Twilight 93 Creations - Page 2

Rhapsody Flows · 05-08-2008, 10:47 PM

Hmm, a good start, though, since it's just Shiki's face, I really don't know how it'll turn out until it's finished. ^^"

Grimmjow Jaggerjack · 05-08-2008, 11:13 PM

Neku looks awesome now, but the hair still disturbes me. Its harder now you already drew something else behind him, but I would've suggested to erase the top part of the hair and totally redraw in a more natural way.

Blue Sky · 05-09-2008, 06:03 AM

It's very good.You drew the pic in Kingdom Hearts style,am I right?
That's why I won't say anything about his feet,body and arms. ;D

3/5.

**Nelo Angelo** · 05-09-2008, 09:16 AM

Now that does look a little better. Impressive stuff.

Twilight93 · 05-09-2008, 05:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Sky

It's very good.You drew the pic in Kingdom Hearts style,am I right?
That's why I won't say anything about his feet,body and arms. ;D

3/5.

No, well yes in a sense. It's from the game "The World Ends With You" and the art designer is the same for both TWEWY and Kingdom Hearts.

**Nelo Angelo** · 05-09-2008, 08:34 PM

That competiton has ended though i thought..

**Sir Schmoopy** · 05-10-2008, 01:39 PM

WTF is on his left foot?
Other then that 4/5.

Fatal_Blade · 05-10-2008, 05:24 PM

The body looks great, nice job. 4/5.

Agent007 · 05-10-2008, 05:31 PM

Wow man thats really awesome. Good job.

*monkeybutt* · 05-10-2008, 05:59 PM

The only thing that needs improvement is the face. =) Good job on the clothes! Your to the point in skill where you can start developing your own style.

bubbles · 05-10-2008, 07:48 PM

very nice i give it 5 out of 5

InfiniteTwilight · 05-10-2008, 07:59 PM

Looks pretty good! Some stuff could use some work like the face, but still apretty pretty good.

Twilight93 · 05-29-2008, 10:58 PM

*Edited main post and title. New pictures added too. Will add Iron Man as soon as I finish.

whtballerking13 · 05-30-2008, 06:20 PM

I have to say, I don't really like any part of it except for the hand that is coming out from the picture, if you are going to compy directly off of the guy from "the world ends with you", then you could have done a way beter job. It just looks to sloppy. that girl that is being added behind him looks weird. The marvel pictures look like junk that any body could through together while half asleep with a broken pencil in the middle of class.

I know, I am a really hard critic, that is just the way i have always been sry

Grimmjow Jaggerjack · 05-30-2008, 06:45 PM

^That is not giving critisism, that is just plain saying you don't like it in a really asshole kind off way. Critisim is pointing out the flaws of something, and giving tips to improve that, not just saying you don't like it. I'm surprised you call yourself a 'critic'...lol. Seriously.

I must agree though, the Marvel drawings aren't all that good...the Iron Man seems promising though, I'd like to see the end result.

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05-08-2008, 10:47 PM	#16
Rhapsody Flows Organization Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Don't you hate it when you write/type some info in a space provided, but then you run out of freakin Age: 13 Posts: 477 Rep Power: 1	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Hmm, a good start, though, since it's just Shiki's face, I really don't know how it'll turn out until it's finished. ^^" Last edited by Rhapsody Flows; 05-08-2008 at 11:16 PM.

05-09-2008, 06:03 AM	#18
Blue Sky ★It's So Wonderful ★ Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany. Age: 19 Posts: 2,578 Rep Power: 5	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku It's very good.You drew the pic in Kingdom Hearts style,am I right? That's why I won't say anything about his feet,body and arms. ;D 3/5. __________________ Thank you Zook for the sig More tags from the Spiral Dream Designs artists: L'Arachel from Fire Emblem Misa

05-09-2008, 09:16 AM	#19
Nelo Angelo He shall rise once more.. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: City Of The Ancients A.K.A The Forgotten City Posts: 3,136 Rep Power: 6	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Now that does look a little better. Impressive stuff. __________________ SO IT HAS BEEN WRITTEN... Nelo Angelo ...SO IT SHALL COME TO PASS.. *Lets Welcome Chaos!* *THE ENIGMA OF EXTREME*

05-09-2008, 08:34 PM	#21
Nelo Angelo He shall rise once more.. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: City Of The Ancients A.K.A The Forgotten City Posts: 3,136 Rep Power: 6	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku That competiton has ended though i thought.. __________________ SO IT HAS BEEN WRITTEN... Nelo Angelo ...SO IT SHALL COME TO PASS.. *Lets Welcome Chaos!* *THE ENIGMA OF EXTREME*

05-10-2008, 05:24 PM	#23
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: ?? Age: 15 Posts: 1,934 Rep Power: 4	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku The body looks great, nice job. 4/5. __________________ vBeautiful sig made by Kaz Avy made by me PSN ID: Arien_Blade 致命的な刃

05-10-2008, 05:59 PM	#25
monkeybutt Monkeybutt INC Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Monkeybutt INC Posts: 3,439 Rep Power: 10	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku The only thing that needs improvement is the face. =) Good job on the clothes! Your to the point in skill where you can start developing your own style. __________________ KHINSIDER.COM Project 2008

05-10-2008, 07:48 PM	#26
bubbles Organization Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 375 Rep Power: 0	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku very nice i give it 5 out of 5 __________________ ^ made by myself♥♥♥♥♥♥ and avvy made by myself♥♥♥♥♥♥ VAMPIRES AND HUMANS the new orginazation

05-10-2008, 07:59 PM	#27
InfiniteTwilight The World Begins With... Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a cereal box Posts: 1,302 Rep Power: 2	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Looks pretty good! Some stuff could use some work like the face, but still apretty pretty good. __________________ Revolutionaries wait For my head on a silver plate. Just a puppet on a lonely string Oh, who would ever want to be king? Dreaming of a Wonderful World Never EVER take my pancake recipe! But then I close my eyes and try to smile, I know things are bad and getting worse. But after all this, I can last a while. And then I'll Party, PARTY!

05-30-2008, 06:20 PM	#29
whtballerking13 Court Mage Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: The Gym Age: 15 Posts: 44 Rep Power: 0	Re: Twilight 93 Creations I have to say, I don't really like any part of it except for the hand that is coming out from the picture, if you are going to compy directly off of the guy from "the world ends with you", then you could have done a way beter job. It just looks to sloppy. that girl that is being added behind him looks weird. The marvel pictures look like junk that any body could through together while half asleep with a broken pencil in the middle of class. I know, I am a really hard critic, that is just the way i have always been sry __________________ Till the roof comes off, till the lights go out Till my legs give out, can’t shut my mouth. Till the smoke clears out - am I high? Perhaps I'ma rip this sht till my bone collapse. Till the roof comes off, till the lights go out Till my legs give out, can’t shut my mouth. Till the smoke clears out and my high burn out I'ma rip this sht till my bone collapse. --Eminem ft. Nate Dogg

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