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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:11 AM   #1
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has potential yes?

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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:12 AM   #2
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I like the reflection effect with the stock and the color works well but it's seems a bit too dark to me...
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:29 AM   #3
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Smudging is good, negative space is good, but I am not liking the flame looking things in the bottom. My eyes are drawn right to them, and not the girl. Maybe blur it to give it more dept.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:33 AM   #4
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i think the depth is perfect.

but i think you should add a little bit more lighting.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:48 AM   #5
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Yeah I'm still working with lighting

how bout this one guys

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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:50 AM   #6
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has potential yes?

cnc
Tutorial yes?
I'd love you that much more xD.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:52 AM   #7
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Tutorial yes?
I'd love you that much more xD.
those always take me forever

but eh I guess if enough people want it xD

I might work on the smudging some more
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:55 AM   #8
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personally, i'd play with high pass, levels and increase the saturation just a tiiiinnnyyyy bit, just to add a little more depth, it's looking a tad too soft for me. other than that i like it, good job.

(not really feeling the second, sorry, bahaha.)
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Old October 27th, 2009, 02:59 AM   #9
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personally, i'd play with high pass, levels and increase the saturation just a tiiiinnnyyyy bit, just to add a little more depth, it's looking a tad too soft for me. other than that i like it, good job.

(not really feeling the second, sorry, bahaha.)
the meaning of this eludes me

lol soft as in I need more sharpened areas?
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Old October 27th, 2009, 03:02 AM   #10
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the meaning of this eludes me
new layer>apply image>filter>other>high pass>soft light (maybe reduce the opacity.)

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lol soft as in I need more sharpened areas?
soft as in i think it needs a little more contrast. although, i do quite like the softness, lol.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 03:11 AM   #11
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Yeah I'm still working with lighting

how bout this one guys


I like this one much more than the first one. But the heart looks like you drew it with the eraser tool. It needs to look not so pixally*for lack of a better word*.
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Old October 27th, 2009, 03:13 AM   #12
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^Yeah I have horrible drawing skills ._.

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new layer>apply image>filter>other>high pass>soft light (maybe reduce the opacity.)



soft as in i think it needs a little more contrast. although, i do quite like the softness, lol.
oh wow what a nifty technique

alright v2:

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Old October 27th, 2009, 05:16 AM   #13
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^contrast contrast contrast. i'm just a freak for contrast =D
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Old October 27th, 2009, 11:56 AM   #14
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v1 looks much better than v2

would be cooler if you thought of something else instead of duping the stock but it's still good i guess


and please don't add anymore contrast
whoever says it needs more contrast is either an idiot or needs to adjust their monitor

the contrast and brightness is perfect as is
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Old October 27th, 2009, 06:23 PM   #15
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Why isn't C4strife all over this?

V1 is the best imo. Simple but has a very pleasing and dynamic focal. I get an Eli vibe to it..
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