Fighting in Built Up Areas

[Rich]

With text:


Without text:


Remember, my third tag in forever. =( I'm liking the one without text better.

And credit to Sparkle Motion for the stock.

[Prodigy]

I figured you got it from Ray.
In any case, the one without text is much better, I'd say.
Add some purple to bring out her eyes and give a nice variation blatant, vivid blue.
I like where you're going with it, though.

[xxriku]

I prefer the one without text, too. I would just add more to it because its lookin' a bit empty. Its good so far, keep adding.

[darkweilder]

w/o text > w text....the light source imo is too strong for that bright background. is the bluring saturated? or are those filters? looks nice so just wondering. but yeah throw in some colors and it'll be better

[C4E]

Off to a good start.
Is that an outer glow over the rectangles behind the stock though?
not workin too well. if you could remove the light around them that would be good.
also try and add a foreground and put in some light purples like diesel said.

[Rich]

v3:


v4:
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o...eka1v4copy.png

v5:


I tried working with the light source, but the only way to tone it down is to remove it altogether, which didn't look good. =\

[C4E]

soft round brush in black over the light source and set it to soft light.
Then set up a light source up in front of her face and to the right so the light source matches the stocks lighting.
I think you should have kept the original colors but just added in some purple and yellow elements to it.
& the left side doesnt really match anymore. i think you should just do something small at the bottom over one of the shoulders for the foreground.