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Old October 30th, 2009, 04:22 AM   #1
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Old October 30th, 2009, 01:36 PM   #2
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cool idea but the execution is poor

it's the small things that collectively make or break a piece

i would suggest using a grid, or just aligning the text properly, get rid of the smudging or whatever it is on the text, and get some better blending happening between the stock and the background

every element should correlate to another
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Old October 30th, 2009, 05:54 PM   #3
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i like the stock, but i feel like it doesn't blend well with the colorful effects.
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Old October 31st, 2009, 10:21 PM   #4
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cool idea but the execution is poor

it's the small things that collectively make or break a piece

i would suggest using a grid, or just aligning the text properly, get rid of the smudging or whatever it is on the text, and get some better blending happening between the stock and the background

every element should correlate to another
I hear ya, any one part that stands out better than the rest of it? Don't want to revise it with a shitty element.

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i like the stock, but i feel like it doesn't blend well with the colorful effects.
I'll try playing the contrast on both thanks for the input.

Anyone else?
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Old October 31st, 2009, 10:26 PM   #5
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I think I see where you were trying to go with the font and it was a good idea, but it wasn't executed so well..
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Old November 1st, 2009, 02:32 AM   #6
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any suggestions on improvement, I'm open to anything at this point.
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Old November 1st, 2009, 06:47 PM   #7
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Well the overall downside to this tag is the FHS. Just make the stock smaller and integrate those solid colors you have in the tag already. As for the text, I would say keep it, just make it smaller as well. Lastly I think if you offset the stock a bit, you would have more room to integrate some techniques.
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