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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hiding from the summer sun, and trapped in my own world; it's actually kinda scary here....
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Skitty: I don't Final Fantasy X nor it's character, or this song. I'll be needing you to play "Forgive Me" by Evanescene. And no, I'm not trying to make this perfect, I've had this idea in my head for a while now anyhow. Slightly out of character for Tidus and Yuna, and yes, it's going to be fluffy; but I'm not quite sure for who. Summary: When Yuna and Tidus gets into a huge fight, she thrusts a barb that deals deadly damage at her boyfriend. Yuna finally realizes what she said, and the problem is that Yuna has no clue how to go to him and beg for forgiveness. Will Tidus accept her apology or will he turn Yuna away by thrusting her barb right back at her? ---------- Forgive Me "What are you talking about?" Whipping around cold fire in their pools, the other snarled, "I told you! I hate you with all my heart, Tidus. I wish I had never met you, I have never cared for you are all. You are so annoying, so please do me a favor. Leave me alone!" She watched while the dirty blond stood frozen, she was happy with what she had done. Turning to leave the stretch of the Calm Lands they had been standing at, Yuna felt strange with her harsh words, stopping she listened while Tidus choked, "Yu... Yuna, how co... could you have done this? I thought we were friends. I thought you cared about me. Here I was thinking that we would never do anything to hurt each other." Shaking her head, Yuna glared over her shoulder and spat, "You think I honestly care? I would not mind if you went through and just disappeared!" Stalking off, Yuna could've sworn that she heard tears falling, she listened to some of the choked pleas. Ignoring them this time, the brunette headed back to the camp site she and her friends had made. On the way she railed silently, Who does he think he is, my father? I cannot believe he would be such a jerk and try to control me! Betrayal coming to her eyes, Yuna thought, Will any of the others understand? Maybe Rikku, but than again she is hitting on Tidus; fine, she can have that jerk! Reaching them she scanned the clearing, spotting her blond-haired hyper cousin, she motioned for her to come forward. Watching while she bounced over, Yuna tapped her foot impatiently, glaring at the blond she snapped, "'Bout time you got over here!" She listened with cold satisfaction at Rikku's startled squeak. "Yunie, what happened to you? Did Tidus do something to hurt you?" Her eyes blazing at the nickname and his name, she trained her icy stare on her cousin and hissed, "No, and you can have that jerk, I don't want him. Hear me?" Yuna looked around at the others, there was Lulu, Wakka, Auron (who was currently out somewhere) and Kimahri, that was besides her cousin, Rikku, and Tidus. Meeting Lulu's scarlet gaze, she shifted it to the forest floor. Shrugging her shoulders at Kimahri and Wakka's comments, Yuna listened to Lulu as she spoke softly, "Yuna, you and Tidus just got into a fight, didn't you?" Lifting her head, Yuna nodded it, the twilit scenery would have normally made her smile; but today she was sulky. Heaving a sigh, Yuna listened as Lulu continued in the soft voice, this time it also carried a stern note as she spoke, "You shouldn't have yelled at him, Yuna. He does care deeply for you, or don't you know about the poetry?" Looking at her sister-figure with widened eyes, she titled her head slight, then Yuna asked softly, "Poetry?" "Yes, he wrote one a little while ago, I saw him doing it." Her ire right back up, Yuna glared at the black mage and sneered, "Yeah, so? I truly don't care for him!" Hearing footsteps behind her, she whipped around and met hurt blue pools with blazing green and blue. Spinning back around she snorted, "Jerk!" "Yuna..." Looking over