The Fan-Fic Writer's Moving Sidewalk

[Max/souleater]

My fisrt post in our new discussion thread! Hell yeah, tons of fanfic talking fun awaits!

I started writing fanfics to start letting out everything I always thought would make a series more epic, or an AU that I think would be cool to throw out there.

[Crimson Jazz]

I've started a Power Rangers fanfiction. Though I've gotten a ton of views, I've only gotten 1 replier. Do any of you mind reading it and giving me some critique? http://forums.khinsider.com/fanficti...-squadron.html

[Azrael]

http://forums.khinsider.com/fanficti...u-fan-fic.html

I need reviews and some support on a heavily AU KH

[Crimson Jazz]

Do the majority of the readers that come in the Fanfiction forum only read the Kingdom Hearts fanfics? It seems that those ALWAYS get the most readers.

[Azrael]

Do the majority of the readers that come in the Fanfiction forum only read the Kingdom Hearts fanfics?

Apparently although is it me or that a lot more attention been devoted to original writing?

It's not really much to Kingdom Hearts. Some elements are there but it's in a different setting.

[Ragnell 37]

Eh, my KH fanfic hasn't garnered much attention either (I bet 1/3 of its views are me reading it over again and again and finding every stupid little mistake). I know you read it, though, Azrael. I think the wall of text is a bit intimidating for some people... Anyway, I think KH fics usually get more attention because EVERYONE here knows about KH. Not everyone knows about Power Rangers, or whatever else is here.

I'll try to read through you guys' stories in the next day or so, but what kind of critiques do you want? I'm sorta new here, and on the other forum I'm a member of it's normal to basically dissect each post and comment on recurring errors, blatant mistakes, and other big problems; but I haven't seen much of that here. Do you guys want grammar critiques or just more broad plot-line critiques?

[madammina]

For HCTB I want everything. I know I have some grammar issues that I have to work on (and if I'm using something in argument, I'll say so and ask people not to argue about it. Or if it's pre me playing 358 and involves the Org.)

But I want the whole shebang. Others, not so much.

Others are just happy with a "SO KAWAII!" ugh.

[Aria]

Well I started writing a fanfic because I can never finish a story. I get to caught up in the characters and forget what I'm supposed to be writing, so I figured it would be easier to write a fanfic(which is more plot driven) just so I can actually finish something.

[Crimson Jazz]

I'll try to read through you guys' stories in the next day or so, but what kind of critiques do you want? I'm sorta new here, and on the other forum I'm a member of it's normal to basically dissect each post and comment on recurring errors, blatant mistakes, and other big problems; but I haven't seen much of that here. Do you guys want grammar critiques or just more broad plot-line critiques?

I'll take whatever kind of critiques you can throw at me. I'm always trying to improve my stories, whether it be plot-related or grammar-related.

[tiamod]

I don't think that i have ever completed a fan-fiction. So far, I've written 3,a kh one canceled (Though elements of the unreleased plot will be in my newest fic), a FFX2 one canceled (But I'm writing another chapter, so the story will at least have an appropriate ending, but i'm hoping people will like it enough to continue it, though I doubt it), and my newest fic, which the second chapter of was released last night.

But yeah, I love writing, more than I used to, Originally I just did it cuz I was semi-interested and a friend convinced me to, but now I love it, though I kinda prefer Song/Poetry to Fics/Novels, but yeah here's a link to my story, I really want some good constructive criticism.


http://forums.khinsider.com/fanficti...-assassin.html

[Azrael]

You think you need it? I need it to!

http://forums.khinsider.com/fanficti...nd-azrael.html

http://forums.khinsider.com/fanficti...u-fan-fic.html

[Snow]

I also need criticism on all my fics. Particularly my new one XD

What I find is that most stories that have more popularity are written by popular writers, like Bel, regardless of the theme.

So keep writing and you'll probably reach the popular group XD I'm aiming for that!

[Ragnell 37]

I also need criticism on all my fics. Particularly my new one XD

What I find is that most stories that have more popularity are written by popular writers, like Bel, regardless of the theme.

So keep writing and you'll probably reach the popular group XD I'm aiming for that!

I'll look yours over right now. You're talking about the Pariah Sect, right? I read the first chapter a bit ago, and it seemed really good.

And yeah, it seems like popular writers get most of the attention. I'm struggling to find readers for my story, Kingdom Hearts D, too. Of course, the fact that I'm fairly new here and haven't updated in a week doesn't help anything. It just so happened that as soon as I started getting into my story, my teachers decided to start loading on homework.

[Exvind]

Aye. Finding readers is the tricky part it seems.

[Audo]

So, just want to say that I think people doing their dialogue/story in "script" format is rather lazy.

CHARACTERNAME: DIALOGUE

I mean. It can't even really be called "script format" because that's nothing like what real scripts are like.