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Yay !!! 300 views finally ... ok , i will tilt the main focus of the next chapter to clear all the questions floating around ... And maybe throw in some scenes about the conditions of the other worlds ....
The next chapter will come round tomorrow or the day after ....
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Ok , this will be some sort of filler chapter for all the doubts about the storyline. Some revelation about the Organisation . The bunch of knights will appear next chapter .
Filler Entry
Chapter 6 : Pearl -White
Before the Midnyte incident On Destiny Islands
The white and royal marble floor clattered with his every step . He paced slowly and stepped through the two huge doors in front of him . Before him sat 8 other members , all on high pedestals . Many were newer faces but he could make out some of the older ones . Demyx was giving his usual uninterested look while Marluxia was working away at his scythe . There were pretty much too much new recruits these days even for Zexion to remember. Xemnas was still on his seat , but he was totally different from before . His entire face at turned sour . He looked old on the surface , his head was bald and all that was left was some old and lifeless doll .
Xemnas turned from his lifeless look and caught sight of the Cloaked Schemer , “Welcome , Zexion . Look at the time . ” Zexion gave a disgusted look , and replied “ I‘m regretfully sorry .” He moved across the room quickly and rose up to his seat . With his book in hand , he looked like some sort of weird character out of school . Xemnas took a moment for the room to silence itself , “Okay , we have to go through this clearly . We have lost many of our members through battle and betrayal ,” he banged his hands against his armrest , “We need to gather new nobodies quickly . Look , we‘re not only dealing with the Keyblade‘s Masters anymore . Those guys are not too friendly either . If they were to somehow collaborate against us , we‘re nothing but dead . You , young ones , must get a grip and work up the ranks to face the future problems we might have . ” Zexion couldn’t care less about what Xemnas was saying , as each new member tried to outshine one another with their lame little ideas. If we wouldn’t die under Sora , we will most likely get destroyed due to internal strife , Zexion thought . One of the newer recruit took his hood off , ready to speak . He was already ranked fifth , higher than Zexion himself , which used to have been the core of the Organisation itself . He had very nicely coloured hair , strands of gold in his dark hair . His face was white , too white , as if he was sick or something . Vrex , that ridiculous idiot and his ideas , Zexion , who was getting tired of being the minor . Vrex continued , “We can badmouthed those guys with a disguise plan . We would get some one to spoil the image of them , agitate the Masters and turn them against each other . ” The new members could not help but found the plan interesting . Even the ignorant ones like Konex and Stonyx was listening in . “But who shall we send in then ? ” Demyx said , snapping out of his own world . Xemnas turned to the lowest chair in the room , “How bout a chance at it huh , Midnyte ? ”
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Radiant Garden
Leon looked out at the window into the stars and wondered how Rinoa was doing . She had left on a journey for nearly a year . He had missed her absence since she had gone for her travels . But his moment of reminiscence of his old friend was broken by Cid , who barged into the room panting .
“This is bad , Leon . We got ourselves a bad one . This guy ain‘t gonna last long .” Cid said , his shirt cut at many regions. The crew was behind and they were both badly bruised too . Leon looked at the youth in Cid’s hand . Ragyx , the new guy . His head was tilted back , his coat was left with nothing less than threads, and his striped shirt was soaked in red . Leon looked in disbelief , and thought to himself , So much damage in one day ?
ENd OF FILLER
Hope this clears up some question in mind .
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Great filler!!:)
Come on! That is so 25 characters!!! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...lol
lol... great filler. loved it
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Ok , done with the filler , it’s time to bring the story back on track . Time to stop the appearance of Sora, Emo form and return him to normal . :toungesmile: The revelation of all secrets begins ,with just one step …
Chapter 7 : The Cross-Over
Inter-World Pathways
Well , all of a sudden , the relationship of the 3 keyblade masters were straining . No one had tried to talk to Sora ever since they departed from Destiny Islands . Riku was smart enough to request that Sora was given some personal space , after the what the youth had to go through these few heart-twisting days . Sora gazed out of the windows of the Gummi Ship , looking at the stars that were flickering in the sky . I will always be with you , he muttered under his breath , clutching onto Kairi’s charm ,which he have retrieved as a keepsake . He felt tears gathering in his eyes and quickly wiped them off with his sleeves. If you were with him , you would have felt he was possessed by the old Riku , dark and emotional and all . Riku looked on his friend with great worry . Deep in his heart , he had hope Sora would heal from this wound and quickly turned to the situation at hand ,but it appears it was not to be so . The situation of the world was under great strain right now . Somehow , the Organisation is back and up to no good like they always were (unlike Axel). Then there was the shameless Midnyte with his underhanded methods . Not one to mess with if you want to stay in one piece .
