KHI's Beta Reader request Thread.(Come here to ask for C & C for your story) - Page 2

bizness86 · 04-09-2008, 12:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Grimmjow Jaggerjack

What part of your fic exactly do you want C&C for? Act 2?

all of the mentioned chapters would be nice (or the general pace of the story), but I'm not expecting the CC anytime soon, or I'm not expecting anyone to read it all anyways. Or better yet, reading whichever you'd like and then post a remark. Thank you.

Grimmjow Jaggerjack · 04-09-2008, 12:55 PM

What is the newest part/chapter/act? I'll comment on that one.

But, in the first place this is a thread to help you advance, and help you improve your story by commenting on it before it is posted. We do comment on stories that have just a few chapters and need help to continue, or on stories that have been quiet for a while and want to continue again. I don't think we are supposed to review stories that are already completed and posted. Nothing to change there anymore, right?

bizness86 · 04-09-2008, 01:28 PM

In that case, Act 2 is the newest. The link is on the previous page, or in my sig.

-Arcana-X- · 04-09-2008, 01:57 PM

Thanks for making the thread, Allstargamer!
May I be a beta-tester as well?

**All-Star Gamer** · 04-09-2008, 02:13 PM

I'll Add you Arcana-X.

And biziness, that's way too much! The entire idea is to take what advice and guidence you've been given and apply it! this is a service to help you learn, not to be your personal review crew.

bizness86 · 04-09-2008, 02:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by All-Star Gamer

And biziness, that's way too much! The entire idea is to take what advice and guidance you've been given and apply it! this is a service to help you learn, not to be your personal review crew.

lmao. Good job on calling me out. I didn't ask for a review crew. That's not going to happen. I wasn't expecting anyone to read all of them anyways; that's why I stated that any one of the chapters listed would have been nice, and I said that it would be nice if someone were to read all of them. If a person want to review how a story is progressing, then it's always helpful to know where a story has come from.

Also, when asked by Grimmjow, I believe I stated that Act 2 would have been fine (which only has one chapter so far), since he wanted to comment on the latest chapter.

Thanks

EDIT: Could I be added to the list of beta-readers as well, though I may not be on as much as others.

Dragonstar1715 · 04-09-2008, 06:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grimmjow Jaggerjack

Links please? Or haven't you posted it yet?

Links are in my sig, but if you need them posted up, I can do that

Grimmjow Jaggerjack · 04-09-2008, 06:41 PM

Its ok, bizness86, I'll take a look at the chapter of Act 2 later on.

As for Dragonstar, links in your sig are enough. I may take a look at it, but I'm kind off busy, and are also already checking up on bizness' story, so maybe another beta-reader can help you out. =)

**All-Star Gamer** · 04-10-2008, 12:42 PM

I'll check it out later today if I feel up to it.

Maverick E.S · 04-10-2008, 09:31 PM

[Virus]
[Nick aka Maverick E.S]
[Today]
[The prologue(so far) its on the last page]*
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...591-virus.html

**All-Star Gamer** · 04-10-2008, 09:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maverick E.S

[Virus]
[Nick aka Maverick E.S]
[Today]
[The prologue(so far) its on the last page]*
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...591-virus.html

Okay, I left you something. Not much, considering how well it was done.

Takushi Rena · 04-12-2008, 01:33 AM

I'm going to sound so rude when I say this, so... *gives cookie now* D8;;

I don't mean to sound rude at all, BUT if you're going to ask me to do anything with this thread in a pestering sort of way, you'll have to spell my username right before I do anything with this. :d I'll gladly sticky this, but spell my name right first! 8D; Thank yew!

I also have a suggestion to make on the beta request form. To make things easier in advance and save some stories later, why not put a section on there of specifically what the writer's need improvement on in their stories? At the moment, the beta reader's only purpose in this thread is improvement with grammar because anything else was mentioned. Some writers may be looking for specific areas that they need help with, and grammar might not necessarily be one of them. There's many things that writers want improved when it comes to beta reading, like content/character development, dialogue, plot flow, description, etc. That's just my suggestion, though. :d

Otherwise... ZOMG I NEED A BETA ANYONE WANT TO BE MY BETA I'LL MAKE A FORM D: Not specifically sure which story yet, but I guess... >.>... <.<... THIS ONE IT SHALL BEEEE!

[Pieces of Heart]
[Takushi Rena]
[1/29/08]
[Chapter 7 (currently unposted; must send to beta)]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ces-heart.html]

And, for what I want to improve in my story? Dialogue, grammar, character development, and story flow, specifically one part in the chapter!

