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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:08 AM   #1
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Default these pretzels are making me thirsty
cause they're SALTY

Meh made this based off the tag salty gave me. I think it's meh, i didnt know what to do :\



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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:10 AM   #2
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focal could use some sharpening imo, and overall it could use some depth.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:14 AM   #3
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focal could use some sharpening imo, and overall it could use some depth.
I reckon it could use more detail.

Noich, have you thought of a carrear as a critique. i have read nothing but bad reveiws coming from you. dont get me wrong, sometimes i agree with you
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:22 AM   #4
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its because i don't see things as they are, i see them for what they could be.

now if you wanna ask me anything else do so through vm's. i hate off topic discussion.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:25 AM   #5
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new! versions of sig now added.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:29 AM   #6
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some blurring on the background could add some depth. which would be nice.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:36 AM   #7
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It definitely needs some more interesting effects. But I like what you did with it so far <3 Thanks.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:38 AM   #8
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and again, im whipping these out fast, another update
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what did you do differently?

:/ im having a tough time figuring it out.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:45 AM   #10
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Blurred the b/g.
It's mostly in the corners, and you can see it on the right more.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:49 AM   #11
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ah ok well then it looks much better.

but as salty said, it could use more interesting fx.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 08:55 AM   #12
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Try running some curves through it and try a b&w version.
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Old November 7th, 2009, 09:46 AM   #13
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annnndd again. new onees.
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