The Exiled

[yoyoj06]

Originally Posted by rpgangel

Exiled 2? Exiled 2! Exiled 2.

Did you know 2 comes after one?

um....i dont think i was taught that....

but yea

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Well, that was quick and efficient. Thanks for the lists, you two. + reps for both of you.

Yays! ^_^

Originally Posted by Ojike

Holy crap I don't even remember making that. D=

And I can't say I approve of his writing later parts in the story. Part of me feels like there'll be too much focus on the later part of the story, and when you're needed for the current part...you just won't be interested enough.

um my characters seem to only make a strong appearance in Exiled 1 during the betrayal which i don't even know is still happening. i also barely understand the story for Exiled 1 and i also last time i was told that several of you guys were already writing it. so i figured since Salix would be such a much larger character in Exiled 2 that i would get on it. but by all means i'll help with Exiled 1 that is once people start talking about it again and if Salix is needed...

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

hey guys.

cool stuff with exiled 2. glad we're getting excited about stuff. but i still think we need to get exiled 1 done.

but then again, the increased level of creativity is worth it.

a few ideas popped in my head, just thought i'd list 'em out to see what you guys thought:

- i've been thinking of new uses for charxai's element (nitrogen). i was thinking that charxai could tell where all nitrogen particles are (to visualize this, think of charxai seeing all nitrogen particles as blue). so, i was thinking that charxai could effectively find "eddies" ( Eddy (fluid dynamics - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia) ) in the air, being able to detect the presence of other nobodies/beings

hmm that ability needs a bit of refining but over all i see no problem with using that so long as it's connected to your main element.

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

- expanding on this idea, i was thinking that it would be cool to have a fight seen where charxai fights a member (xatsuin?) blindfolded. because, he could end up using this technique as a "second sight." nitrogens makes up a lot of the air around us, so charxai would be able to detect the locations of nobodies. also, humans have lots of nitrogens in them. so, if we go with the fact that nobodies work on the same basic anatomy humans do (minus the heart), humans would be "bright" compared to the smaller concentration of particles in the air.

why would he fight Xatsuin? also i have a problem with the blindfold idea cause it makes him sound a lot like Salix being blind and all. i do however like your detection ability idea. it seems like something that could work. but it could still use a bit of refining.

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

- was also thinking that during the period where the exiled members go off on their own or in pairs (i would like charxai to be in a pair, but idk who he could train with), charxai would go blindfolded the whole time in order to attempt to complete master his element, as well as add finesse to his control of nitrogen.

so, whatcha think?

he could team up with one of my characters if you wanted. but what Exiled is this in 1 or 2?

Originally Posted by rpgangel

Exiled 2? Exiled 2! Exiled 2.

Did you know 2 comes after one?

NO WAI!!!! ^_^

[Mastermind]

Like DT said, I'm not too familiar with Exiled 1's storyline. Yeah, I understand the gist of it, but not the small intricacies that come with it. Quite frankly, the main players in Exiled 1 are Jynx, Rex, Daxic, Xana, and, to a small extent, Zaxeldion. Ironically enough, it's the creators of these characters that know the most about the storyline, with the exception of overdrive. Furthermore, the creators of the aforementioned characters don't visit the thread as often as others.

Quite frankly, I only note Zixan having a small fight with Saix, a small rivalry with Jynx, and a little part at the end of the actual story. Nothing too mind-blowing or impacting on the story. If there's more he does, then please fill me in.

As far as the blindfold/Charxai/Salix conundrum is concerned, I think there's a way to pull it off without it infringing on Salix's rather unique fighting style.

[twilight abyss]

DT- Xat & Charxai would fight because they are partners, AO means along the lines of training

AO- Why not make Xat his main training partner during the time when they go into pairs, I'm pretty sure thats when the Xemo battle takes place, but I'm sure there will be a little time before Jynx & Rex go in, so it makes sense that they would train together during that time, plus, as far as I know, the only time they actually fight as partners is during the mystic order fights with Xat, Charxai & Zav Vs. I forget which member

[Mastermind]

Oh it would be so epic for Xat and Charxy to team up and capture a keyblader in Exiled 2! Wow, that thought just popped into my head. Unfortunately, Xatsuim dies in Exiled 1, correct?

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Like DT said, I'm not too familiar with Exiled 1's storyline. Yeah, I understand the gist of it, but not the small intricacies that come with it. Quite frankly, the main players in Exiled 1 are Jynx, Rex, Daxic, Xana, and, to a small extent, Zaxeldion. Ironically enough, it's the creators of these characters that know the most about the storyline, with the exception of overdrive. Furthermore, the creators of the aforementioned characters don't visit the thread as often as others.

Quite frankly, I only note Zixan having a small fight with Saix, a small rivalry with Jynx, and a little part at the end of the actual story. Nothing too mind-blowing or impacting on the story. If there's more he does, then please fill me in.

As far as the blindfold/Charxai/Salix conundrum is concerned, I think there's a way to pull it off without it infringing on Salix's rather unique fighting style.

i do hope so.

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

DT- Xat & Charxai would fight because they are partners, AO means along the lines of training

that could work as well.