Riku recollected the data and analysed them carefully in his mind . His year with DiZ had made him a much observant person , and somehow he was looking for a link which could very well unravel the mysteries behind the shady units at work here . He looked out into space and gazed at the bright lit moon . Could it be you ? Could be , huh , Kingdom Hearts ? , he thought , a confused frown spreading across his face . His thoughts were short-lived as he was interrupted by Mickey’s tap on the shoulder . “World ahead !” Donald screeched . “We have arrived at Radiant Garden just as you ordered , Your Majesty . ” The crew prepared for landing except Sora , who was obviously lost in his own world . Goofy watched Sora with great anxiety , he had like the ever-optimistic Sora , rather than the emotional one of now . He sighed and called Sora to follow along . All he received was a gentle nod . Goofy walked down the stairs onto the land on Radiant Garden , and turned back to see Sora still looking into blank space . He attempted to rush to his friend but was hurried along by Donald . Come on and snap out of it , Sora , Goofy thought , his mind playing clips of how Sora had always been the light that led them through darkness . Having seen him so down in the dumps, a sour sensation built up in his heart as he went off to catch up with Mickey and the others .
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Radiant Garden
Alone on the ship , Sora was lost in his terrible sense of both guilt and reminiscence . He felt useless and weak both on being unable to rescue Kairi from Midnyte’s clutches and also at not taking good care of her in the first place . He repeatedly banged his head against the gummi walls , until his foreheads finally cuts and a gash goes across his forehead . Blood poured out of his forehead , faster than a water fall . As if finally waking up from his nightmare , Sora felt blood trickling down his cheeks and immediately went off to clean his gash . Into the washroom he went , washing his wound in the sink . As he looked into the temporarily choked sink at his own reflection , he got the weirdest hallucination . His reflection was cursing at him , and then the image dissolved , forming up into a rather feminine face . Kairi’s . Sora looked on with great shock , as Kairi began blaming her death on Sora . “ARRRRRR!!!!” screamed Sora as he stumbled back and landed on his bump . He held on to his head . His brain throbbed heavily against his skull and every beat felt like a huge hammer falling upon him . When Sora finally snapped out of it , he had the mind to cover up his wound . Then in the medical kit’s mirror , he thought he saw a familiar reflection . A pink vest and skirt . Could it be ? , he thought , racing out of the ship . The figure , as if noticing Sora’s presence ran off , leaving Sora in his/her dust . Sora tailed her , his feet taking him faster and faster . The figure took a left then a right , taking advantage of the thick crowd to lose Sora . Sora followed up tediously , the figure looked as if his/her legs weren’t tired at all . The figure turned into a dark alley at the third street . Sora , barely on her tail , panted loudly as he followed into the turn . All he could follow now were footsteps . Relying on his hearing , he broke through his limits and ran even faster . He followed deeper into the dense and dark maze , and finally caught sight of him/her . Then , just when he had nearly chased up , another right turn .Sora knew that was a dead end and for a moment he felt victorious .
He had caught up finally . He held on to both knees , panting and coughing loudly like a old antique car . Sweats were gathering all over his face like crystal and shiny sapphires . He looked up only to find that in place of what he initially hoped for , was an armored figure . The armored figure stood tall , with broad shoulders . Most likely a male . A jagged circle was carved across his chest . The first word that flashed across Sora’s mind was : Midnyte . Waving out his Keyblade and grabbing the Oathkeeper Key chain , he combined the two swiftly with great skill and charged . The Armored figure made no attempt to escape as the attack , as the keyblade connected with his chest plate , ripping it to shreds . Sora didn’t let his game-face down , and jumped on the opportunity , and gave the knight some aerial combos , as his keyblade landed down with great malice . The blows connect across the shoulder guards , which shatter after the rain of keyblade . However the figure stood there , silently and steadily , never once faltering under Sora’s crazy rampage .
