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Old 04-22-2008, 10:29 PM   #1561
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Chapter 8 of Shattered Regrets is up. Enjoy.
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:11 PM   #1562
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I've gotten up to Chapter 11 of Timefixer with no one really commenting. Can I have some CnC?
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Next scene, 14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
RoX: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:12 PM   #1563
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Following the trend: I'm up to the third chapter off my 'For I have power.' fanfic. =P
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:13 PM   #1564
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I've gotten up to Chapter 11 of Timefixer with no one really commenting. Can I have some CnC?
Meh, I'll look it over. Would you be able to wait til tomorrow though?
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:15 PM   #1565
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Course. I've got a paper to write tonight, that I can't seem to get done.
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Next scene, 14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
RoX: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:27 PM   #1566
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Alright. I give you my word I will read some of it tomorrow and post on what I think of what I managed to read.

Also, my Shattered Regrets fanfic is only 8 chapter plus prologue, and I really need some CnC to make sure my writing is still in check.
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:28 PM   #1567
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I'll do Chapter 8. This way I can pay you back
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Next scene, 14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:30 PM   #1568
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Alright. It might be a little confusing though.

Thanks.
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:32 PM   #1569
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1. Hey, can anyone tell me what the hell CnC means?
2. We're not supposed to advertise fics in here anymore. I really thought everyone knew that by now.
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:35 PM   #1570
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1. C&C = Comments & Critique
2. Sorry, no I didn't know, I've been away from the site for awhile, so. =)
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:37 PM   #1571
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Same. Sorry. It was like this when I left. But I've been back for about a month and hardlywent over every new rule and such.
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Old 05-06-2008, 09:38 PM   #1572
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Bwahaha, new crack!fic I'm writing!

A Xenosaga episode I parody titled:

Randomsaga Episode I - Der Wille zur Crack't

As you can tell, it is overflowing with crackness, and I decided to write it since Xenosaga would be fun on crack. XD For one thing, Shion Uzuki (Xenosaga's heroine) is always on PMS! (The key to writing a good crack!fic is to exaggerate the characters' negative qualities) And Ziggy is an EMO cyborg. (Hey, it had to happen).

How does everyone else go OOC?:

KOS-MOS: is utterly random. Often makes references to 4chan and YTMND fads.
chaos: Haven't thought about it yet.
Miyuki Itsumi: Goes all Chizuru Honsho (you know, that bespectacled, possibly-lesbian girl from Bleach) every time she sees Shion.
Allen Ridgeley: Thinking...currently brainstorm that he is always mistaken as being gay...or he behaves like Hinata Hyuuga every time he's near Shion (unbelievably shy)
MOMO: Rebellious loli-punk who gets the wrong influence from watching TV o___o;
Jr./Rubedo: Haven't thought of an OOC yet. Maybe he's a Shota...? argh help ><
Albedo: Is commonly called "Al-pedo" because he seems to have a thing for MOMO AND his 100-Series Realian, Kirschwasser
Helmer (the black guy): Often ends up paraphrasing Samuel L. Jackson's lines from "Snakes on a Plane" complete with cusses....also, drags out his infamous "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" line up to 3 times longer than usual (yes, I'm that bored.)

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Old 05-20-2008, 05:35 PM   #1573
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This hasn't been active in forever, but a little review of my short story would be great

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only one person posted, and that makes me very sad :<
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Old 05-20-2008, 05:37 PM   #1574
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only one person posted, and that makes me very sad :<
I'll check it out for you.
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Old 05-20-2008, 05:41 PM   #1575
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I thought you weren't allowed to advertise fanfic's in here?

Post it in the KHI Beta Reader's thread if you want comments...
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