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| Moderator | or just boring? ![]() |
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| You there, i can see you naked Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: in a place Age: 18 Posts: 4,640
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently playing: MAss Effect and Two Worlds. Level: 31 EXP: | This isn't all that bad, a simple look is never bad, and you pulled it off here, just one thing that bugs me is the color you chose for the circle, a lighter shade of color would of sufficed. |
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| Tetsu<333 | The stock needs more contrast and I don't really like the borders other than that I think it's alright for a simple piece |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: En Jay. Age: 19 Posts: 571
Rep Power: 3 ![]() ![]() ![]() Level: EXP: | Make the stock smaller or the canvas larger. You've got a good idea, but you kind of what to expand and make it a bit more vivid. Add to the foreground some more. Its ok to overlap the stock just a little, long as we can still see it, eyes go there first, and it doesn't stray from the general flow. |
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| judge magister daniel | looks a little boring tbh |
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| Moderator | don't know why i even asked for crit on this, i don't even like it myself, haha. thanks for all your comments =) |
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| Member | I believe you are quite the Van Gogh. |
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| Moderator | i taught him everything he knows |
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