The Exiled

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by overdrive

So would the keybladers nobodies join forces with the exiled or become enemies? Also taking down keybladers would be hard, so it involve some epic battle. It's a really good idea. xD

Also, wouldn't there also be heartless of each keyblader made, as well as a nobody?

Yes the keyblader's nobodies would be forced to join the Exiled. Also, I don't think heartless would be made because the hearts would be formed into weapons immediately.

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

do all other members of the Exiled have the ability to remove hearts from a victim? I see this as a way that Salix can prove his loyalty to the Exiled Order as well as repent for his crimes against them. I like it MM.

Well, the members would collect and Salix would take care of heart extraction and nobody creating. That's how I saw it in my head. The story was partly inspired by Naruto, though, admittedly. LOL

Also, I forgot to me to mention that today is my birthday. Yay! Furthermore, I'm posting this from my ipod touch.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Yes the keyblader's nobodies would be forced to join the Exiled. Also, I don't think heartless would be made because the hearts would be formed into weapons immediately.



Well, the members would collect and Salix would take care of heart extraction and nobody creating. That's how I saw it in my head. The story was partly inspired by Naruto, though, admittedly. LOL

Also, I forgot to me to mention that today is my birthday. Yay! Furthermore, I'm posting this from my ipod touch.

happy birthday MM. Hmm i like the idea MM. i hope the others like it as well. ^_^

[NobodyImportant]

And if any of the hearts immediately turn into Heartless, Zaverxi can take them in, having a heartless form himself. He's got a rather... unique relationship with the Heartless. He can be responsible for training a Heartless army, hahaha!

Maybe some of them could be made into weapons, and some of them can be made into Heartless like Ansem in KH1, capable of thinking and stuff.

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

And if any of the hearts immediately turn into Heartless, Zaverxi can take them in, having a heartless form himself. He's got a rather... unique relationship with the Heartless. He can be responsible for training a Heartless army, hahaha!

Maybe some of them could be made into weapons, and some of them can be made into Heartless like Ansem in KH1, capable of thinking and stuff.

That is a nice possibility.

[Xodyc]

one, happy b-day MM. hope you have a good one. two, the idea is interesting...

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Jynx & Zaxeldion vs Xemnas pt. IV

