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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:30 AM   #1
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or just boring?

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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:33 AM   #2
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This isn't all that bad, a simple look is never bad, and you pulled it off here, just one thing that bugs me is the color you chose for the circle, a lighter shade of color would of sufficed.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:33 AM   #3
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or just boring?

It is a little to small imo, I have to squint to see it good. I would remove the splatter brush, but that is just me.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:50 AM   #4
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The stock needs more contrast and I don't really like the borders

other than that I think it's alright for a simple piece
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Old October 27th, 2009, 03:48 AM   #5
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Make the stock smaller or the canvas larger.
You've got a good idea, but you kind of what to expand and make it a bit more vivid.

Add to the foreground some more. Its ok to overlap the stock just a little, long as we can still see it, eyes go there first, and it doesn't stray from the general flow.
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looks a little boring tbh
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Old October 27th, 2009, 12:23 PM   #7
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don't know why i even asked for crit on this, i don't even like it myself, haha.
thanks for all your comments =)
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Old October 28th, 2009, 02:47 AM   #8
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I believe you are quite the Van Gogh.
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Old October 28th, 2009, 02:49 AM   #9
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