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Old October 27th, 2009, 06:34 AM   #1
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i got the stocks and resources through Kaz's pac( thank you btw =] )
i didnt read any tuts, this was just the knowlegde i still had of graphics
unfortunately im stuck...any suggestions? open to all comments and critiques =]
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Old October 27th, 2009, 06:35 AM   #2
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For your first in two years, its good, but that yellow orb thing is quite distracting, remove it.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 08:32 AM   #3
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Sharpen the stock to emphasize it.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 01:47 PM   #4
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Lower the opacity of your light source, sharpen the stock, add a little bit more color to the background, and sharpen the stock.

It's looking good though ;D
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Old October 27th, 2009, 06:01 PM   #5
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needs more depth and a less awkward light source. also sharpen the stock.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 11:38 PM   #6
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alright v2 is up
any better?
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Old October 27th, 2009, 11:41 PM   #7
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V2 is looking better

I'd say set your light source layer to lighten or soft light and maybe put some catchy text in the background
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Old October 27th, 2009, 11:49 PM   #8
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V2 is looking better

I'd say set your light source layer to lighten or soft light and maybe put some catchy text in the background
the light source is on lighten and i tried soft light but it just blended in to the BG -__-

and im horrible when it comes to fonts and choosing the right ones for a tag, thats why i always tend to just leave it without a text -__-
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Old October 27th, 2009, 11:55 PM   #9
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the light source is on lighten and i tried soft light but it just blended in to the BG -__-
hmm well try having a more saturated yellow, that tends to help a lot when you have a layer on light. Or you could try a dark yellow and put it on color dodge.


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and im horrible when it comes to fonts and choosing the right ones for a tag, thats why i always tend to just leave it without a text -__-
yeah I'm with you on this one

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Old October 30th, 2009, 08:40 PM   #10
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the light source is on lighten and i tried soft light but it just blended in to the BG -__-

and im horrible when it comes to fonts and choosing the right ones for a tag, thats why i always tend to just leave it without a text -__-
That's what a light source is supposed to do.
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