My First Amv

-*panda*- · 04/28/06, 04:18 AM

MY FIRST ONE COMPLETED !!!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3XGAlKpUNnc

Saixs' WRATH · 04/28/06, 04:36 AM

I liked it. The somg went with what you were donig but I m not an expert on that stuff.

~~Eclipse~~ · 04/28/06, 04:50 AM

-*waits for chaywa's review*-

i will ediit with my review later ^.^

**chaywa** · 04/28/06, 05:59 PM

The song quality itself is absolutely terrible, it makes at times difficult to fully understand the words or even the beat pattern...

That aside, i enjoyed the first chorus actually, just work on fade timings a little (tad early and a little random) but otherwise OK, for the drum beat stuff check out GTXs new vid, perfect example of how the apparent (aka really audible) drim beats can be used to a superb level. THe ASAS clip for the chorus was slow, way too slow for my liking, and the transition was flashy, too flashy imo but the short (sadly) fight scene was good. Good timing into KH2 opening sequence, but i felt it was a little slow and long (ie not necessary for Hollow Bastion clips imo). Another flashy transition which didn't look that great but the next Sora scenes (despite early) were pretty good, flowed with the music quite well i thought. By the time the chorus came in, the long clip was really poor imo, the movement was slow and didn't flow with the music imo, same with the Namine scene from KH2 opening. The sudden shirt clips before Roxas were OK, more of them would work quite well imo. THe first part of Roxas was good, however the length of clip was off putting as you would expect the clip to change when the rocky-beat came in...the DD recap stuff afterwards wasn't necessary i thought. Flashy transition again (try and keep them simple they look better imo) albeit the HB clip was good. THe ending with Namine, Roxas was abit meh, a little slow for the beat but OK (trailer following methinks). Try not to keep credits when the main credits are rolling imo...alway do them afterwards b/c they look better imo.

For a first that was generally OK, timing was pretty good albeit some clips were slow and long and the flashy transitions didn't work too well 6.2/10, good but needs some work :D which i'm sure you'll gain through time and experience :D

Oh and TSK don't wait for me, i'm departing for 6 weeks in a few days time and i doubt people will want to wait that long for reviews...XD

~~Eclipse~~ · 04/28/06, 08:29 PM

^ i know, but for right now you're here xD

R o x a s · 04/29/06, 01:21 AM

its a really good first try...to say

soraskeyblader · 05/01/06, 02:22 AM

Not bad, 7/10

04/28/06, 04:18 AM	#1
-panda- Disney Soldier Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: in the forest. o iz that bamboo yum Age: 17 Posts: 15 Rep Power: 3	My First Amv MY FIRST ONE COMPLETED !!!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3XGAlKpUNnc

04/28/06, 04:36 AM	#2
Saixs' WRATH Twilight Knight Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In Hell Age: 19 Posts: 835 Rep Power: 3	Re: My First Amv I liked it. The somg went with what you were donig but I m not an expert on that stuff.

04/28/06, 04:50 AM	#3
~~Eclipse~~ Banned Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In a crater of love. Age: 17 Posts: 7,585 Rep Power: 0	Re: My First Amv -waits for chaywa's review- i will ediit with my review later ^.^

04/28/06, 05:59 PM	#4
chaywa (E)motion Isn't Meaning Join Date: May 2005 Location: Chamber of Guf Age: 19 Posts: 5,487 Rep Power: 12	Re: My First Amv The song quality itself is absolutely terrible, it makes at times difficult to fully understand the words or even the beat pattern... That aside, i enjoyed the first chorus actually, just work on fade timings a little (tad early and a little random) but otherwise OK, for the drum beat stuff check out GTXs new vid, perfect example of how the apparent (aka really audible) drim beats can be used to a superb level. THe ASAS clip for the chorus was slow, way too slow for my liking, and the transition was flashy, too flashy imo but the short (sadly) fight scene was good. Good timing into KH2 opening sequence, but i felt it was a little slow and long (ie not necessary for Hollow Bastion clips imo). Another flashy transition which didn't look that great but the next Sora scenes (despite early) were pretty good, flowed with the music quite well i thought. By the time the chorus came in, the long clip was really poor imo, the movement was slow and didn't flow with the music imo, same with the Namine scene from KH2 opening. The sudden shirt clips before Roxas were OK, more of them would work quite well imo. THe first part of Roxas was good, however the length of clip was off putting as you would expect the clip to change when the rocky-beat came in...the DD recap stuff afterwards wasn't necessary i thought. Flashy transition again (try and keep them simple they look better imo) albeit the HB clip was good. THe ending with Namine, Roxas was abit meh, a little slow for the beat but OK (trailer following methinks). Try not to keep credits when the main credits are rolling imo...alway do them afterwards b/c they look better imo. For a first that was generally OK, timing was pretty good albeit some clips were slow and long and the flashy transitions didn't work too well 6.2/10, good but needs some work :D which i'm sure you'll gain through time and experience :D Oh and TSK don't wait for me, i'm departing for 6 weeks in a few days time and i doubt people will want to wait that long for reviews...XD

04/28/06, 08:29 PM	#5
~~Eclipse~~ Banned Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In a crater of love. Age: 17 Posts: 7,585 Rep Power: 0	Re: My First Amv ^ i know, but for right now you're here xD

04/29/06, 01:21 AM	#6
R o x a s Warrior of Light Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Twilight Town A.K.A New York Age: 17 Posts: 633 Rep Power: 0	Re: My First Amv its a really good first try...to say

05/01/06, 02:22 AM	#7
soraskeyblader Keyblade Novice Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 53 Rep Power: 0	Re: My First Amv Not bad, 7/10

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