The Exiled

[quiteMAD]

.....then how is it supposed to be written? I swear to God if you back down right now, when we finally have this thing moving along, I'm gonna do something everyone will regret.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

What will you do Ojike? :D

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Everything said and done I'm probably not going to write Jynx's fight w/ Xemnas
no one else is going to write that for me either

And why not? Is it because "we refused to write their fights exactly how they fight in videos?" Please, understand that this is a FAN-FICTION. The only thing we have to stay true to is their attitude and their element. What AO wrote was perfectly fine, as long as he made some minor adjustment to how the battle started (i.e. Marly comes to Charx instead of the other way around.)

There is no making this canon, period.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

actually it's because I'm in a drawing phase right now, trying to get my spring break plans together, working on a picture for my church, working on 2 tattoo designs for my friends, designing a logo for my aunts new business she's starting, helping her film a documentary about life in Pulaski during the rise of the KKK, figuring out what I'm going to do about college, managing my PYP contest on Deviantart, and participating in a "Cloverfield" rp.

Along with writing some things for the story so yeah.

[Mastermind]

So as you urge others to start writing their fights, you're not even sure if you'll have time to write your own?

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Yeap that's pretty much it :D

hypocrites are awesome ^^

[Dawning Twilight]

DT smells hypocrisy xD regardless i won't be able to start writing mine until i have a list of who's fight who in what order. or was that it on the last page? cause those two lists kinda confused me...

[╬ProperArtist╬]

But seriously I need everyone's fights to finish before i can write mine, because i want to do this like the rp we did a while back. Actually I just need Rextanse, Zixan, Xana, and Daxic to be finished with their fights. If i remember correctly those 4 had something to do with that fight in some form or fashion.

I want Jynx to be mentally attacked by Xemnas before the others show up. Then at some point during the beginning of Jynx's arrival he gets snatched up by Xemnas and taken to that City local that Xemnas fights Sora in the first battle.
Or
I could have it where Jynx goes to OrgXIII's headquaters and challenges Xemnas straight up and gets his ass whooped and they take him back for more experiments and the others have to rescue him. IT would explain why Zixan thinks he's a useless at first.

Anyway which ever you guys think is best when OrgXIII attacks, Jynx goes straight into berserk form and rushes Xemnas into a corridor to darkness. Xemnas is on the run and gives orders to Zexion to kidnap Xana.

Either she'd fight him back and kill him. If this is to happen Xemnas would sense Zexion's defeat and warp out (via corridor to darkness) to Xana's location and kidnap her. As he's escaping he would probably say something to Jynx like "If I were you I'd worry more about the fate of your friends" Jynx wouldn't know what he's talking about but realize it after the fact and hunt Xemnas down
Or
She's knocked out and actually kid napped by him and teleported to the final battle area that will occur between Jynx and Xemnas
If this is the case I think someone should kill Zexion and just because he's a double agent anyhow I say that person should be Daxic, quick and easy. Maybe take a corridor to darkness to Zexion's location and asking if things are going as Xemnas planned; while Zexion's back is turned or while he's answer Daxic would slit his throat or stab him threw the stomach and give him that creepy smile he does and say something sarcastic and snarky as he's dying. This would give Xigbar more of a reason to attack Daxic seeing as Xigbar and Zexion were like buddies (it's explained in the manga and the new cutscenes in Final mix). Plus Xigbar is always sneaking around listening in on peoples conversations and doing whatever. It only makes sense...kinda >.>


Xana wakes up after being kidnapped. Zixan and Rextanse follow Jynx who's chasing after Xemnas. Zixan and Rextansed helped fight of the hordes of heartless/nobodies that Xemnas begins to summon as Jynx battles him, when Xana wakes up she takes part in helping them. Daxic sneaks to see how the fight is going and i think Xigbar attacks him as he's sneaking around. They fight Xowlin pops up somewhere and gets killed. Jynx goes into Struggle of Sadness. Xemnas gains control and Jynx sacrifices himself to kill him. The others see what's going on Xana's crying, Zixan is trying to console her as best he can and Rextanse goes into the void to revive Jynx. Daxic shows up after defeating Xigbar and looks on from afar as he says some smartass line about things going according to his plan.

Jynx of course would be sleep for this period of time and Xana by his side. This also explains why he's not around during the Keyblader's attack.

That's what i remember from the RP and i think that's how Jynx's fight with Xemnas might go, but like i said i need Rextanse, Zixan, and Xana's battles finished first.

That's the idea so far but I want to know which way you guys think it should go

[quiteMAD]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

I want Jynx to be mentally attacked by Xemnas before the others show up. Then at some point during the beginning of Jynx's arrival he gets snatched up by Xemnas and taken to that City local that Xemnas fights Sora in the first battle.

She's knocked out and actually kid napped by him and teleported to the final battle area that will occur between Jynx and Xemnas
If this is the case I think someone should kill Zexion and just because he's a double agent anyhow I say that person should be Daxic, quick and easy. Maybe take a corridor to darkness to Zexion's location and asking if things are going as Xemnas planned; while Zexion's back is turned or while he's answer Daxic would slit his throat or stab him threw the stomach and give him that creepy smile he does and say something sarcastic and snarky as he's dying. This would give Xigbar more of a reason to attack Daxic seeing as Xigbar and Zexion were like buddies (it's explained in the manga and the new cutscenes in Final mix). Plus Xigbar is always sneaking around listening in on peoples conversations and doing whatever. It only makes sense...kinda >.>

I'm voting for those two.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Haha seems like a good way to go to me :D
Now all we need to do is wait...

[Dawning Twilight]

*sighs* do we have a list or not? yes or no?

if yes please list in a simple order.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
11.

[DrBanxon]

Banxon/Croix vs. Lex has to happen like while a bunch of other fights are happening. You'll see why when I finish it...
So I guess that one'd be near the middle or the end, as most of the other fights have alrady started by the time Banxon starts his own.

[Mastermind]

Quick question, Daxic hasn't turned on us yet, has he?

[Dawning Twilight]

i highly doubt it since we're all fighting the Org. members.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

No but he's a double agent remember. He's in the early stages of planning. He was sent by OrgXIII to spy on the Exiled and gives them the go ahead to attack. To protect his own hide Daxic kills off Zexion to stay on good graces with the Exiled so they don't think something is up and OrgXIII just think someone else killed him. Xigbar of course being the person he is would figure it out somehow (either spying or putting two and two together) and he'd attempt to confront him, but Daxic kills him. He's basically covering his tracks so no one can point the finger at him and with OrgXIII dead no one can see he sent for the attack.
So yeah in a way he is still against us, only it's not really known what his motives are. Consider it more like early foreshadowing