my first project

please be as brutally honost as possible it has originally for a square enix forum i made but the forum never got a member other then me

[The-True-Unknown]

the text needs to be changed, the 2 pictures dont go together, and theres no real background.
6/10 sorry

[EverlastingLight]

Ooh... *pokes* Yeah, if possible, change the text a bit. Kinda mixed up the spelling. Over all, good job! 8/10.

[darkweilder]

Horrible spelling and the pics are not matching at all and the bg....well there isn't a bg that would have looked much better. the font of the text is also bad. and the line the light beam whatever you call it is annoying, it goes right through Tidus's face and really messes it up. you didn't even attempt to make the pics look like they belonged together. -____-
5/10

yeah like i said it was my first i didnt really know what i was doing this was a while ago i made it with microsoft paint i now have a better program im stil tryin to figure out how to use just wanted to see how bad i actually did ill post a bit of my later work and ill ask if i did any better now then back then witch is like i dotn know two years diffrence