Sora reigned on , until he was literally exhausted and his muscles were aching like hell . He fell to his knees , his arms out to support himself . The sweat gathered at his chin and fell to the ground , drip after drip . Panting loudly as if asthma had stuck him , Sora looked up at the resilient enemy who stood ever steady there . His shoulder guards had been obliterated , his chest plate scarred beyond recognition and his shins guards was nothing more than scrap metal . But he just stood there , never shouting out cries of pain or agony . It was as if it didn’t understand the concept of pain . “Why… why aren‘t you retaliating , aren‘t you one who utilizes underhanded means ? ” Sora inquired at the towering figure . The armored knight finally spoke , I know you will never understand me , but the Midnyte of whom you speak is not acquainted with us . He is with the Organisation . ” Sora faced turned from fatigue to anger , “Yeah right , you murdered Kairi , you good-for-nothing- !@$%$# , ”reaching for his keyblade and preparing to strike yet again . As he rose through the air , the Knight casually grabbed the Keyblade and wrenched it from Sora’s hand . Sora rolled across to the other side and held out his hand , expecting to get the blade back from the armored figure .
Silence fell on the two , and everything was still for seconds . Somehow , someway , the keyblade had not responded . Sora looked in disbelief , as the knight waved the Keyblade around with ease . “Ar yes , it‘s till good since I last had it ,” he said , admiring the Keyblade’s beauty . Sora took the opportunity to lunge at his adversary , but the knight merely turned slightly and sent Sora flying through the air thanks to his own momentum . Sora landed on the ground with a loud thud . “I‘m not here to fight you , merely to clarify certain things with you . We are not with Midnyte . This is all with Organisation . Although that doesn‘t make us enemies , that doesn‘t make us comrades either . However , our mission are the same . And for that, I ask for you to not wreak chaos between us . If you do , we might have no choice but to retrieve our abilities back . ”
He turned his back on Sora , waving his hand out as a gate raised from the ground . As the door materialized , he threw the keyblade behind his back in front of Sora , returning the blade to its rightful owner . It was then that Sora had the ability to retrieve it . The figure pushed open the greatly ornamented doors. It was well decorated with all the complicating designs engraved over it . Within the design was a main focus . Three circles lie in the centre . One symbol was a heartless one , another was that of the nobody’s and the last was partially covered by the armored figure , but Sora could briefly make out a circle of some sort . Could it be , could it be that they’re not with Midnyte or the Heartless or even the Org. XIII , Sora thought as he watched with blurred vision , the figure took a step into the door . Then , the knight turned back and looked at Sora , “Remember you‘re the key that connects everything. You are the light in darkness , ” then finally disappearing into thin air as the door closed .
Sora had a faintest feeling that the door had somehow resembled that of Kingdom Hearts, and remembered young Riku in tears as they closed the doors . A voice within was speaking to him , coaxing him. (Roxas?!) He gradually realized how foolish he had been recently and how his friends had needed him in this critical moment . Now that’s the Sora I’m proud to be part of , his mind said . It was weird to talk to one self but Sora was glad of Roxas’ persuasion had finally brought him through . He rose to both feet and wiped his outfit , ridding it of the dust after that tussle with the armored knight . He walked out of the street with a new aura round him , and a new-born smile across his face .
END OF CHAPTER 7
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Long time never post new chapter , so here is chapter 8 .
Chapter 8: Eclipse
Radiant Garden , Merlin’s House
Riku rested his head against the wooden pillar within the house . A long afternoon of the King trying to piece up a puzzle about the Org. in front of everyone was not his exact definition of fun . He tried to keep his eyes open , focused hard to listen to what the King was saying but the words soon dissolved into the air and before he could react he had fallen asleep .
