Old 05-14-2008, 12:25 AM   #1
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Don't let go of your dream by *Ashley425 on deviantART

Inspired by a friend of mine who's goal is to become a great musician :] Any comments/criticisms are greatly appreciated!
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Old 05-14-2008, 09:18 AM   #2
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My goodness girl, you never fail to impress. That is very good. I like it.
The guy looks a bit like Light too, hehe. Excellent Ashley.
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Old 05-14-2008, 11:05 AM   #3
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Right side of the guitar is a bit blocky.
Otherwise, it's nice. I'd prefer a guitar with a bit more spice, but that seems to work pretty well
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Right side of the guitar is a bit blocky.
Otherwise, it's nice. I'd prefer a guitar with a bit more spice, but that seems to work pretty well
Ah, true. I'm sure I could have made the guitar more interesting. My friend plays acoustic so I just imagined a simple acoustic guitar xD

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Old 05-14-2008, 09:42 PM   #5
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I think that type of guitar is fine; it matches the color tones very well. Had you used the more interesting look of electric guitars or other some sort, I would have expected the rest of it to be more wild and bright. Perhaps it's just how I associate things, but other than the blockiness, it's fine.

Very nice! I like how your eye looks from him to the flowers and then back up again. At one time I really like the plain pattern in the background, but then others I think it might have needed a little more spice, such as other instruments or more depth even. Overall very good! Makes me want to draw now instead of play my game.
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Very nice! I like how your eye looks from him to the flowers and then back up again. At one time I really like the plain pattern in the background, but then others I think it might have needed a little more spice, such as other instruments or more depth even. Overall very good! Makes me want to draw now instead of play my game.
I thought about adding other instruments, but my friend only plays the guitar so it wouldn't quite fit xD Thanks for the feedback!
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Old 05-15-2008, 07:15 PM   #7
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I love this piece. My only gripe is that it looks flat. That's most likely what you intended, but I dunno it not really having much shading distracts me a bit, that's just my opinion. It's still a fantastic picture I personally just like shading haha.
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Great job, I like the flow you have going on.
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Old 05-17-2008, 11:17 AM   #9
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This is fantastic work Ashley!
I always wonder from where you get the ideas to draw such pics... xD

The colouring's especially awesome,I like it! v.v
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