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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jan 2007
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | sorry about before...but here is some new stuff that ive been working on! I hope you like it a bday present for my friend ![]() a quick animation ![]() Last edited by ansemcontainer; 01-26-2008 at 02:21 AM. |
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| Ruler of Light Join Date: Feb 2007 Age: 14
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Animation is simple but good. Someone can use it for an avatar xD. Ok time for some "pointers". First off Namine looks weird. I guess its because you had a limited space for her but still try to work on her some more and make her a bit more "girlish". She kinda looks like a boy right now. I would work on Soras hand a bit. Looks a bit sloopy there. Donald and Goofy are great IMO. Also Sora looks a bit "cross eyed" might want to work on that. Also the shoulder on the left seems kinda just "attached. Work on these things and you will get better. But if you were not looking for "pointers" disregard my paragraph XD
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| Organization Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 20
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | I do like it there is something very unique about it. |
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| Speed lvl- snail Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Where angels lose their way Age: 15
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | the coloring's nice ^^ but you got to improve namine ^^;; lonekyubbi pointed the stuff you should fix so.... cant critique anymore ^^;;; but i like the animation :3 |
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| Keyblade Novice Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: The Next Life.
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | Eh I like your colouring!!! :DD But I think Sora's eyes are too close to each other and Namine needs a wee bit of improvement. Goofy's expression is so funny~! XDD and the animation is kawaii~ |
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| 16.10. | Colouring's good,Namine could have been better and you might want to improve on Sora's eyes. The animation's cute =3
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jan 2007
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | XD Namine was a last minute thing. but im finished with that pic for good... here is some more stuff aqua and master xehanorts hand ![]() pic animation for band ![]() |
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| iAmM Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Earth. Age: 17
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Aqua looks like a man. Oh, I like the first picture. Very nice.
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jan 2007
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | XD i draw this stuff with pen XD the namine and aqua were not done with pencil but sora was.... XD but im tryin to draw girls better here is some more stuff first pixal animation a quick cg ![]() |
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| 16.10. | The colourings' great again,but you could work more on the facial expression.They're kinda....scary,if you ask me. And,is it just me or does the nose look a bit too big?
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jan 2007
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | i always seem to make noses big XD in fact i did a great pic with amazin shading and everything but i messed up on the nose XD here is a really old animation xemnas animation ![]() |
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| 16.10. | ^That's a cute animation... ^_^ I really like the SD style,so if I would rate it,I'd give you a 8/10
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In a house. Playing guitar or drawing. Age: 13
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | For the first pic...I think you got that pose from the COM manga, right? Well the eye is a little to close to the other one. Goofy &Donald are awesome :D And...yeah, Namine looks a little masculine. The Aqua one... o.o I doesn't look like her. It looks waay to manly... The last one I like :] But the hood looks a little to puffy. BTW. Your coloring is awesome. Just need to work on feminine faces and expressions. EDIT: I love the Xemnas animation xD It look so cute :3
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jan 2007
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | omg people like my stuff.... well here is one i just did this on the computer. i dont have a tablet so this took me about an hour or so well here it is.... it supposed to look like what i think nomura would draw aqua's first character sketch. so here it is ![]() i kno i messed up a bit. but i still like it. i will color it soon edit: here is a version 2 with smaller eyes ![]() Last edited by ansemcontainer; 12-06-2007 at 08:00 PM. Reason: to post in a picture |
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| Ruler of Light Join Date: Feb 2007 Age: 14
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | ^Try drawing more females that way. Its a serious improvement. :D
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