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Old October 9th, 2008, 12:41 AM   #3091
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yes here is what we had

chp 3

chaxai
kaarix
ruxel

chp 4
salix
delacroix
zaverxi

chp5 5
xodyc
zixan
daxic


all in that order
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Old October 9th, 2008, 12:45 AM   #3092
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^what is that order for?
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Old October 9th, 2008, 12:54 AM   #3093
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^what is that order for?
Those are the recruitment chapters.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 12:57 AM   #3094
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^wait so Charxai is found before Zixan and Xodyc? i wasn't aware of that.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 12:57 AM   #3095
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^wait so Charxai is found before Zixan and Xodyc? i wasn't aware of that.
Yeah, ranks might be thrown out of the window...
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:00 AM   #3096
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Hmm well i'd say ranks should be kept but in a fashion so that debate is not an issue. the problem is i can't think of a way that could happen...
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:01 AM   #3097
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Hmm well i'd say ranks should be kept but in a fashion so that debate is not an issue. the problem is i can't think of a way that could happen...
Basically nothing changes. Your character's authority is implied.

However, don't stress because it hasn't been finalized yet.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:06 AM   #3098
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well i think we know which characters have higher authority than others already so that isn't a problem. perhaps rank should be determined by their nature and how crucial they are to the Exiled. sorry just tossing out ideas. since i wasn't able to make yesterdays meeting.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:10 AM   #3099
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well i think we know which characters have higher authority than others already so that isn't a problem. perhaps rank should be determined by their nature and how crucial they are to the Exiled. sorry just tossing out ideas. since i wasn't able to make yesterdays meeting.
We discussed this today. There's actually a conference going on right now.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:15 AM   #3100
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i don't have yahoo IM anymore. T_T
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:18 AM   #3101
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i don't have yahoo IM anymore. T_T
Go to Yahoo.com and log in to your mail account. The chat client is built in now.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:20 AM   #3102
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^i'm at school right now. i guess i'll give it a try anyways.
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:30 AM   #3103
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Okay, a few things

One, I dunno if we are doing character theme songs but if we are then Xat's is Paranoid Android by Radiohead

Second, I've decided to post the Xemo fight in parts, I'm gunna post the first part in a few minutes after spending a little time on yahoo, but I'll have to talk to each of you seperatly, the Wii won't let you join conferences
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Old October 9th, 2008, 01:39 AM   #3104
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Well...

the conference started before 10 (9):30, so the beginning is basically a bunch of crap. when the convo actually starts, we all realize that this conversation won't actually be about chapter "2", because technically, chapter 2 was already written.

we decided chapter three would be about recruitment.

then, we talked about rank. i thought it was by time joined myself. but Proper said it was by power and leadership. Daxic is fourteen because he wants to look weak.

DrB decided Delacru- i mean Delacroix would be recruited be for DrBanxon.

then we decided to recruit 3 people for each chapter in chapters 3, 4, and 5.

Mastermind asked why xana took so many people in, and colin said it was because she had a heart, and was kind of a mother figure, despite her young age. I learned that Xana is meant to be a foil for the exiled (cause she wont kill or summat)

For chapter three, Xowlin, Rex, and Xana do the main recruiting. This is because Zax is off fighting Saix and Xigbar, and we don't have any other members.

Then we talked about Nero (the dog who holds all of zax's powers after he dies). we never really decided how nero was gonna get in there, but it was funny because Nero is known only to rextanse for most of the story, and KF totally forgot about nero.

Delacroix and Rextanse have been assigned to recruit DrBanxon.

It was decided that charxai, ruxel, and kaarix were to be recruited in chapter 3.

Then, because KF didn't want to write Kaarix's recruitment, I agreed to do so. BUT, KF will help me out. Proper said he might be able to get in touch with Kaarix's creator for additional help/info.

So, I was to write Charxai's and Kaarix's recruitment, while yoyo would write Ruxel's.

Delacroix joins in chapter four.


We decided that charxai was the first to be recruited (hooray :D), and that ruxel would follow. Kaarix is the last member to be recruited in chapter 3.

this is what i wrote about charxai's recruitment: heres how i have charxai joining in my mind: the group is liek running away and stuff, and charxai hides from them cuz he thinks they're org xiii (who he is trying to hide from). one of the group detects charxai's presence, "show yourself" and all that jazz, and charxai comes out, wearing an org xiii cloak. initially, the group thinks he's part of org xiii (cuz they're all edgy and he's in the org cloak) but soon realize he's on the run, just like them. BAM, joinage

Ruxel was like xana's father's friend or sumthin, so it was decided xana would recruit ruxel (more info about this later).