her shoulder, to see him miserably slink over to stand next to Wakka. Yuna flinched at the glare, part of her wanted to go and ask for forgiveness but she just couldn't bring herself to do it. "Yuna!" Turning to face Kimahri, she saw the defiant look of disapproval in the gold eyes. His soft, silk blue fur and white pelt on his head made her worry. Yuna couldn't understand while Kimahri continued in his cold voice, "Yuna messed up with Tidus, Yuna must apologize for Yuna mistakes or Kimahri is leaving Yuna to take care of Yuna self." (trying to get as close to how he talks in the game) Rage glowing in her eyes, she whipped around and stalked off, she needed to cool down in the lake. Yuna wasn't sure what was going on, reaching the cool, soft glowing lake. Slipping in with her garments still on, she thought about all the bitter things she had screamed. What's the matter with you, Yuna? You don't care about Tidus in any sense at all, why would you even cry if he was to disappear. He's never cared how you felt, so why should you care about him? She thought, as a single, pearly tear fell making her realize that she was deeply hurt. "I'm sorry, Tidus," she breathed. "Yuna, would it be alright?" Shaking her head, she didn't feel like facing anyone at the moment. She could have screamed as the person continued, "You know what, fine! Be that way Yuna! I truly could care less what happens to you at the moment!" Her tears cascaded into the lake, soft noises escaping her. Yuna looked over her shoulder and called, "Wait!" Turning to face him, she saw that once again she had stunned him into silence. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to say all those things, I am truly sorry for my arrogance. I didn't mean it, any of the words I have spoken." Hearing him move into the spring, Yuna lifted her tear stained face to meet his. Unaware, of that when she had she fell right for his trick. Startled, she was about to pull back; but didn't when she realized how bad she had actually hit him. Yuna wasn't sure how long it had lasted, she felt the water surround her, spinning around and 'round. Yuna saw that Tidus was completely at ease, she was utterly surprised to see him having such a good time. Her head breaking the surface, she looked around to spot Tidus, grinning she swam over and cried, "Tidus!" Hugging him close to her. Yuna mumbled softly, "I'm sorry." "Yuna, there's no need for you to apologize." Hearing the calmness in his voice, her head snapped up as Yuna explained, "No, I was an utter wench to you, Rikku, Lulu; Wakka and Kimarhi!" Feeling him stroke her hair, she heaved a sigh and rest her head on his chest. "Can you forgive me," Yuna questioned, in an almost inaudible whisper. Surprise coming to his eyes, Tidus replied, "Of course I can! I will always be able to forgive you, no matter how bitter the words are." Can you forgive me again? Your my one true friend and I never meant to hurt you ----------- Skitty: I hope you guys liked it, even though it was short and I did it kinda late. G'Night! |
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| アーシェ・バナルガン・ダルマスカ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: イヴァリース Age: 19
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| Ruler of Light | It's very cute!!! I kinda like it!
__________________ I can laugh about it I'd better try to laugh Or I can cry about it You'll never see me cry I should ignore the words you say Cause they can hurt But won't kill me Read my new story! All The Wrong Reasons! Want to be friends? Just Pm me! |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hiding from the summer sun, and trapped in my own world; it's actually kinda scary here....
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Okay Haku, and Lectori; I'll try to get the next chapter up pretty soon. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hiding from the summer sun, and trapped in my own world; it's actually kinda scary here....