Xemnas smirked, dragging him across the cold gravel; Jynx continue struggling to free himself from his grip, looking towards Xana remembering the promise he made to her.
“A promise….to protect you…”
Jynx uttered to himself softly as a flash of light struck the ground, a spear homing in on their location. Xemnas quickly let go of Jynx in an attempt to spin out of its path.
“You’re still as aware as ever I see, this’ll be better than I thought.”
A voice spoke from out of the darkness around them.
“That voice!”
“That voice…”
Jynx and Xemnas spoke simultaneously in shock as they realized recognized its owner. A corridor to darkness began to open, a Ultima aura sprang forth from within as the silhouette of an all too familiar face stepped through.
“Zaxeldion!”
The two shouted in unison again as Zaxeldion smiled at the both of them, straightening himself him.
“Long time NO see Xemnas. How long’s it been? 3 maybe 4 years…”
Zaxeldion dusted himself off a bit.
“Let me guess. You didn’t think you’d be seeing me again eh?”
Xemnas’ smirk subsided
“You. We were sure you’d die that day even after your lackeys rescued you from oblivion.”
He uttered to Zaxeldion.
“I’ve got to admit; you came damn close, but not close enough.”
Zaxeldion show a smug look of satisfaction across his face as he summoned his lance at his back.
“I’ve waiting a long time for this”
He spoke at Xemnas.
“As have I”
Xemnas retorted, he summoned to his sides as he pointed one in the direction of Zaxeldion and the other in that of Jynx’s
“It would appear I’ll have to wait a bit longer to take you back with us. Recover quickly, this shouldn’t last too long, I’d hate to think that that was the true extent of your power…after all, I created you.”
Zaxeldion looked at Jynx for a moment, seeing the anger show on his face.
“That’s it; let your emotions be your strength, learn to harness IT and you will be strong, perhaps even more so than me.”
He thought to himself, smiling, turning as he watched Xemnas disappear into a corridor to darkness. He focused his attention back towards Jynx.
“Jynx, are you okay?”
Jynx glanced over at Zaxeldion and back towards Xana.
“I’ve been better”
He spoke struggling to his feet, holding his wounds as he lifted himself up, carrying himself closer to her.
Zaxeldion walked to Jynx, holding out his hand as he grabbed it, pulling himself up.
“Where did Xemnas go?”
Jynx exclaimed
“He’ll be back…”
He answered looking at Xana and then at Jynx.
“You care about her don’t you?”
Zaxeldion asked, as he knelt down next to them.
“Yeah, I guess you could say that. It’s a long story.”
Jynx replied look back up at Zaxeldion.
“You know I can still remember when we first rescued her. She has a very special power within her, not too different from yours Jynx. It’s why we sought after you for so long.”
Jynx stare up a little confused; as he started to respond a corridor opened up behind Zaxeldion.
“There!”
Zaxeldion turned, looking up; Jynx pointing at the highest point of a nearby building. Jynx resumed his keyblades, he could feel his rage slowly return as he gritted his teeth. Xemnas stood on the edge of the building holding out his arms as if to invite them to attack.
“So you’ve healed your wounds a bit Jynx, this shall be very interesting.”
Xemnas spoke aloud as he lifted his hands to the sky; electricity formed around his arms and hands.
Suddenly a huge portal to darkness began to open in the sky above them, hundreds upon hundreds of nobody and heartless sprung forth from within it as the portal grew larger consuming the sky little by little as each second passed by.
“Oh shit…”
Jynx looked on in amazement.
“Don’t worry, the others can handle themselves. Right now we need to focus on Xemnas.”
Zaxeldion muttered to him
“I can rid this world of two annoyances. Zaxeldion your pride has lead you back to me even though you’re in no condition to face me as you are now.”
Zaxeldion smirked readying his staff
“My condition is just a matter of opinion.”
He pointed his lance towards Xemnas as it began to glow that all too familiar golden color.
“I wonder if you’ll be saying the same thing after I’m kicking your ass up and down this city. I’m not alone this time around.”
Xemnas gazed at Zaxeldion as his smirked subside for a moment.
“So be it.”
Xemnas summoned his sabers at his sides once again as he nodded over to Jynx, pointing is blades towards Xana, smirking.
“Your hearts have lead you to obliteration, perhaps it does not pay to be loyal to one’s heart. You should be sure to remember that.”
Jynx felt his anger flourish more as a red aura began to show around his body. He looked over towards Xana and back up Xemnas.
“You’re right Anger & Hate are supreme.”
He smiled a devilish grin.
“Now I’ll show you just how right you are… DAD!”
Jynx nodded at Zaxeldion and vice versa as they both took over, lunging towards their common enemy, slashing through countless heartless and nobodies as they reached the peak. Xemnas laughed as they homed in on his location, holding out his arms as their world began to change. Zaxeldion lifted his lance high above his head, slashing down at Xemnas who spun out of its path. As he started to land, Jynx lie under him ready and waiting as he spun in circles, spiraling up towards him. Xemnas held down his sabers blocking the attack, flying backwards to the edge of the tower.
“Good.”
Xemnas beckoned Jynx. Furious and filled with rage, he lunged ahead once again slashing and swirling is keyblades wildly at Xemnas, as he dodged and weaved in and out of each swipe.
“You lack accuracy boy…”
Xemnas egged him on, extending his leg to kick, however this time Jynx spun out of the way of the attack. He skidded as he landed, regaining his footing.
“Do something I won’t expect next time!”
He mocked, hurling Dusk towards Xemnas. He dodged out of the way as it spun towards his face. Xemnas smirked, turning back around revealing a small cut across his cheek. Jynx smirked as he rushed Xemnas again, however upon reaching his location his image began to disappear as Zaxeldion lay below him charging his aura into his lance as he swung up cutting Xemnas across the chest. The blood began to pour outward as Xemnas gripped his chest, a corridor opening up behind him as he stumbled back into it.


Overdrive gave me an overview of what he figured should happen after we planned out what's to happen at what part and I added and subtracted somethings. I must say the end result came out better than i expected. Hopefully we can get more done either tonight or tomorrow, I'm hoping we can have it finished (for the most part) by Thursday so I don't have to worry about it when i get back.

[Xodyc]

very interesting PA. sweet.

[Dawning Twilight]

very intriguing PA.

[Mastermind]

That was rather interesting. Good job!

[1cloud2larx3seph]

I'll say

Yes, I'm back

Anyone made up their mind about me joining?

Little Miss Fiesty has no say in the matter. Technally she isnt even a member.

So, What'll it be?

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by 1cloud2larx3seph

I'll say

Yes, I'm back

Anyone made up their mind about me joining?

Little Miss Fiesty has no say in the matter. Technally she isnt even a member.

So, What'll it be?

Who are you?

[1cloud2larx3seph]

David Snarr, at your service.

The LEADER of Kelly's New Organization

[╬ProperArtist╬]

We have no opening for new members other than character who serve as early death characters. Further more this is an actual story which we've already written out so there really isn't anywhere you can go. Your character will not have a big part. If you just make a character template and leave you'll pretty much get killed off rather quickly.

Knowing how the other members feel about new members you more than likely won't be accepted at all.

[quiteMAD]

Seriously man, you need to start proofreading before you post this stuff. "You game damn close"? >>

Still, pretty awesome :D













1cloud2larx3seph-

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Ojike

Seriously man, you need to start proofreading before you post this stuff. "You game damn close"? >>

Still, pretty awesome :D













1cloud2larx3seph-

It would have been proofread if my proof reader had of been online to read over it.>:[