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Old November 7th, 2009, 07:37 PM   #1
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cnc plz.

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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:23 PM   #2
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darken the edges/parts of the focal for some sexy depth. lookin hot so far.

can i wear? =DD
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:28 PM   #3
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ok I'll fix that.
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then you can wear :D
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:49 PM   #4
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Your 'darker' one actually looks lighter, aha.

I'm not too keep about how sharp the white floral bit is. Super distracting.
otherwise, I like it, and version one is best.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 09:59 PM   #5
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oh man what is that on the ears in the third one D:


yo pretty bangin dude.
Now if you got rid of the dup area on the left in the second, it would be the best.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 10:07 PM   #6
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oh man what is that on the ears in the third one D:
i burn tooled it to try to make the edges darker like salty said :<


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yo pretty bangin dude.
Now if you got rid of the dup area on the left in the second, it would be the best.
If I cropped it, or if I took it out?
cause V1 is the same as V2 but without the dup.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 10:19 PM   #7
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nice job
maybe take down the white flowers (cuz i dont think Raiden is the type of flowery guy) and work on colors
its all great though
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Old November 7th, 2009, 10:28 PM   #8
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I just changed up the first post with the O/G V1 and a cropped one.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 01:32 AM   #9
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Needs to be less messy. as it is, there's no real thought into the composition, just a bunch of random effects you hoped would look good.
colors are messy as well. needs to be refined. pick a color scheme and stay with it. curves, levels. instead of layers of colors set to lighten/screen, work your colors into your tag naturally.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 07:07 AM   #10
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awesome but the oversharpened floral designs are too much.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 07:30 AM   #11
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Remove the thing up by his mouth.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 06:49 PM   #12
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the flowery rainbow effects just don't seem to match the stock.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 07:14 PM   #13
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do people actually pay attention to the stock's emotions?
i mean there are like 1020935 other tags that don't match the stock's feeling/mood.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 07:43 PM   #14
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did you pay attention to the stock's emotions?
obviously not

drop the pretentious attitude. the tag is a mess, and the effects you've used are overwhelming.
composition. take a crash course in it.
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Old November 8th, 2009, 07:57 PM   #15
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do people actually pay attention to the stock's emotions?
i mean there are like 1020935 other tags that don't match the stock's feeling/mood.
and they look just as bad.
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