Poetry

[IF_IL_II_IP]

heres a shakespearean sonnet i wrote for english class

Sorrow’s Eyes

I dream of you, with hand in mine,
I see your face, as I sleep,
Through golden fields, on summers sky,
When I awake, my heart sits deep,
I used to know you like the back of my hand
Your chest would heave with pride if I were spoken of
Now you're shifting like the sand
'Till tonight I never knew the difference between comfort and love
I see your face, on river free,
I think of you, the times we spent,
It sails away, too summon me,
I miss the days, that heaven sent.
I long for you, here by my side,
Then dry the tears, from sorrows eyes.

[Paopu_Fruit]

so i wrote this in about 8th grade summer

What is Red?
Red is a cardinal
Starting to take flight.
Red is a flower
That smells alright.
Red is the anger
Of the buzzing bees.
Red is embarassment
Right after you sneeze.
Red is a ruby
As red as blood.
Red is a strawberry
Dropped in the mud.
Red is the nailpolish
You put on your toe.
Red is the sign
Before it changes to go.

[LuvKyou]

Ok, this is one I had to write for and English exercise while we were learning about poetry.

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Quickly

Quckly the time passes by when having fun
Quickly the moon gives way to the sun
Quickly the rain falls from the skies
Quickly the cat runs after mice
Quickly the shadows disappear
Quickly the dog runs back over here
Quick is the cheetah, running after prey
But quickest of all is a very fun day!

Heh..not much but I like it.

[IBeatSephiroth]

Can you guess who this is about?

Like a ghost you are
you travel silent to Midgar

Armed with a shotgun,
you are a great fighter.

A red cape/jacket you wear
you have deep red eyes
and long black hair.

You aid Cloud,
and as a friend,
You helped bring behamut
to its end.

You are intelligent,
and know more than all

and that is why i think your cool.


Vincent

[LuvKyou]

Lmao, Vincent obviously.


(fillermessagetooshort, filller)

[chaywa]

A Message from God to Humanity – Losing My Religion

Would you listen even when I told you?
What on earth was I to say?
Should I make you stop what you’re doing?
Or make myself go away?

I can’t take the pressure anymore,
All life is crumbling away
Your actions are causing annihilation
And you’re doing it everyday

I thought you would be perfect
A happy mixture of difference
But my creation is ruined
I have now lost my omnibenevolence

You all seem to defy me
I have done nothing to you
I even gave you the power to live
I am the creator and that is the truth

It’s not my duty to be there
For all of you to need me
Although your lack of motivation
Suggests that I am the only one who believes

So put down your guns,
Put down your oil and end this silly feud,
I can’t continue to control,
So I’m handing control over to you

Your life is now in your hands
What else is there to say?
I can’t stop what you are doing
So quite simply, I’m going away.

Pour Moi

Always good to see some poets here...

[kulav123]

A poem i wrote. Please tell me what you thought of it.

Why must we suffer?
Why must we die?
Lose our loved ones?
To that place in the sky?
Cold-hearted people,
Do cold-hearted things
Like killing and hurting
Our people, our pride.
We must all stand together.
Beneath the Red, White, and Blue.
To stand and fight,
And not back down.
We must fight against evil,
We must fight against terror.
To save our people,
To save our pride.

[Toasty!]

cool. For a poem. Im not into poems..........or reading

[Enchanted Rose]

I would give it a 4/10. It's not really good, but there's nothing much wrong with it.

[violent_anger]

reminds me of a few things ive read in the past

1. every decade or part of time is dominated by something, this decade is dominated by fear of terroism and patriotism, which is why you shaould name your band with a patriotic support our troops type name.

2. i am the red, white, and blue, none may reach freedom except through me.

3. if we lived in a worl with less suffering, lets say the worst possible thing that could happen is you get a sprianed ankle, then eventually, people would still complain. some people even get sprained ankles twice in their life,a cruel joke of god no doubt. if there was less suffering, then those people would be whinny little @$$3$ by our standard.



just some things to think about

[CorruptedAngel4]

Originally Posted by Soras Dad

cool. For a poem. Im not into poems..........or reading

same opinion here, but really that was deep. like the kind of rip off your head because im so angry at the world deep.................please dont kill me

[Mr Despair]

It's been a while since I wrote something...strangely, I only get inspired when I'm I my English classes. this poem seems emo compared to the rest, no I am not emo, nor want to be. :3

What Heartbroken Really Means

Weeping eyes, a broken heart,
The words "I love you" are now a sad remark,
Broken promises, a polluted kiss,
I fell in love with a girl who doesn't even know who she is,
Sham love letter, loveless nights,
I wish I'd never met you with all my might!,
Sour memories, a poisoned hold of hands,
Dead you are to me, that's where our relationship stands.

[Electropop]

okay that was sad...very good...you have a gift

[Ninja Usagi]

The last line reminded me of Yoda. o.o''
Its a good poem o.o

[Felix]

I really liked it was good but I don't make poems just read them but you should continue making them and I hope you do. But it is kinda weird that you get inspired in English class oh well. BUtit was kinda sad but not the saddest one I have seen so far.