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Old 05-07-2008, 12:01 AM   #16
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ok guys here is half of the next chapter!
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??????Where? 25 characters
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i posted it- its chapter 2
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Im lovng this story *cant wait for next part*
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Old 05-08-2008, 03:31 AM   #20
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yay thanks! ill post next installment in a couple days-- gotta alot of homework due monday!
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Old 05-08-2008, 05:43 PM   #21
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The next day, after Roxas and Axel finished their mission, Roxas layed in his room.

He thought about Namine and how she might have the answers to the questions that he asked. He wondered why would Xemnas care if they meet? and how was she able to control sora's memories?

He grew frustrated, the questions kept multiplying and he was getting nowhere. but he needed to start somewhere or with someone.... he needed to talk to Namine. He didnt care about what Xemnas would do to him..he needed to meet her.

But where is she? he thought. She could be anywhere it wasnt like the castle was a small place but then he remembered Marluxia saying that the rebellion was going to meet in the tower. It was his best bet and he didnt have much time. He didnt want Xemnas or even Axel to find out what he was doing.

He had to act fast so nobody would suspect anything...

Roxas walked up to the tower... he tried opening the door but it was locked. So he summoned himself into darkeness.

Roxas appeared in a room that was still like all the other rooms in castle Oblivion, but this one had pictures or drawings all over it. Then he saw her... She was laying down on her bed, looking so beautiful and peaceful in Roxas's mind. He slowly walked up to her, he was memerized by her. Then her lips moved, she had beutiful lips Roxas thought, she muttered "Sora".

Roxas backed up a little. He wondered was she thinking about sora or did she feel his presence. No she was asleep, she didnt even know about Roxas or did she?, Roxas thought.

Then he came by her and kneeled. He looked straight at her. He didnt want to wake her up, she was just so beautiful, he thought.

He looked over and saw one drawing that stood out. He walked up to take a closer look... the drawing looked a lot like him, except he was holding hands with a beautiful blond girl... it was namine. Roxas took the drawing and put it into his pocket. Just as he was about to leave, he saw a portal of darkness appear....it was Axel.

shit. Roxas thought."What the... why you here?" asked Axel. Roxas just glared at Axel, he knew Axel was furious.

Just as Axel was about to confront Roxas they both heard footsteps by the door. Someone was coming. Axel just looked at Roxas and gave him the look to get out of there. Roxas summoned the portal, and then he quickly dissapeared.

The door opened it was Xemnas. Xemnas walked right in giving Axel a cold look. Axel wasnt frightned he knew Xemnas could kill him but he wasnt afraid of him at all.

"Xemnas what are you doing here?" axel questioned.

Xemnas remained cold. "I should ask you the same question, I never assigned you to look out for namine" said Xemnas sounding more colder than before. he walked foward.

"no but you did assign me to inflitrate the Rebellion and thats exactly what im doing" Axel retaliated. Xemnas gave him an odd look.

"The rebellion is planning to use namine in their plans to overthrow the organization." Axel explained.

Xemnas did not seem pleased.

axel continued. "They want namine to control Sora's memories so eventually they can control him and kill all the upper organization members"

Xemnas stayed cold, and he was angry.

"I see...I'm giving you back-up im sending Vexen to help you out, the last thing we need is this" said xemnas.

"why vexen? he'll just add to the problem."

"if he adds to the problem kill him" said Xemnas coldy.

Axel gave Xemnas a wierd look. Wasn't Vexen one of Xemnas's most trusted member? didnt he care if he died even just a little. Axel looked down.

Xemnas smiled-coldy. "Axel remember friendship is just an illusion" said Xemnas.

Axel looked up but he didnt say anything.

then he turned around to face namine. He thought if friendship was an illusion then how come he felt like it was real with roxas?

Xemnas started to walk out.

"Dont you even care about loyalt?" asked Axel slowly.

Xemnas stopped turning his face to his shoulder.

"No, we are nobodies Axel to us even nothing is an illusion"

Axel wondered what did he mean by that? He didnt know what Xemnas was thinking anymore.

beofre xemnas stepped out he stopped again.

"hmm I almost sense a keyblade wielder in our mist" said Xemnas.

shit.Axel thought. He quivered he wasnt afraid of Xemnas but he didn't want anything happening to Roxas.

Xemnas felt Axel's fear. He knew Axel wasnt afraid of him but he Knew why Axel was afraid.
He gave sadistic smile.

Axel turned around not knowing what Xemnas was going to do next.

Then Xemnas turned around and suddenly axel was engulfed by a black sphere, not being able to move.

Axel felt like the life was being pulled out of him like he was losing all his energy.
Axel juts gave Xemnas a dirty look.

"Did Roxas meet Namine, Axel?"

"No"axel said with his losing strength.

Xemnas pulled more energy from Axel.

"If Roxas and Namine meet, not only will I kill you but I will kill them too"

"What makes you think I give a shit?"said Axel angrily.

Xemnas walked closer looking Axel right in the eye. He gave a small sadistic smile.

"because you follow the illusion of friendship"

Axel felt more of his energy taken from him.

"no i follow loyalty" said Axel barely being able to speak.

"then who are you loyal too?"

Xemnas's smile Axel wanted to kill Xemnas.

"I thought you didn't care about loyalty"

"but you do, so who are you loyal too?"

it tooke every amount of life to say what he said next.

"you"

Xemnas gave a sadistic look and got closer, the sphere just seperating Axel and Xemnas.

"then dont screw things up"

the dark sphere dissapeared, Axel fell to the ground kneeling and holding his chest.

Xemnas walked out.

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Old 05-08-2008, 10:52 PM   #22
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Amazing! Just amazing! Kairy!
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Originally Posted by V.A.T.13
14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
RoX: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?

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Old 05-09-2008, 12:28 PM   #23
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Like the mcdonalds commercials bah dah dah dah dahhhhhhhhh Im lovin it ^_^

I like how you made Vexen still on Xemnas side..atleast thats what i see
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I love it keep up the good work
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Old 05-11-2008, 10:43 AM   #25
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Excellent, just excellent. Larxene is such a whore with Marluxia and Axel......ewww!!! Where's the 14th member? I think I read her mentioned but nothing more.
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Originally Posted by V.A.T.13
14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
RoX: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?

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Old 05-13-2008, 07:54 PM   #26
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hey dont worry shes comin lol!
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Old 05-13-2008, 09:39 PM   #27
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But come on! Your story is excellent! Bring us more or I'll.....won't give you cookies!
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Originally Posted by V.A.T.13
14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
RoX: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?

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Old 05-13-2008, 09:40 PM   #28
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ok but give me some feedback ill like to hear what you guys want to happen next o
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Old 05-13-2008, 10:34 PM   #29
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Maybe something of the XIV meeting with Diz/Mickey/ Riku working on getting Roxas to betray the Organization yet is being smitten by feelings of love for our blonde Keyblade Master. Xemnas begins to give the two more missions together and Axel soon becomes left out.
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Originally Posted by V.A.T.13
14th hovers over Rox' bed.
14th: What is your purpose anyway? I think they're hiding something from you...
Rox: Ehh?!
Axel: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN ROX'S ROOM?!
RoX: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?

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Old 05-13-2008, 10:49 PM   #30
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ok i have writers block give me a day and i will come back! sry anti!
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