~~My OrganizationXIII member~~

[Blue Sky]

Forgive me for saying that,but Zexion looks a bit weird here.I think it's mainly because of his hair,it doesn't look like his hair at all o_O

The colouring looks like as though he's a ghost!xD It may be just me,though..

[Maverick E.S]

I agree with the hair but everything else is great keep it up :p

[Fatal_Blade]

He does look like a ghost mainly because you made his head see-through.

[gexion]

~Yea I know what you all mean by Zexy-ghosty....It was first attempt in photoshop..I colored whole pic for first time in phot7.0......but it's not that bad >.<I like him a lot to be honest ;D
OH!And about his hair you may be right,but i think it's personal opinion.There's nothing I can do to change yur mind buddies.
If you have any tips about how to make clearer the linearts in photoshop don't hesitate to tell me too =D
Actualyl that's what I ask...some tips or ideas

[Obscured fire]

Those are rly good,and don't worry about the "ghost" thingys^^
It's the way you colored them and just that.
It's your style,and no one can critique it,i personaly like it,there are some mistakes alright,but i am not in position to say that,cause i ain't drawing so nice.
Keep up the good job and i am sure you'll definately pown ^^

[gexion]

Heyo,Obscured Fire.I know that he looks a little fady...that's because i used the light above his head , on right hand...and the cost of using that effect was to make him almost invisble,like an illusionXD
But don't say stuff like I ain't draw so nice..it's not true.Anyone can draw,anyone can dance,can do anything.style makes him unique and that's all about.
I will work more in photoshop buddies :D
Have a nice day!~~

[╬ProperArtist╬]

I'll say this. your skill with colored pencil is very nice indeed, I especially like the Gaara (the hair's details and the shades on his strap is amazing) and the created member of OrgXIII (i especially like the highlights and tones you've created within her hair)

the Zexion picture could be a little bit better, maybe smooth out the edges, add more tones and some shading. I'd work a little bit more with photoshop i guess.

The chibis picture is pretty nice, you've got nice highlights, maybe a little too many, but overall it looks pretty good

^^

[gexion]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

I'll say this. your skill with colored pencil is very nice indeed, I especially like the Gaara (the hair's details and the shades on his strap is amazing) and the created member of OrgXIII (i especially like the highlights and tones you've created within her hair)

the Zexion picture could be a little bit better, maybe smooth out the edges, add more tones and some shading. I'd work a little bit more with photoshop i guess.

The chibis picture is pretty nice, you've got nice highlights, maybe a little too many, but overall it looks pretty good

^^

~~Roger OogieBoogie.That's waht I was going to do afterall.More work in photoshop!!!!
I appreciate that you liked Gaara and my memb...indeed,they took the most of my time to b done.
ABout highlights,it's true.I put some extra ones ...it was so hard for me to ignore them..but I was careful not to
make them superduperextrajuper exagerating..
I'll keep it up though^^

[gexion]

This time we have a little tribut-pic to Roxas and Namine^.^-
So I shoot it =D~
Bringing light in your heart by ~mangangelo on deviantART

[RikuxSora_Lover]

Hmm... Ha ha how should i say it??? XDDDD Umm... Roxas seems to be "bigger" than Namine, or is it just me??
But awesome coloring and idea as always gexion-san! =DDD

[lonekyuubi]

Their good but work on the coloring and anatomy. The best coloring you have done in my opinion is the gaara one.

[gexion]

~Alright I know that boys are supposed to be bigger than girls and i like drawing them like this..but this time i think i made roxas a little toooo much taller than usual.But nvm....you can get easier the idea of 'protective'Roxas;3
XDD Thanx RxS_Lover-san!!!=3
I will check out your artwork too..
Heyo lonekyuubi!Hmmm,my best work was in Gaara's pic heh?I will try to make even better ones:D~

[RikuxSora_Lover]

Yay! Ur welcome ;3 *bear hug!!!* Bu, yeah, just updated it XDDD
BTW, wanna be buddies??? ;)
Oh and don't call me with "san" ok?? I'm still primary 6 ya know probably still 12 years oldXDDDD
So just call me with "chan" XDDDDDD

[Blue Sky]

The colouring looks good,but Roxas does not look like Roxas in my opinion.

It's a sweet pic,overall you did a good job =D

[Gildragon]

WOW its been a long time since we talked. Nice work you got here.