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05-31-2006, 09:24 PM
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| Keyblade Wielder  Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wisc Age: 17 Gender: 
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Rep Power: 0   |  Poetry Let's make a Poetry thread!! We each post a poem we have written and then the next person rates it perhaps or comments what they like/dislike, ya know... ok I'll go first! The Life of Grass Sitting in the field all day, Watching all the young kids play. Tag, soccer, hide-and-seek, Passing a soccerball all the week. Tons of tiny shoes trampling, Ouch! One just hit me on the landing. The sun shining all its mass, all in the life of a blade of grass. hope you liked it!! :D EDIT: No this isn't a club just post and enjoy!! :D Last edited by Paopu_Fruit; 06-01-2006 at 06:43 PM. |
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05-31-2006, 11:58 PM
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| Keyblade Weilder  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Australia. Age: 15 Gender:
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Rep Power: 0  |  Re: Poetry Ok i'll try: The Thylacine In Tasmania, years ago, there was a animal, incredible so zoos took and kept but captivity meant many deaths. hunted by farmers who invaded your land, no-one offered you a helping hand. now that your gone, people regret but from the start, your fate was set. but thylacine, are few of you kind still in existance? reports of your kind do happen, but you have become a cryptozoology legend. if your species still roam, reveal youself only to kind people who will yet again let you live in your rightful home. hhow was that? it's about the Tasmanian Tiger, or thylacine
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06-01-2006, 12:01 AM
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| The Egotistical Bastard  Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Making Out With DT Cause He's So Damn Sexy =D Age: 20 Gender: 
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Rep Power: 10  | Re: Poetry cool i like them both may i try? or is this a club or something?
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06-01-2006, 12:13 AM
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| kiss the stars with me ★  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Burnin' down the highway skyline Age: 14 Gender:
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Rep Power: 6 | Re: Poetry OOOhhhh Mays me try, I make deep emo poems. Like this one.. It's raining The clouds are speaking to one another then they speak to me They say.. You are nothing, just a foolish girl. I look down, I say... I believe what you said, Why be something I am not?!? All I am is a speck of dirt on a beautiful window called The world. I do not belong here.. If i die, no one will give a tear.. Just a sigh of relief. I am just so... A L O N E
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06-01-2006, 10:38 PM
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Poetry yeah you can post anytime its not a club or anything ill edit this into the first one. Last edited by Paopu_Fruit; 06-01-2006 at 10:50 PM. |
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06-01-2006, 10:40 PM
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| kiss the stars with me ★ Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Burnin' down the highway skyline Age: 14 Gender:
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Rep Power: 6 | Re: Poetry Oh weeelll, But that is some good poetry.
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06-01-2006, 10:49 PM
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06-02-2006, 12:37 AM
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| Keyblade Weilder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Australia. Age: 15 Gender:
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Poetry me again!! Kin Of Fafnir Wisps of smoke among the mist tell the tale of a beast of scales. one that fears not humans, or any other beast. because that is on which it feeds. four footed, two wings, armoured body, and sails on the breeze. a mouthful of fangs, and a crested head. weapon of flame, fights to the death. the beast described is a dragon, the kin of Fafnir. The child of the dragon, the legend. 
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06-02-2006, 07:05 PM
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wisc Age: 17 Gender:
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Poetry nice! ill post another one. this one's not as good, i think. A new flower blooms in the day. Wind blowing like a crying baby. The sun smiles and laughs as it plays. Leaves talking and moving about, just maybe. Bees frolicking through the flowers. Clouds crying when they get hurt by others. Standing proud just like towers. The flowers staying with their mothers and brothers. Leaves tripping and falling to the ground. Wind getting up and leaving everyone, blowing things along the way. Pumpkin faces staring back at you, menacingly. Food always filling you up but still feeling empty. Bare trees shivering in the cold world. Snow resting on the grass. The flower closes in this mess. Until spring comes again and this winter will pass. |
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06-02-2006, 09:47 PM
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| Keyblade Weilder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Australia. Age: 15 Gender:
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Poetry yes me AGAIN: Rise and Fall Eons ago there were great reptiles, they ruled the skies, the sea, the land, but after eons, they fell to fate's hand. I will tell you of their long existance, and then of their great demise. first there was the Coeliophysis, fast and small along with the Plateosaurus, both relatives. They went on to be T-rex, Diplodocus and Brachiosaurus others branched off to be the Iguanodon and Ankylosaurus. Predators bore, some human-sized killers Like Deinonynchus and Velociraptor, armed with sickle-shaped claws. But some were giants, like T-rex, Gigiantosaurus, And the 50-ft Spinosaurus. But one day, somthing changed. A terrible thing happened, Dinosaurs everywhere were maimed, bones broken, the animals dying and suffocating- What was happening? Earth was restless, volcanos erupting, spewing ash into the air, causing rivers of fire. But that was just the start. A meteor, countless miles long, smashed into the Earth, darkness for long. That was the life and death of some of the dinosaurs, i say only some because the large ones perished, but the small ones took to the air-living on today. modern Hoatzin: 
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06-02-2006, 11:39 PM
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| Organization Member  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Classified Information Gender:
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Rep Power: 0  | Re: Poetry Nice , I guess I will post here too because I am bored. Fear of Angels You want to get away from the things that take away your pain You know that your heart goes deeper than its seems Like a spirit but one of light. I know I am afraid too if simple words come undone what will happen after today or tomorrow, You have brought me everything, things that I have not seen But the thing that I fear the most You may or my not understand this, But the thing that I fear the most, I have to admit it now the thing that I fear the most, Is that our lovelines will become hopessly tangled Falling toward the hearts of two angels
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06-03-2006, 04:52 AM
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| Organization Member  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: In a pineapple under the sea..? o.0 Age: 16 Gender:
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Rep Power: 3 | Re: Poetry Umm...ok...well, I'll have a go.. Dreamland A land without mysteries and lies, Of warm spring days And clear blue skies… Where children could just roam around Their parents knowing They are safe and sound… A place of happiness and joy Where sailors come and yell “Ahoy!” A place like that cannot be found, Look everywhere, above and below ground There’s no such place… Unless you are asleep… Meh, crappy poem but I just didn’t have any inspiration, I usually do better if I have some.
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06-03-2006, 05:18 AM
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| MAH NIGGAS  Join Date: Feb 2005 Gender:
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Rep Power: 7 | Re: Poetry I like it. -------------------- Heres my sorry excuse for a poem: The days are tough in and out Wake up, all you do is scream and shout. I dont know what you want from me, I try my hardest, but it just never will be. I know its hard, I know its tough, but some people have it worse. Some people dont have homes homes to live in, while others corpse lay in dirt. Even though you fustrated, even though your hurt, Better days lie ahead, so fight through the pain, cause it could be worse. I see the day, where we find the light, and days that end in better nights.
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06-03-2006, 05:42 AM
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Rep Power: 3 | Re: Poetry ^ It's good Trig. ^.^ (Fillermessagelimitfillerlalalalalafilling)
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06-03-2006, 10:26 PM
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| Keyblade Weilder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Australia. Age: 15 Gender:
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Poetry This is from Deltora Quest. It's stuck in my head.There are four evil things, an egg, a snake, one inside the body of a guy name Doran-who tried to stop the shadowlord's plan, and there's one buried under the palace where the young king & his friends live. Sisters four with poisoned breath, bring to the land a long, slow death But death comes swiftly if you dare to find each sisters hidden lair. Their songs like secret rivers flow to hold the peril deep below. But if at last their voices cease The land will find a final peace. 'final peace' is NOT happpiness and peace.
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