The Exiled

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

That's a given. We'd need to keep a few key pieces in place. I think the problem with the story is that is too vast. At the end of the day, people always focus on the storyline of Daxic, Xana, and Jinx. At least, that's what I think of when I hear Ex1. Everything else, all of the other villains come secondary to me because my interest doesn't lie with them, it lies with aforementioned 3 nobodies.

When I think about the Exiled I generally look at it from the point of view of the reader. Thinking about it Jynx isn't around in several fights such as the Keybladers or the Reverse Order fights. For the majority of the story with the exception of his origin story and the Xemnas fight he's pretty much mixed in with everyone else.

Daxic is shown for the most part until the end and a glimpse near the Organization XIII attacks to actually be stronger than everyone believes and as mentioned he isn't really seen as to the reader as a major player up until right before the end.

Xana is of course that female character that is always going to be important just because she's been there since the beginning.

I honestly see Zixan, Xodyc, Rextanse, along with a few others like Banxon and Ruxel as those who would attract the reader much earlier on in the Exiled considering they call most of the shots earlier on and are in every fight pretty much it isn't till the end that that starts to taper off.

I don't know for some reason everytime I look at the Exiled I see everyone as the Exiled with their own seperate stories making up what the Exiled 1 really is not just 3. Like when I look at Banxon his story is that of having that shinning moment. For nearly most of the Exiled he's shown to be weaker and the comic relief character however there are moments when he pulls out something unexpected that surprises you. For instance he's the only member who takes on a Mystic member alone and wins (by a fluke) when it takes 3 or 4 to take on the others.

Ruxel's story is that of Redemption

the list goes on and on. I just see something a bit different when I see the Exiled 1.

[The Lionheart]

This is pretty hardcore guys.

I really don't know what to say. I like the storyline we have. But, like everyone else, realize it's going absolutely nowhere.

Also, having 30 characters doesn't help. It's just hard to fit everyone in.

But it's whatever.

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by ╬ProperArtist╬

When I think about the Exiled I generally look at it from the point of view of the reader. Thinking about it Jynx isn't around in several fights such as the Keybladers or the Reverse Order fights. For the majority of the story with the exception of his origin story and the Xemnas fight he's pretty much mixed in with everyone else.

Daxic is shown for the most part until the end and a glimpse near the Organization XIII attacks to actually be stronger than everyone believes and as mentioned he isn't really seen as to the reader as a major player up until right before the end.

Xana is of course that female character that is always going to be important just because she's been there since the beginning.

I honestly see Zixan, Xodyc, Rextanse, along with a few others like Banxon and Ruxel as those who would attract the reader much earlier on in the Exiled considering they call most of the shots earlier on and are in every fight pretty much it isn't till the end that that starts to taper off.

I don't know for some reason everytime I look at the Exiled I see everyone as the Exiled with their own seperate stories making up what the Exiled 1 really is not just 3. Like when I look at Banxon his story is that of having that shinning moment. For nearly most of the Exiled he's shown to be weaker and the comic relief character however there are moments when he pulls out something unexpected that surprises you. For instance he's the only member who takes on a Mystic member alone and wins (by a fluke) when it takes 3 or 4 to take on the others.

Ruxel's story is that of Redemption

the list goes on and on. I just see something a bit different when I see the Exiled 1.

It's not a bad thing that you see it like that. I'm just saying that I was only interested in how the whole Xana storyline developed and how Jynx went through all of this crap to save her while dealing with her overprotective brother as well as the scrutiny of the members. Everything else was forgettable for me.

[Flower]

Originally Posted by The Lionheart

This is pretty hardcore guys.

I really don't know what to say. I like the storyline we have. But, like everyone else, realize it's going absolutely nowhere.

Also, having 30 characters doesn't help. It's just hard to fit everyone in.

But it's whatever.

thats another thing. Having 30 characters is just...ridiculous. I can see maybe 10-15. Maybe.

MM-Just because we can. And there's a lot that happens before the whole Daxic-Jynx-Xana thing.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

It's not a bad thing that you see it like that. I'm just saying that I was only interested in how the whole Xana storyline developed and how Jynx went through all of this crap to save her while dealing with her overprotective brother as well as the scrutiny of the members. Everything else was forgettable for me.

The thing is that only comes to a head near the end. Up until then it's just a relationship they have I mean it's on focus because they are the only ones with an emotional relationship.

That's not really the big story for me though.

