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| oh fun | ![]() ![]() cnc plz. Last edited by Davey; November 7th, 2009 at 10:24 PM. |
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| I don't like you. | darken the edges/parts of the focal for some sexy depth. lookin hot so far. can i wear? =DD |
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| | #3 |
| oh fun | ok I'll fix that. ... then you can wear :D |
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| relative power | Your 'darker' one actually looks lighter, aha. I'm not too keep about how sharp the white floral bit is. Super distracting. otherwise, I like it, and version one is best. |
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| SRPA ftw Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Philly Posts: 2,416
Rep Power: 6 ![]() ![]() Level: 16 EXP: | oh man what is that on the ears in the third one D: yo pretty bangin dude. Now if you got rid of the dup area on the left in the second, it would be the best. |
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| oh fun | i burn tooled it to try to make the edges darker like salty said :< Quote:
cause V1 is the same as V2 but without the dup. | |
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| Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 183
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | nice job maybe take down the white flowers (cuz i dont think Raiden is the type of flowery guy) and work on colors its all great though |
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| oh fun | I just changed up the first post with the O/G V1 and a cropped one. |
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| Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 3,787
Rep Power: 8 ![]() Level: 16 EXP: | Needs to be less messy. as it is, there's no real thought into the composition, just a bunch of random effects you hoped would look good. colors are messy as well. needs to be refined. pick a color scheme and stay with it. curves, levels. instead of layers of colors set to lighten/screen, work your colors into your tag naturally. |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | awesome but the oversharpened floral designs are too much. |
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| | #11 |
| Plat. | Remove the thing up by his mouth. |
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| I Tried Hard to Work It Out | the flowery rainbow effects just don't seem to match the stock. |
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| oh fun | do people actually pay attention to the stock's emotions? i mean there are like 1020935 other tags that don't match the stock's feeling/mood. |
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| Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 3,787
Rep Power: 8 ![]() Level: 16 EXP: | did you pay attention to the stock's emotions? obviously not drop the pretentious attitude. the tag is a mess, and the effects you've used are overwhelming. composition. take a crash course in it. |
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| I Tried Hard to Work It Out | |
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