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Old October 29th, 2009, 01:55 PM   #1
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Newest sig. I'm about to put it in a competition, but I'm not sure which version:

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V3:


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Old October 29th, 2009, 02:35 PM   #2
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ugh, sorry i can't tell the difference. :c

it's ok but that green blob thing is really out of place. and also that shape on the right side is meh.

i'm not really sure what you should add to it. oh well.
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Old October 29th, 2009, 05:28 PM   #3
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Hmm for some odd reason, I can't see the flow but im guessing it's going upwards.

V3 i think but the middle bit might be a bit bright. But thats probably my monitor. And the green... butterfly(?) it a bit random for me.
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Old October 30th, 2009, 12:23 AM   #4
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Okay, I will get rid of the blob, and maybe make the "shape on the right's" layer at 10% Opacity.

And I really didn't get a good flow going, now that I think about it. It was supposed to flow down to the left, with the flower. :\
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Old October 30th, 2009, 01:35 AM   #5
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Waaaaaayyyy to crowded around the focal.
Clean it up a lot it's really messy.
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Old October 30th, 2009, 06:21 AM   #6
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There's no flow and the quality seems low to me.
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Old October 30th, 2009, 06:25 AM   #7
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I think... remove the effects over Aqua, specifically the effects over the right arm, because it makes it look generally messy, and really doesn't blend in at all.With the over effects gone, focus on something in the background, and blend it from there I think
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Old October 30th, 2009, 09:06 AM   #8
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Horrible stock quality probably due to whatever blurred effect and everything looks choppy and distracting.

Remove the foreground effects, maybe fade her arms to the sides and work from there.
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Old October 30th, 2009, 05:50 PM   #9
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the flow is, weird. i don't like effects.
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Old November 1st, 2009, 03:25 AM   #10
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I think I might scrap it if I can't get it to look better. Thanks for the cnc, guys.

EDIT:

I think I got it to look better.



And I tried blue.



I honestly like the crimson version more, so I'm going with it.

Cnc again, if you feel like it.
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Old November 1st, 2009, 03:32 PM   #11
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where is the difference between the three?
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Old November 1st, 2009, 03:37 PM   #12
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i like the blue version more. 'cause it matches aqua's hair color. eh just sayin. :D
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Old November 1st, 2009, 04:12 PM   #13
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The sigs are quite pretty, but the stock seems to be low quality to me.
However, the blue one is my fave. :]
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Old November 1st, 2009, 06:41 PM   #14
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Take off that high intensity of light to the left of the render. And you might want to add some soft colored gradients on different blending modes.
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