I could however, post my Disney Idea if you'd like MM

[Mastermind]

Yes, what is this Disney idea that you speak of? You mentioned it not too long ago, but didn't go in depth with it.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

The Daxic takes the heart of Davy Jones initially to fuel his beast seeing as he's not destroying it and just using it's powers there's no sacrifice needed however, because of it's limitations as far as power is concerned it doesn't work very well and Daxic pretty much just ends up handing it over to either Davy Jones or the East India Trading Company something like that which would explain his next choice being Xana because of her supernatural abilities and what not.
The big plot that we have as far as the Disney characters and the keybladers are concerned is that the original Kingdom Hearts vanished at the end of KH, Organization XIII's false Kingdom Hearts was destroyed by Ansem the Wise at the end of KH2 Only Trinity, as the guardian of Kingdom Hearts, knows where it is now Malificent although against nobodies still wants that power and that everlasting darkness in Kingdom Hearts.
Therefore it's only natural to assume that Malificent would seek her out to find out about KH's whereabouts.
Also seeing as Malificent has been around for quite sometime as is apparent in BBS she must reasonably know about Trinity.
The keybladers are essentially the counter to this plot in the sense that they are trying to prevent Malificent and her band of flunkies from finding Trinity and reopening Kingdom Hearts and seeing as most of the keybladers are rookies more on the level of Sora but with that Attitude of the original 5 then it's a little weird.
I mean don't get me wrong they are powerful but they lack experience; the best way to describe them would be Terra, Ven, Aqua, Master Xehonart, and the Dark Soilder only forced to actually work together. The Exiled essentially are stuck in the middle and thrown into this plot not really knowing what's going on, I mean there are a few members that know but they are very far and in between; I wouldn't be surprised if Rextanse has a close connection with Mickey.
The Exiled being the middle men don't are attacked from both sides before no one really knows which side they're on and to make matters worse you have the bad seeds like Daxic, Salix, Zaverxi, etc attacking the Disney Heros whereas the Alliance members are taking on several Disney Villians and in between end up fighting so no one really knows where they're coming from.
My idea for the keybladers is that they either show up from time to time like Organization XIII was with Sora and company in KH re:COM and KH2 and near the end have a final battle (which I prefer) or we keep there battle the way we already have it written but have them give little hints to this whole Trinity situation before they die.
Also I told Banxon about my idea and he said he wants a Banxon vs Pete fight

That's essentially the idea in a nutshell. Obviously there are things that need to be tweaked and things missing but that's where several other ideas come in to play. I pretty much just came up with this on my own so it'd be nice if I had some other ideas to bounce off other people.

[The Lionheart]

I like the idea.

As always, I'm trying to think of somewhere where charxai could fit in. But I'm drawing a blank right now. I'm thinking since charxai has a strong sense of honor, some disney villian with none of it would work pretty well.

but ya I'm coming up with nothing.

[NobodyImportant]

I wouldn't care if we decide to start over with the Exiled or not. So long as I get to keep Zaverxi in all his bishiness, I'm good. Not that I think Zaverxi'd want to be in a 3-man group unless the other two were girls. He hates girls less than guys. He probably associates more with girls anyway, especially if they start talking about hair care products and stuff. ;P

And LH formerly known as AO, I was about to come in and be all 'oh great, a n00b decided to join us' and then I saw it was you.


As for the fanclub idea, well.... it's not THAT bad. At least we're not being called insane anymore, although for some people here it might be politically correct.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

And LH formerly known as AO, I was about to come in and be all 'oh great, a n00b decided to join us' and then I saw it was you.

hay i r no n00b. cuz mah element is dark fire and u say i is unorignal and stoopid dos not mean i r a noob.

Anyways, I think I might go along with the disney idea and type up a little charxai and maleficient biznazz 8D

EDIT: And guys I need some ideas for a new banner for the site. Any pictures that you think I should include? (BTW, Flashback Humor is going to make it)

And also, I think we just might be one of the most hated groups on the forums. Just throwing that out there.

[Ejaxk-Dusk]

So This is The Exiled Order Huh! Too much people! But I Like it!

[╬ProperArtist╬]

ironically enough we're probably going to cut half the roster just because of all the unnecessary characters :3

Welcome to the Exiled Ejaxk I am the one who original sent you the note on DA.
Nice to have you aboard.

Post your character's profile here so the others can see what we have to work with.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by ╬ProperArtist╬

ironically enough we're probably going to cut half the roster just because of all the unnecessary characters :3

Welcome to the Exiled Ejaxk I am the one who original sent you the note on DA.
Nice to have you aboard.

Post your character's profile here so the others can see what we have to work with.

Yes, please post your profile so we can [s]make you cry[/s] see what we have to work with.

And welcome to the exiled! I'm the head of the department of records, so if you need anything, just ask me!

Haha man I'm just kidding, my website is the database, so that's where you'll get all the information you need.

linky

[Mastermind]

LH- You know you could have just directed him to the link in your sig...

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Starting anew?! Blasphemy! Yeah, DT and myself starting talking about Ex2 a month or two ago and everyone jumped on our back about it.

i'm ready to start working on Exiled 2 whenever you are MM. with my drawing skills being terrible at best all i can do is write and help create new ideas for an Exiled 2.