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Old 05-01-2008, 01:46 PM   #31
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Well,that sounds like fun!

Enjoy your trip,especially because you don't have to go to school on Monday xD
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Old 05-01-2008, 02:01 PM   #32
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Thanks, Blue.

See you all on monday or Tuesday with a new poem. =D
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Old 05-01-2008, 02:04 PM   #33
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Yup,I'm already looking forward to it
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Old 05-01-2008, 02:25 PM   #34
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Nice poems, but they're better in Dutch.
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Old 05-01-2008, 03:22 PM   #35
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Aww. . .. there's another language I shall never understand. . .like Japanese . .
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Old 05-06-2008, 06:41 PM   #36
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Too bad, Chosen.

And yeah...page 3! WTF! High time for something new, lads! =D

So yeah, once again this turned out completely different than I first wanted...looks pretty random at the moment, but I somehow like it. Don't know why.

Well, here we go!:


A storm will rise tonight

Whispers of wood
Shadows by fire
An inspired mood
Letters for sire

Scents of old books
Of ink, gentle flames
An old man by looks
With half a dozen names

Rooms within rooms
Doors made of doors
Keys out of keys
And warmth within rain

Mystery and Unknown
Will write tonight a poem
sheltered by surrounding walls
listening to sounds of rain

A poem

A quiet screaming storm

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Old 05-06-2008, 07:47 PM   #37
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

That was pretty good! I loved that one! It's the best one so far. Not like I know much about poetry anyway. But still.
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Old 05-06-2008, 08:09 PM   #38
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Thanks, Spyells! =D
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Old 05-06-2008, 08:39 PM   #39
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

I checked out your poetry guide. It's pretty good. I'm going to give some of your hints and tips a try the next time I try to write poetry.
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Old 05-07-2008, 06:37 PM   #40
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Meh, I need to actually rewrite the whole thing...what I posted was just the beginning sheet. :3
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Old 05-08-2008, 10:41 AM   #41
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Much love to that poem.
Its awesome. <3
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Old 05-08-2008, 02:12 PM   #42
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Why thank you! =D
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Old 05-09-2008, 06:21 AM   #43
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

I like your new poem a lot.Probably one of your best. <3
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Old 05-10-2008, 10:25 PM   #44
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

Thanks Blue.

I'll be writing a new one soon, a thought is building in my mind, and I think it'll explode not too much later from now. xD
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Old 05-12-2008, 04:21 AM   #45
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Default Re: GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

New one. =)

I was listening to some old songs I used to love. Classical music, good to fall asleep with, you got to love it. But as I was listening I suddenly remembered...a girl whom I used to love, but since recently left my life for what I think is for ever. And...while thinking of her, combined with the music, thoughts of...melancholy floated into my mind. I needed to write this down, so...this one I dedicate to her.

Btw, the music I was listening to was, among others, Memory of Fanelia: The soundtrack of the anime Escaflowne. You really should listen to it sometime.


Flown away Memories

My heart,
My heart is wavering.
Remembering or so it seems.
Those times long forgotten,
Times long gone.

My heart,
My heart is longing.
Eagering or so it seems.
For your touch long forgotten,
Your touch that I miss.

This song,
This song is whispering.
A melody or so it seems.
A melody of love...
A melody for you.

This feeling.
Yes, this feeling.
Melancholy or so it seems.
Is wanting to tell me,
These memories of us.

Us?
Yes, us.
Happinness or so it seemed.
But, this is just a mere glimp...
Of times long forgotten,
Times long gone.

...

Tonight I remembered you...
Tommorrow you are gone.

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Do you remember that first time
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Your feet barely touched the ground?

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Tommorrow is mystery!

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