Kaarix apparently joins because she has nothing better to do (DrBanxon: Cause we need more chicks lol)

Then people started asking to make sure somebody saved the convo. obviously, it happened.

In chapter four, it was decided that Salix, Delacroix, and Zaverxi would be recruited.

Zaverxi gets recruited cuz Rextanse beats him in a fight.

Chapter five rolls around, and xodyc, daxic, and zixan get recruited.

It was decided that Jynx's backstory is gone. He will get his own intro into the story. Jynx is an ongoing experiment for Org XIII, and the exiled rescue him. Jynx gets moved back to the Exiled's headquarters, and wakes up and busts out of the tube there.

The exiled then called 3 timeouts, and i made a joke about how we didn't have any left in the fourth quarter.

yoyoj06: ok timeout
Knightflare: TIMEOUT.
DrBanxon: TIMEOUT
Axel Owns: and the exiled has no more timeouts left
Axel Owns: here in the fourth quarter

it was not well recepted.

back on topic, MM apparently hadn't been able to see my "posts" the whole time. so he left, came back in, and asked me when i got there.

it was a little weird.

okay, so maybe that wasn't on topic. but anyways, we decided that after individual recruitment stories were written, they would then be proofread and edited so that they would flow into a living, breathing, CHAPTER!

DEADLINE FOR RECRUITMENT (Chapter 3 & 4): OCTOBER 26, 10:30 EST (9:30 CST)

THEN we decided that rextanse wouldn't recruit Delacroix, but since Rex knows him, Rex sends xowlin out to recruit Crunkalicious.

Ruxel's age was changed to 35.

And recruitments for Daxic, Zixan, and Xodyc are due...

DEADLINE FOR RECRUITMENT (Chapter 4): November 9, 10:30 EST (9:30 CST)

this gives them time to write and make any necessary adjustments based on chapter 3.

A lot of people left after this, i think it was me, Proper, Xodyc, MM, and yoyo left.

then we decided that ruxel is gonna get recruited by xana through some killing a garden and bringing it back to life.


and that's all she wrote. most importantly...

RECRUITMENT STORIES BY THE FOLLOWING FOR THE FOLLOWING ARE DUE ON THE FOLLOWING DATES:

DEADLINE FOR RECRUITMENTS (Chapters 3 & 4): OCTOBER 26, 10:30 EST (9:30 CST)

Axel Owns - Charxai and Kaarix (With help from Knightflare)
yoyoj06 - Ruxel
NobodyImportant - Zaverxi
DrBanxon - Delacroix
Dawning Twilight - Salix


DEADLINE FOR RECRUITMENTS (Chapter 5): November 9, 10:30 EST (9:30 CST)

Xodyc - Xodyc
Mastermind - Zixan
Proper/Ojike - Daxic


NOW, if DT is somehow unable to make the above date, or unable to write at all, it will be tolerated. He wasn't at the conference, so he wasn't able to decide such things.

BUT, if he doesn't finish by November 9, he will face the consequences.

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Old October 9th, 2008, 02:19 AM   #3105
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ah DT t answer ur uestion aout how he comes back, well i had called the element spirit contract and quantum so this plays in with xenges personal story.
to make it short the old man from chapter 1 of xenges story turns out to be a nobody with the element of quantum and a few more tricks he basically been aive for a long time for he was apart of a secret society of beings of light and darkness that lived together, civalization falls by heartless, he brcomes nobody builds a business empire across several worlds .

the last great fet of the society was the gain the ablilty to control the oldest beings in the universe, the stars.
the old dude finds out after a ton of time passed where the experiment happened though when he arrives xenge has been sealed in the door for about 150 years , far to late to stop the process.

in the time he has before xenge gets released he starts to do expirements with heartless and nobodies atteming to combin the two he sucessed on some level. after xenge wakes up, joins the exiled he finds a little girl who turns out to be 001 of the old dudes expirements, the ceatures formed are called amazars.

the little girl gets attached to xenge after he finds her but he never shows her to the exiled, like how he neve recuited some nobodies he met. when xenge goes off right before he dies the little girl gives him a red jewel for good luck, though the jewel was apart of her nobodic powers spirit contact.

so basic xenge dies his spirit gets forcelly trapped in the jewel, his body fades hes offical a ghost. later on the girl now in her second form the girl retrieves the jewel with xenges soul in it. she later joins exiled 2 xenge only tags along
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