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| GURGI | Chapter 8 of Shattered Regrets is up. Enjoy.
__________________ please ignore any bad typing i have. i fractured my wrist and cant type well. ![]() Wonderful work made by Cherry FANFICS!!!: Hearts of Twilight `` FINISHED Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regrets Hearts of Twilight: Prelude to Darkness; A Dragonstar715 and Frozen Fate Collaboration ![]() |
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| Between All Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: At the Crossroads
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | I've gotten up to Chapter 11 of Timefixer with no one really commenting. Can I have some CnC?
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| Ęsir Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Searching for Mysteryland Age: 18
Posts: 1,519
Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Following the trend: I'm up to the third chapter off my 'For I have power.' fanfic. =P
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| | #1564 |
| GURGI | Meh, I'll look it over. Would you be able to wait til tomorrow though?
__________________ please ignore any bad typing i have. i fractured my wrist and cant type well. ![]() Wonderful work made by Cherry FANFICS!!!: Hearts of Twilight `` FINISHED Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regrets Hearts of Twilight: Prelude to Darkness; A Dragonstar715 and Frozen Fate Collaboration ![]() |
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| | #1565 |
| Between All Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: At the Crossroads
Posts: 1,791
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Course. I've got a paper to write tonight, that I can't seem to get done.
__________________ ![]() ^SeaSalt Icecream http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...timefixer.html ^My fanfic, it needs comments and constructive criticism, can you help? |
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| GURGI | Alright. I give you my word I will read some of it tomorrow and post on what I think of what I managed to read. Also, my Shattered Regrets fanfic is only 8 chapter plus prologue, and I really need some CnC to make sure my writing is still in check.
__________________ please ignore any bad typing i have. i fractured my wrist and cant type well. ![]() Wonderful work made by Cherry FANFICS!!!: Hearts of Twilight `` FINISHED Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regrets Hearts of Twilight: Prelude to Darkness; A Dragonstar715 and Frozen Fate Collaboration ![]() |
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| | #1567 |
| Between All Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: At the Crossroads
Posts: 1,791
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | I'll do Chapter 8. This way I can pay you back
__________________ ![]() ^SeaSalt Icecream http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...timefixer.html ^My fanfic, it needs comments and constructive criticism, can you help? |
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| | #1568 |
| GURGI | Alright. It might be a little confusing though. Thanks.
__________________ please ignore any bad typing i have. i fractured my wrist and cant type well. ![]() Wonderful work made by Cherry FANFICS!!!: Hearts of Twilight `` FINISHED Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regrets Hearts of Twilight: Prelude to Darkness; A Dragonstar715 and Frozen Fate Collaboration ![]() |
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| | #1569 |
| Do you not understand? | 1. Hey, can anyone tell me what the hell CnC means? 2. We're not supposed to advertise fics in here anymore. I really thought everyone knew that by now.
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| | #1570 |
| Ęsir Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Searching for Mysteryland Age: 18
Posts: 1,519
Rep Power: 4 ![]() | 1. C&C = Comments & Critique 2. Sorry, no I didn't know, I've been away from the site for awhile, so. =)
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| | #1571 |
| GURGI | Same. Sorry. It was like this when I left. But I've been back for about a month and hardlywent over every new rule and such.
__________________ please ignore any bad typing i have. i fractured my wrist and cant type well. ![]() Wonderful work made by Cherry FANFICS!!!: Hearts of Twilight `` FINISHED Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regrets Hearts of Twilight: Prelude to Darkness; A Dragonstar715 and Frozen Fate Collaboration ![]() |
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| m e l o d y . e x e | Bwahaha, new crack!fic I'm writing! A Xenosaga episode I parody titled: Randomsaga Episode I - Der Wille zur Crack't As you can tell, it is overflowing with crackness, and I decided to write it since Xenosaga would be fun on crack. XD For one thing, Shion Uzuki (Xenosaga's heroine) is always on PMS! (The key to writing a good crack!fic is to exaggerate the characters' negative qualities) And Ziggy is an EMO cyborg. (Hey, it had to happen). How does everyone else go OOC?: KOS-MOS: is utterly random. Often makes references to 4chan and YTMND fads. chaos: Haven't thought about it yet. Miyuki Itsumi: Goes all Chizuru Honsho (you know, that bespectacled, possibly-lesbian girl from Bleach) every time she sees Shion. Allen Ridgeley: Thinking...currently brainstorm that he is always mistaken as being gay...or he behaves like Hinata Hyuuga every time he's near Shion (unbelievably shy) MOMO: Rebellious loli-punk who gets the wrong influence from watching TV o___o; Jr./Rubedo: Haven't thought of an OOC yet. Maybe he's a Shota...? argh help >< Albedo: Is commonly called "Al-pedo" because he seems to have a thing for MOMO AND his 100-Series Realian, Kirschwasser Helmer (the black guy): Often ends up paraphrasing Samuel L. Jackson's lines from "Snakes on a Plane" complete with cusses....also, drags out his infamous "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" line up to 3 times longer than usual (yes, I'm that bored.) Some stuff may not be fit to post here, so look for it on FF.net. :3
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| | #1573 |
| Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: over the rainbow
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | This hasn't been active in forever, but a little review of my short story would be great War Never Changes only one person posted, and that makes me very sad :< |
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| Harvester of Sorrow Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: That dark void between the World of Dreams and the Realm of Reality, uncertain of which is which. Age: 15
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| | #1575 |
| Ęsir Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Searching for Mysteryland Age: 18
Posts: 1,519
Rep Power: 4 ![]() | I thought you weren't allowed to advertise fanfic's in here? Post it in the KHI Beta Reader's thread if you want comments...
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