“Where am I?” Riku thought within his dreams . He looked around him to find a field , barren of any living thing . But there was something weird . Keyblades , all shapes and sizes lining the floor . They were rusty , scratched and were nothing more than scrap . However , in the centre of what seems to be a cross road , 3 keyblades , shining and piercing to the eyes in the sunlight , stood . Suddenly , Riku felt himself inch forward . Beside him , an old man trudged on . He was dressed in a dark leather coat and inside a white shirt and pants held together by a buckle . The man must have been round 60 , analysed Riku , no hair and all , plus the sickly face . It was true that the man had a reflective scalp and Riku tried to suppress his inner emotions , stifling a smile . But the fact that the man was wearing some sort of restraints troubled him . From the corner of his eyes , Riku caught sight of 3 figures approaching towards the blade , which his body had no doubt was inching to . He surveyed his surrounding . It felt so familiar yet so unknown . It seem his body was moving on his own , and he was a mere observer from the sidelines.
As the sequence seemed to drag on , Riku felt that he suddenly left his body and became merely two floating eyes in the air. He watched as his initial self , a red coloured knight walked forward , dressed in an outfit resembling the dark side of Riku . The five was set on crash course as they walked towards the blades . The three figures turned out to be slightly faster in the race and picked up the blades from the ground and turned to face the old man and the red warrior . Riku knew the intensity of the situation . There was going to be blood shed , he thought . As he watched in amazement , the old man broke through his restraints with ease . The old man drew a keyblade out of the air and readied for battle . And a fierce battle ensued . The red one dealt with the slightly smaller knight , whereas the other two took on the old fellow . The old fellow turned out to have the speed of any youth , matching the two knights blow by blow . He turned the tables on his two adversaries and took up the offensive . Clang ! Clang ! The keyblades connected onto one another . With one flick of the wrist , the old man connected a shot onto the slightly taller figure knocking his mask flying . The knight looked up , his hair hazel and his eyes a shade of sky blue . Sora?! , Riku thought for a moment . The slightly feminine knight tried to match up with the old man but to no avail . The old man clasped his wrist round her throat , applying the pressure , choking the air out of her . The taller knight looked up and positioned himself like a cheetah ready to strike . With great acceleration , he lashed at the old man , catching him across the stomach . And flicking him across the air . But the old man rose again , and released two blasts from his palm , sending the two knights soaring through the sky . Off at another end of the cross road , the red warrior was having a tight match with the kid-look-alike knight . The red warrior had scratched and destroyed much of the kid’s armor , the helmet and the chest plate but the kid was a master with his blades , his attacks buzzing through the air with great speed and agility . He attacked relentlessly , forcing the red knight to inch back and back . The red warrior’s back hit a solid surface . A huge gate of some sort . Kingdom Hearts?! The kid waved his palm across and the gate opened and with a wave of his blade , he sent the red warrior through to oblivion .
However things were not going smooth for the other two . The female was obviously out cold and the guy had not much left in his tank . He tried to keep up with the pace of the old man , managing to dodge some shots before the old man’s blade scratched across his torso . The kid came to the rescue , hoping to save his ally . He hit the old man from behind stealthily ., connecting a string of combos , tearing up the coat of the old man . The kid lobbed the old man higher up and then with great grace , he grabbed both blades and plummeted the old man into a volcano lying underneath . And with gentle steps , he landed on the ground and turned across to help his friend . The taller knight limped off into the distance . The kid shook his light blue hair ridding it of the dust and carried the female across his shoulder . He then began trudging along , following the steps of the taller knight . Just then a huge blue beam of light shot out of the volcano , right into the moon . A sudden shroud of darkness fell on the region and the moon glowed sinisterly . Riku looked at the moon , which resembled Kingdom hearts . It shone brightly , a tinge of dark blue , making the atmosphere dark and gloomy . The kid looked up , a face of shock . His jaw drop and spoke a few words which Riku tried his best to mouth read , “Curse it . The prophecy …Kingdom Hearts ” ,was all he could make out .
Riku snapped out of his dream , mouthing words he didn’t knew he was saying . “Kingdom Hearts was brought ‘bout like this !”
END OF CHAPTER 8
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