[twilight abyss]

Yeah it is true, he dies :]

But I just realized that now that Xat is in the Organization 13 fights ( he kills Banxon's heartless ) that he will be in the keyblader fights, & Charxai & him could team up then also

Guys, I have an idea, I say we make a template for a relationship chart, each character would have one, and in it it would have every character ( including ones that are not actually in the Exiled ranks, like Xemo )
Next to each name it would state your character's relationship with the person(you would put neutral for no relationship )
I think it would be very useful for when you're writing about other characters, so you know how the character would react towards certain people.

Finally, I almost forgot, thanks for the rep MM :]

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Yeah it is true :]

But I just realized that now that Xat is in the Organization 13 fights ( he kills Banxon's heartless ) that he will be in the keyblader fights, & Charxai & him could team up then also

Guys, I have an idea, I say we make a template for a relationship chart, each character would have one, and in it it would have every character ( including ones that are not actually in the Exiled ranks, like Xemo )
Next to each name it would state your character's relationship with the person(you would put neutral for no relationship )
I think it would be very useful for when you're writing about other characters, so you know how the character would react towards certain people.

Finally, I almost forgot, thanks for the rep MM :]

I like this relationship chart idea that you bring up. It would really show how everyone is connected with one another.

Also, you're welcome for the rep. I'm always giving rep out to people.

[Dawning Twilight]

i guess it'd be ok but i honestly find that it would be more confusing that and i wouldn't know how to make one. but if you put out a few examples then we'll see. also on another note i've nearly finished my new three characters to the Exiled Order in Exiled 2.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

hmm that ability needs a bit of refining but over all i see no problem with using that so long as it's connected to your main element.
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also i have a problem with the blindfold idea cause it makes him sound a lot like Salix being blind and all.
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he could team up with one of my characters if you wanted. but what Exiled is this in 1 or 2?

charxai wouldn't wear the blindfold normally, its like a training thing. Like fighting with your off hand. so idk if that still would impose to much.

and i think that would be cool. talking about exiled one. during this time:

Originally Posted by Mastermind

-Do to the massive number of casualties, and the near victories ONLY gained by exploiting small weakness of the Mystic Order, some of Exiled get their wake up call of how weak they really are. Many of the members go off into solitude to train, while others do so as a group. This is when Jynx and Rextanse (Xatsuin sneaks in with them) re-enter "The Void", to learn to hone their powers. Upon which time, they are ambushed by Xemo.

[gene chaos]

well finally got a new computer so me's gonna be more actite from now on and question did we just jump to version 2 of the exiled? cause me is really confused

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

charxai wouldn't wear the blindfold normally, its like a training thing. Like fighting with your off hand. so idk if that still would impose to much.

and i think that would be cool. talking about exiled one. during this time:

Oh, so you'd basically need a training partner other than Xatsuin, as he's unavailable at the time?

GC- Firstly, welcome back. Secondly, we're playing with some ideas of Exiled 2 while also trying to complete Exiled 1.

[twilight abyss]

I'm sure there will be some time before he enters the void, so I'm sure he'll have time to train. I mean the void probably only last a few hours at most, and takes place during the order of sin fight meaning Jynx, Rex & Xat must have left just before the order of sin came, and came back ( with xat dead ) a little after the order of sin was gone.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

charxai wouldn't wear the blindfold normally, its like a training thing. Like fighting with your off hand. so idk if that still would impose to much.

and i think that would be cool. talking about exiled one. during this time:

hmm well i suppose. in that case i'd like Salix to train him due to the fact that Salix is already blind and at one with his other senses. ^_^

Originally Posted by gene chaos

well finally got a new computer so me's gonna be more actite from now on and question did we just jump to version 2 of the exiled? cause me is really confused

cool welcome back. yes we're working on Exiled 2.


Anyways i finished another scenario except this one is for Exiled 1 just to please everyone. This scenario takes place right before the betrayal and basically covers a conversation between Salix and Xishn and Daxic. hope this one works out well i kinda didn't have much info. on Daxic when i wrote it sorry Ojike. ^^;;;






High above the ground Salix stood on top of one of the tallest buildings in The World That Never Was. The winds blew heavily as he stood silently with his right hand raised high into the air collecting the hearts that floated high in the sky above him like stars in the heavens above. Slowly one heart would move close to Salix’s right hand and then vanish into his collective.

“What is the reason for your existence? For that matter what is the meaning of existence in and of itself? Are we meant to exist for the sole purpose of rotting to death on these barren cannibalistic worlds? Every world is made out of a single heart and yet, how can something so delicate and fragile be the instrument of something so power and destructive? So many questions all dissolving away with no due answers to solve and flourish them,” Salix said to himself.

Slowly another heart floated down to his right hand and vanished as it too joined the collective that Salix had used to collect so many hearts already.

“I wonder why I exist? Am I the physical representation of all that devours and manipulates the existences in our universe that require hearts? Perhaps I am not that and maybe I am merely a defective version of what I am supposed to be, a full being with a heart, body and soul. If only I could be what the universe has dictated to me, rather than this husk of what I should be,” Salix said. “When I acquire the proper necessities I too will return to being what the universe has dictated that I should be. It will happen all too soon. All too soon indeed.”