Thank you in advance to anyone willing to be my beta for this chapter! :D

**All-Star Gamer** · 04-12-2008, 12:04 PM

^Sorry about all that.

But that link doesn't seem to work.

**Frozen Fate** · 04-12-2008, 12:23 PM

Great idea. You want me to help, ASG?

**All-Star Gamer** · 04-12-2008, 01:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frozen Fate

Great idea. You want me to help, ASG?

Sure. Do you want to be a beta reader?

And if anybody has any ideas on how to improve the thread, don't hesitate to let me know.

04-09-2008, 01:28 PM	#18
bizness86 Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Feb 2008 Age: 22 Gender: Posts: 203 Rep Power: 1 Scan RPG Profile	Re: KHI's Beta Reader request Thread.(Come here to ask for C & C for your story) In that case, Act 2 is the newest. The link is on the previous page, or in my sig. __________________ The Cold Critic, The Heartless Lord FAN FIC - Shines One Year After Jiminy's Journal, Act 1, Act 2

04-09-2008, 01:57 PM	#19
-Arcana-X- Organization Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: in my room, waiting for a DS, then TWEWY here i COME!!! Gender: Posts: 484 Rep Power: 1 Scan RPG Profile	Re: KHI's Beta Reader request Thread.(Come here to ask for C & C for your story) Thanks for making the thread, Allstargamer! May I be a beta-tester as well?

04-10-2008, 09:31 PM	#25
Maverick E.S Virus Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In the rain Age: 15 Gender: Posts: 1,359 Rep Power: 3 Scan RPG Profile	Re: KHI's Beta Reader request Thread.(Come here to ask for C & C for your story) [Virus] [Nick aka Maverick E.S] [Today] [The prologue(so far) its on the last page]* http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...591-virus.html __________________ Haku made the sig, thanks man! :p Long live TTG

04-12-2008, 01:33 AM	#27
Takushi Rena THREE MINUTES CLAPPING Join Date: May 2004 Location: TIME! i won't ever give in no matter how hard you pull me in Age: 7 Gender: Posts: 4,084 Rep Power: 10	Re: KHI's Beta Reader request Thread.(Come here to ask for C & C for your story) I'm going to sound so rude when I say this, so... gives cookie now D8;; I don't mean to sound rude at all, BUT if you're going to ask me to do anything with this thread in a pestering sort of way, you'll have to spell my username right before I do anything with this. :d I'll gladly sticky this, but spell my name right first! 8D; Thank yew! I also have a suggestion to make on the beta request form. To make things easier in advance and save some stories later, why not put a section on there of specifically what the writer's need improvement on in their stories? At the moment, the beta reader's only purpose in this thread is improvement with grammar because anything else was mentioned. Some writers may be looking for specific areas that they need help with, and grammar might not necessarily be one of them. There's many things that writers want improved when it comes to beta reading, like content/character development, dialogue, plot flow, description, etc. That's just my suggestion, though. :d Otherwise... ZOMG I NEED A BETA ANYONE WANT TO BE MY BETA I'LL MAKE A FORM D: Not specifically sure which story yet, but I guess... >.>... <.<... THIS ONE IT SHALL BEEEE! [Pieces of Heart] [Takushi Rena] [1/29/08] [Chapter 7 (currently unposted; must send to beta)] [http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ces-heart.html] And, for what I want to improve in my story? Dialogue, grammar, character development, and story flow, specifically one part in the chapter! Thank you in advance to anyone willing to be my beta for this chapter! :D __________________ [.deviantart.] [.livejournal.] [.artwork.] [.betwixt + between.] - {working} "nothing is ever meant to be like this." .BETWIXT + BETWEEN. - [prologue] all that's left of us now is a nightmare the others. - andthespiritswake. [chpt1 - rewrite in progress] "The more you like yourself, the less you are like anyone else, which makes you unique." Walt Disney Last edited by Takushi Rena; 04-12-2008 at 12:06 PM.

04-12-2008, 12:23 PM	#29
Frozen Fate The Devil's Advocate Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Philadelphia suburbs Age: 14 Gender: Posts: 3,977 Rep Power: 7 Scan RPG Profile	Re: KHI's Beta Reader request Thread.(Come here to ask for C & C for your story) Great idea. You want me to help, ASG? __________________ please ignore any bad typing i have. i fractured my wrist and cant type well. Wonderful work made by Cherry

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