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Skitty: I don't own Final Fantasy X, it's characters, nor the song. (I'm sorry, but I just kinda think it works) Click! I'm sorry that it took me so long; I've had a VERY bad case of writer's block lately. Besides I wasn't planning on this to be more than a one-shot; so I had to figure out what to type. Oh yeah this chapter is DEFIANTLY rated PG-13 or M for Mature. -------- Learn To Be Lonely Kimahri felt the welcoming cold of the mountain, the young Ronso had barely won his match with Brian and Yenke. Kimahri had listened to Yuna apology to Tidus, even though he believed that she was only running away; he didn't dare voice his thoughts. Kimahri had pulled ahead of the group with Yuna; the only ones missing were Tidus and Rikku. Pausing he strained his ears to catch someone running toward them. Pulling his spear the blue-furred warrior whipped around to see the young Al-Bhed girl, curiosity coming to his eyes he demanded, "Where is Tidus, Rikku? What has made Rikku so fast to reach Yuna, Auron, Lulu; Wakka and Kimahri?" "Seymour!" At the exclamation, he scented the air to detect a faint smell of an unsent. Looking at Auron with a raised eyebrow, he shook his head and fled back the way Rikku had come. Kimahri listened as Tidus shouted, "Not if I can help it!" "Save some for Kimahri!" he yelled. Skidding to a halt Kimahri smelled something that toward his blood to ice; and it was the smell of blood, Ronso blood. Hanging his head he appeared to be deaf to everything until Seymour said, "A sending, so soon? Allow me to say something to the last Ronso before I leave." Kimarhi heard the evil giggle that escaped the man. He wanted to scream when the Maester continued, "Yours was...truly a gallant race. They threw themselves at me to bar my path," Seymour lifted his arm for effect and spoke coldly, "One...after another...." He lowered his arm, smirked, and then giggled in that evil tone once more. Kimarhi's mind clouding with pain and rage, he choked, "No..." "Kimarhi?" The young woman's soft spoken question didn't cut him; but, what did was when Seymour suggested, "You could end the suffering of this poor Ronso." Yuna wouldn't do that to Kimarhi, would Yuna? he thought. He found brief relief as Yuna screamed, "I don't understand you!" Seymour walked to the edge of the cliff and looked outward as he explained, "Allow Kimahri to die, and release him from his pain. Spira... is a land of suffering and sorrow caught in a spiral of death. To destroy--to heal--Spira, I will become Sin. Yes, with your help. Come with me, Yuna. Once I have become the next Sin, your father will be freed again." His mind was dulled from all this, most of all with exhaustion that had suddenly swept over him. Shaking his head Kimahri just stared at the Maester as he heard Tidus running toward him as he demanded, "What do you know?" Kimarhi's eyes clouding with sorrow he didn't hear anything else, all he knew as that his emotions were fusing together and it was all because of this bastard that he had come to almost trust. His eyes blazing with anger, Kimarhi roared, "You have angered Kimahri! The spirits of the Ronso will guide Kimahri’s spear!" -------- Kimarhi wasn't sure when or how they had defeated Seymour; all he knew was that there was this sharp, torchrous ache in his chest; he looked around to see that he was by himself, finally letting go Kimarhi fell to the ground and let the clear tears slid down his fur as he stared at the sky. "Why Mt. Gagazet! Mt. Gagazet promised that the Ronso tribe would not be hurt by anyone! Mt. Gagazet lied to Kimahri and the Ronso tribe!" roared the young Ronso warrior. Hanging his head he decided that no longer will he speak, not unless he had to and only then will he open his mouth. Getting up he headed for Zanarkand where the others were waiting. Kimarhi wasn't sure but he had a strange sense of danger and that they were going to meet Seymour one final time. If only he knew how right he was. ~-----------~ Skitty: Please forgive me for any spelling errors or anything along that line; I don't think I'm feeling that great and when that happens my writing is off too. Next up: Auron or Lulu; please revive and tell me which one you want. I'll try to cover all of them; but the final chapter is from Tidus' POV.
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| アーシェ・バナルガン・ダルマスカ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: イヴァリース Age: 19
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Rep Power: 13 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | A little short length wise but considering that you weren't feeling all that great I thought you did a overall good job, and nice cliffhanger ending looking forward into seeing how it resolves.
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| Ruler of Light | It's very nice, but I like the first one better... It's too long ago that I played FFX, I don't know what happens next, so I don't really know which POV I want... Choose what you think is the best...
__________________ I can laugh about it I'd better try to laugh Or I can cry about it You'll never see me cry I should ignore the words you say Cause they can hurt But won't kill me Read my new story! All The Wrong Reasons! Want to be friends? Just Pm me! |
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| The warrior | It's been awile since I've read a FFX and I'm glad I read this one.
__________________ ![]() "Life and Death......never really cared either way, I'll just keep livening my life the way I want to and if I die I’ll know I won't have any regrets" "Around here, we don't look backwards for very long. We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we're curious...and curiosity keeps leading us down new paths." I was darkkeyblade123 |
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