly anyone dies. But I would rather keep them. |
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| | #3876 |
| Keyblade Wielder | i vote for plot moving forward despite making one of them |
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| I am Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In the Garden of Hopes and Dreams, being mauled by Hummingbirds... Age: 20 Posts: 2,074
Rep Power: 6 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | I'm placing this idea here as the system was recieved fairly well in the previous convo with Ojike, PA and DT. As of now we have the 20 members listed in accordance to time of recruitment. Their fine at this point, but of course we still have a vast multitude of secondary members, not to mention dozens of unnamed fodder Nobodies dying for our cause. In this case I think a sort of Party system should be in order. It works something like this: We have the 20 high-ranking members each a singular representative of the people here and everyone after that is a secondary member. The secondary members are assigned one of the 20 members to be their respective group leader. For instance Xalatine and X can be listed as Zhymarx's party members. This way, when a mission comes up, we have a default party to mobilize with. Of course there will be instances in which the core 20 members will need to team up with one another, so they are free to trade any of their secondary characters for one of the core 20. The idea came to me when I was playing Final Fantasy Tactics Advancer and notice a tendnency for me to group my guild members into specific team for maximum combos. There probably isn't a specific reason for this other than to make out Order seem like its a small one. |
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| Ruler of Light Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Illinois Age: 20 Posts: 587
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: EXP: | hey everyone, i thought i would pop in again. how is everything going? what are you all working on? im currently still pledging a fraternity. we have not had to do really bad stuff yet, which worries me because i know some really bad stuff has got to be coming X-) also the most important news...........MY SPORTS ILLUSTRATED SWIMSUIT EDITION CAME!!!!! an Israeli on the cover, and she's the same religion as me. unfortunately, she is dating Leonardo DiCaprio if that is how you spell it. yea so i hope you guys are taking care of everything DT-sry i never got to say bye to you. ill say it now. Bye. sry i never got to finish some aconex stuff for you. i hope you they guys told you what happened with me and you understand the situation. make my characters proud! :) FYI: "Cliffs of Dover" by Eric Johnson is a good song |
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| November Blue | Quote:
Anyways, it's really not a bad idea, but as the story is right now, we don't really have any missions that this would be used for. | |
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| Princess Exiled | Quote:
Example: One mission could be cleverly disguised by Salix to retrieve an item of importance to Daxic's pet. Another: One mission could be to go eliminate a monster let loose by the Reverse Order *Of course you must understand, these ideas are completely random and may or may not fit into the story right away. | |
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| | #3881 |
| Sidekick | Well duh. Guess we'd just have to MAKE missions to use for it. :D I can come up with half a dozen ideas myself. Several would be comic relief, though. |
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| | #3882 |
| Remember Me | I like the idea AP. I think this mission system could add some more life to story. In other news, I'm disliking my second semester of college. I need to start actually studying more, but it's too hard to focus when you have gobs of electronics around. Give me a computer and I'm off in my own little world. Speaking of electronics, I just received my new toy! I bought myself a new TV. Unfortunately, I had it delivered to my house instead of my dorm so I'll have to wait until next weekend until I'm able to see my baby. |
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| | #3883 |
| Styles Upon Styles | Lord Banxon: The Calx 2 - Capabilities Chapter One – An Old Friend Lord Banxon found himself on the floor of the tiny prayer room of the Wüst Unterbrigen Church. The room was dark and it seemed that he had been out cold for a period of time he could not determine. The room was dark. He clutched his chest, breathing heavily. He looked down at his broken body only to find some parts of his cloths burnt away, severe burns on the skin through the holes of the fabric. After the battle that had just occurred, Banxon managed to escape, but passed out once he assumed he was safe. It had only been an hour. Banxon got up slowly and painfully. He leaned against a wall and pointed his wand at himself. The whispers that came from his mouth were uttered with the utmost speed and precision. Banxon had practiced this healing spell for ages. The healing was minimal, but just enough to allow him to walk painlessly. He cracked the door in front of him open and looked out into the church. It was empty and the lights were off. The windows showed Banxon that night had fallen. He walked slowly out of the room and made his way out of the church. He sat on the concrete outside, his back on the church wall. “I failed…” * * * * * * * * * * * Valde Ordo had arrived in Wüst Unterbrigen shortly after Banxon had done so. They didn’t think to go into the church, though, so they would never find Infra Ecclesia or the Calx. Rextanse, Jixah, Sabixel, and Zixan had a relatively boring trip; there wasn’t much talking after the mutiny against Banxon. Jixah hadn’t said a word since that day. Sabixel and Zixan could care less about Banxon, but they all feared for Delacroix in his old age. “I don’t think it’ here either…” Sabixel said slowly. “Just like all the other cities we’ve been to. Why do we continue to look for this wretched stone? It was Banxon’s desire, we were just the pawns in his little game,” No one knew how to respond to Sabixel’s blunt, yet true, statement. “Let’s just go home,” They all agreed and turned back to the direction of Cypher Nihilus. * * * * * * * * * * * Lord Banxon was lying on a large rock in the middle of the marshland, his eyes closed. He thought about how life in Vox Locus would be like. Lonely, he presumed. He thought about the friends and happiness he once had, but that was all taken away from him along with his best friend, Delacroix. He doubted ever being happy again, the pain was just too much for him. Banxon would give anything to see Croix again, one more time, just to say good-bye. “Hello, Lord Banxon.” His eyes shot open and he looked down to the flood of the march. Standing in front of him was an almost completely transparent man. His body was outlined in a light purple hue that made it much easier to see in the dark. Banxon rubbed the sleep from his eyes, just to make sure that they were not deceiving him, and looked down again at the ghostly figure. It was indeed Delacroix. Banxon laughed joyously and jumped down to the floor. He stared into his friend’s eyes, tears coming out of his own. “It’s nice to see you again.” “I wish I could say the same,” the ghost responded, “But I’ve been watching you ever since I died,” Banxon flinched at the last word, but regained his composure quickly. “When I gave you this power,” he continued, “I had intended to be the only ghost you saw, but I’m sure the sight of Alius had cheered you up.” “It did, my friend,” Banxon was so emotional he could barely speak the sentence. “I want to thank you for…” “There’s no time!” interrupted Croix. Banxon was taken aback, his eyebrows raised. “Listen to me, my Lord. Valde Ordo and the Exiled Order still need you. You can’t just abandon them because of self-pity.” “I can’t go back,” Delacroix took a step forward and raised his voice. “Your friends will soon be in danger. You are the only one who can hel-” “They’re not my friend!” Banxon yelled. The emotional moment had past and Banxon was almost furious. “After what they did to me? After what I did to them?” “They need you and you know they miss you.” For the first time in Banxon’s life as a nobody, he didn’t want to speak to Delacroix. “Leave me! I have absolutely no intentions of returning to the Exiled Order, nor helping the backstabbers that threw me off a cliff. I will go as far away from Cypher Nihilus as possible. Wherever that may be,” he looked down to the ground and turned away from his friend. “Good-bye, Delacroix.” |
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| | #3884 |
| Princess Exiled | hey guyz check this out: KH-Vids.Net Forum - The Exiled Order use the username: swillum and password: danny i swear to gods i have half a mind to go over there and kick some ass ![]() in case you think this is just another pointless comment, its not: some idiot's going around claiming HE made the Exiled with AP and KingofHeart's drawings!!! *punches a wall* >< |
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| | #3885 |
| Story of the Year | funny thing is the guy actually asked me if he could join the Exiled and sent me all that and if he hadn't I wouldn't of ever known yet another person was trying to pass our story off as their own. |
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| exiled, lol xenegric, never give up, serious business |
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