Dreams

Ashley · 05-14-2008, 12:25 AM

Don't let go of your dream by *Ashley425 on deviantART

Inspired by a friend of mine who's goal is to become a great musician :] Any comments/criticisms are greatly appreciated!

**Nelo Angelo** · 05-14-2008, 09:18 AM

My goodness girl, you never fail to impress. That is very good. I like it.
The guy looks a bit like Light too, hehe. Excellent Ashley.

Ray · 05-14-2008, 11:05 AM

Right side of the guitar is a bit blocky.
Otherwise, it's nice. I'd prefer a guitar with a bit more spice, but that seems to work pretty well

Ashley · 05-14-2008, 06:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sparkle Motion

Right side of the guitar is a bit blocky.
Otherwise, it's nice. I'd prefer a guitar with a bit more spice, but that seems to work pretty well

Ah, true. I'm sure I could have made the guitar more interesting. My friend plays acoustic so I just imagined a simple acoustic guitar xD

And thanks!

kairigirl · 05-14-2008, 09:42 PM

I think that type of guitar is fine; it matches the color tones very well. Had you used the more interesting look of electric guitars or other some sort, I would have expected the rest of it to be more wild and bright. Perhaps it's just how I associate things, but other than the blockiness, it's fine.

Very nice! I like how your eye looks from him to the flowers and then back up again. At one time I really like the plain pattern in the background, but then others I think it might have needed a little more spice, such as other instruments or more depth even. Overall very good! Makes me want to draw now instead of play my game.

Ashley · 05-15-2008, 06:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kairigirl

Very nice! I like how your eye looks from him to the flowers and then back up again. At one time I really like the plain pattern in the background, but then others I think it might have needed a little more spice, such as other instruments or more depth even. Overall very good! Makes me want to draw now instead of play my game.

I thought about adding other instruments, but my friend only plays the guitar so it wouldn't quite fit xD Thanks for the feedback!

╬ProperArtist╬ · 05-15-2008, 07:15 PM

I love this piece. My only gripe is that it looks flat. That's most likely what you intended, but I dunno it not really having much shading distracts me a bit, that's just my opinion. It's still a fantastic picture I personally just like shading haha.

Fatal_Blade · 05-16-2008, 05:37 PM

Great job, I like the flow you have going on.

Blue Sky · 05-17-2008, 11:17 AM

This is fantastic work Ashley!
I always wonder from where you get the ideas to draw such pics... xD

The colouring's especially awesome,I like it! v.v

05-14-2008, 12:25 AM	#1
Ashley \| P \| Join Date: May 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 301 Rep Power: 3	Dreams Don't let go of your dream by *Ashley425 on deviantART Inspired by a friend of mine who's goal is to become a great musician :] Any comments/criticisms are greatly appreciated!

05-14-2008, 09:18 AM	#2
Nelo Angelo He shall rise once more.. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: City Of The Ancients A.K.A The Forgotten City Posts: 3,137 Rep Power: 6	Re: Dreams My goodness girl, you never fail to impress. That is very good. I like it. The guy looks a bit like Light too, hehe. Excellent Ashley. __________________ Nelo Angelo (By Total Darkness) Join In With the Elite In Our Hour of Chaos and Reign of Terror. Join The C.S.E.D Group (By Ultima Star) *THE ENIGMA OF EXTREME*

05-14-2008, 11:05 AM	#3
Ray Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 3,475 Rep Power: 7	Re: Dreams Right side of the guitar is a bit blocky. Otherwise, it's nice. I'd prefer a guitar with a bit more spice, but that seems to work pretty well __________________ currentlyplaying Rival Schools Rock Band Call of Duty 4

05-14-2008, 09:42 PM	#5
kairigirl Not here, be back August Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Lost in my own Daydreams; or a Box. :/ Age: 19 Posts: 4,269 Rep Power: 9	Re: Dreams I think that type of guitar is fine; it matches the color tones very well. Had you used the more interesting look of electric guitars or other some sort, I would have expected the rest of it to be more wild and bright. Perhaps it's just how I associate things, but other than the blockiness, it's fine. Very nice! I like how your eye looks from him to the flowers and then back up again. At one time I really like the plain pattern in the background, but then others I think it might have needed a little more spice, such as other instruments or more depth even. Overall very good! Makes me want to draw now instead of play my game. __________________ ^Cherry Dreamers may fade but the dreams won't so long as there is a dreamer to uphold it. Forever and ever, thrilled and glad I shall be so long as you're with me. The pen may be mightier than the sword but only if one reads it. You only have fun if you want to have fun. Colors make the world go round. Doomination Art Studios ~kairigirl~ Pressie by Prod

05-15-2008, 07:15 PM	#7
╬ProperArtist╬ Why So Serious!? Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Wait What? Age: 19 Posts: 2,510 Rep Power: 5	Re: Dreams I love this piece. My only gripe is that it looks flat. That's most likely what you intended, but I dunno it not really having much shading distracts me a bit, that's just my opinion. It's still a fantastic picture I personally just like shading haha. __________________ PsN ID: gregman07 MGO ID: +ProperArtist+ Jynx#7 of the Exiled Order My Deviantart Page

05-16-2008, 05:37 PM	#8
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: ?? Age: 15 Posts: 1,963 Rep Power: 4	Re: Dreams Great job, I like the flow you have going on. __________________ vBeautiful sig made by Kaz Avy made by me PSN ID: Arien_Blade 致命的な刃

05-17-2008, 11:17 AM	#9
Blue Sky Angelic Pretty Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany ♪ Age: 19 Posts: 2,613 Rep Power: 5	Re: Dreams This is fantastic work Ashley! I always wonder from where you get the ideas to draw such pics... xD The colouring's especially awesome,I like it! v.v __________________ "Ich danke dir... nur deinetwegen hat es aufgehört zu regnen." Avi made by Xelhes. Sig made by Zook. More tags from the Spiral Dream Designs artists: ♪ ♥

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