this one kind of sucks

[PLR]

a lot
but I haven't made anything in a whiiiiiile.


- Needs some color
- Better lighting
- Some cleaning


What else?

[Iridium]

The effect that you used on her arm can go; not to mention sharpening up her face a little bit (but I assume that's what you meant by "cleaning"). Other then that it's not too shabby c:

[Pablo]

oh man not the wind (?) filter D:
its gotta go, it looks awful

[PLR]

Originally Posted by Pablo

oh man not the wind (?) filter D:
its gotta go, it looks awful

fuck you man i like da wind
i kind of figured it wasn't going to fly

It looks OK. but her lips look HUGE!

She has huge lips. This is somehow my fault? Oh yeah, I punched her face when she used to much teeth.

The effect that you used on her arm can go; not to mention sharpening up her face a little bit (but I assume that's what you meant by "cleaning"). Other then that it's not too shabby c:

Thanks for the input, bro. o/

[Iridium]

Thanks for the input, bro. o/

\o

Anytime mang.

[Salty]

Wind filter is veeery bad. It makes the stock look horrible D:

Mhhm, better lighting for sure, that lighting looks like too distracting, not to mention huge.
It also needs some more entertaining effects. It's pretty flat at the moment, get creative and spice it up.

I'd personally darken it up and add contrast, but that's just me since I prefer having strong lighting in dark tags =/