Already Salix had collected so many hearts within his collective and he only kept collecting more as time went on. Though then again the time was approaching and soon they would begin it. Salix suddenly heard something change as a Corridor of Darkness opened behind him and Xishn stepped out of it. Xishn looked up at the skies and then back at Salix before speaking.

“You know he’ll be here soon old man,” Xishn said.

“I know that,” Salix replied.

“So what do we do then,” Xishn asked.

“I think the answer is pretty obvious. We join them once I’ve finished my business here. You and I joined him because of what we needed in order to take the next step. Am I correct,” Salix asked.

“I don’t like him,” Xishn said.

“I know you don’t, but that doesn’t matter now does it,” Salix asked.

“I suppose so. When did he say he’d give it to you,” Xishn asked.

“When I had his army ready, of course it’s been ready for a while I’m merely gathering more hearts just in case of emergency,” Salix replied.

“He’s such a sneaky bastard. Do you think we can trust him old man,” Xishn asked.

“No not really. But what choice do we have,” Salix asked.

“Not exactly my idea of comforting,” Xishn answered as he smirked.

“If you wanted comforting you could have stayed with the others in the Exiled Order,” Salix said.

“I may find the fact that we lack comfort disturbing but lacking activity is even more so disturbing,” Xishn answered. “So old man what do we do exactly when it comes time for Daxic to make his move?”

“…We hold no loyalties towards Daxic nor do we hold loyalties towards the Exiled Order. Trapped are we between two evils. Perhaps this was all part of Daxic’s plan,” Salix said calmly. “However it doesn’t matter we shall persevere in the direction of our own goals, even if that means having to join Daxic in his unruly plot. But do not risk your being on it.”

“This all has a bad taste to it,” Xishn muttered.

Xishn watched as Salix continued to collect hearts into his collective one by one until so many had gone by that he had lost count. He wondered if either he or Salix knew anybody whose hearts might have been collected by Salix only to be altered and manipulated until they were useless. Though it didn’t matter as Xishn had long since thrown his life before becoming a Nobody away a long time ago.

“…Collecting hearts how productive Salix,” a voice said as a Corridor of Darkness opened behind Xishn and Salix and a man in an Exiled Order walked out.

“You’ve arrived on time, Daxic. I assume you possess the object I had requested from your possession,” Salix said.

“Indeed I do possess the object you had been asking about. I assume that you’ve held up your end of the bargain as well,” Daxic replied calmly as he reached into his right pocket and pulled out a small disk.

“I have procured everything you asked for and more,” Salix said.

“Where may I ask are they,” Daxic inquired.

“Feel free to glance below us,” Salix replied.

Slowly Daxic walked over pass Xishn and to the edge of the building next to Salix as he bent forward and gazed down the side of the building and out to the streets. Standing in large numbers were possibly hundreds of Nobodies and each carried a human form like Salix, Daxic and Xishn. They were each however greatly powered down in order to make them controllable. A large and rather wicked smile crept up Daxic’s face as he gazed down at the army Salix had created for him.

“They answer to me alone. A safety measure just incase something were to happen that I would disapprove of,” Salix said as Daxic turned to face him.

“I assume you can lead them then,” Daxic asked.

“There should be no problem with that,” Salix answered.

“It pleases me that you are a trustworthy man. I always assumed that a man who is willing to betray his own should also be willing to do so more than once. Do you agree,” Daxic asked a weird look in his eyes.

“It seems only reasonable,” Salix said.

“Then I shall take my leave here. You know what must be done,” Daxic said.

Daxic extended his hand that was holding the disk as Salix reached out instantly and grabbed it before placing it safely in his pocket. Immediately Daxic turned and walked away as he created a Corridor of Darkness in front of himself just before entering it and leaving. However just before he had left Xishn could have sworn he had seen Daxic smile which made him extremely uncomfortable.

“…Don’t worry about it Xishn,” Salix said as he lowered his right arm down from collecting the last heart into his collective. “I sensed it about him. Daxic’s never been the one to be trustworthy even when you become his ally. Either the information is phony or he intends to destroy me the instant our usefulness expires. Either way I had seen this coming.”

“What do you intend to do now? I doubt the Exiled Order will just let you repent now for the sins you committed against them,” Xishn replied.

“We’ll continue with the plan and when Daxic fails and gets himself killed, the Exiled Order will have no choice but to allow us to return with their extreme lacking in the number of members. Thus my plan will come to fruition just as it had been planned from the very start,” Salix explained as he turned to face Xishn. “In the mean time we’ll continue and begin the operation.”

“Ready when you are old man,” Xishn replied smiling.

Salix slowly walked away as he created a Corridor of Darkness and entered it followed by Xishn. As soon as Salix and Xishn had left the army of Nobodies below vanished into darkness leaving nothing behind. The World That Never Was had once again returned to its former empty state of nothingness.

[Mastermind]

Wait, isn't Salix already on the traitor's side by the time everyone goes into training?